This story will be told in an entirely third person perspective I do not have the confidence to tell a story from first person.
This is also to help me with my grammar skills since I know my grammar is the stuff of legends by god I know I will get insulted but please help me learn :)....that was also the main reason I put this idea off for a year or so.
Sorry if I misuse my commas sadly I\'m just really bad with my grammar....go easy on me very sensitive person.
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In a very noisy and unpleasant tavern filled with joyous cries, lewd comments made by very unpleasant individuals, and various unlikable characters who could rightly be called bandits a brawl was happening.
In the middle of the crowd stood 2 men brawling one was a very big man covered in scars and muscles who had a pissed and drunk expression on his unsightly face. On the other side stood a man with emerald green hair and hazel eyes with white skin and messy hair with sharp eyes. (authors note: This is our MC obviously and he is going to be snarky and completely straightforward no info gathering just to the point brutal and vicious...main weapon is a great-sword and he will be based off my various RPG characters in games)
Locking horns for some stupid argument about who could drink more they started beating each other\'s faces in. The green haired man was swaying left and right and under avoiding the muscled mans clumsy strikes, occasionally throwing out a punch making the muscled man gasp for air each time. (authors note: Yes he is an OP MC and no I will not give out stats and I will say this the world is his playground and I will write scenario\'s where he shows off)
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Muscled man: \"Stop moving it\'s hard to hit ya\"
Green haired Youth: \"You\'d never hit me in a million years you clumsy oaf and tell you what if you can hit me even once I\'ll buy you a beer\"
Muscled man: \"Why you! I\'ll make you eat those words boys get in here don\'t give him anymore space to run\"
Green haired Youth: \"advantage of numbers eh...well I suppose it won\'t help you regardless\"
As the green haired youth said this the muscled man darted forward and with a right hook he.....missed. Everyone was bewildered suddenly he wasn\'t there, the muscled man felt a presence behind him and before he could say a word his vision went dark.
Green haired Youth: \'Dumb guy better get my sword and leave before his friends decide to stain my clothes with their blood\'
Green haired Youth: \"Barkeep charge this man for any reparations and my beverage!\" The youth laughed loudly as he walked out toward a fork in the road.
Green haired Youth: \' Cmon Aeden pull yourself together...into the dark and forboding forest filled with dangerous beasts and adventure...or the kingdom to my left so I can join the local adventurers guild.
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Thus ends the first chapters please help me fix any grammar I will also use spell check to make sure....also that last bit isn\'t a poll type thing no that is my excuse for giving his name out.
To be entirely honest just writing this is extremely stressful as I prepare for hate comments.