I have been trying to puzzle out the ideal blurb for way too long and in the end, I think I'm just going to ask y'all about what you think- because I'm pretty much unsure on this. I did inform you in the last poll that I'd be holding one for the blurb, but sorry if this annoys you.
Writing a blurb for this story is tricky, mainly because of how hard it is to explain the essence of the story in under a hundred words.
But I gave it a try (two tries actually), do let me know which one you prefer or if you have a better alternative to offer.
Blurb #1 - Old blurb
A new adventure beckons!
Watch how Doctor Ryan Kimura, a skilled surgical oncologist and his patient Sophie find themselves reborn in the arcane realm of Alecdoria and navigate their unfamiliar surroundings, now as twins!
Stolen from its rightful author, this tale is not meant to be on Amazon; report any sightings.
Male lead? Female lead? We've got both! A heartfelt slice-of-life tale, Isekai Twins is set in a world brimming with magic to master and mysteries to unravel aplenty.
Laugh a little. Cry a little. And hopefully, at the end of the journey- leave with your heart a little warmer than it was before.
Blurb #2- New blurb (testing it out)
Dr. Ryan Kimura, a skilled surgical oncologist, finds himself confronted by the bitter sting of reality following an operation on his patient Sophie, a young orphan with an incurable illness. Overwhelmed by grief, Kimura finds himself on the hospital's rooftop, screaming out in fury at the skies, at the heavens and most of all, at his own inability to save the lives he had sworn to protect.
Only to meet with a severe repercussion- the intervention of a spectral being retaliating against him, sending him plummeting down the hospital's rooftop.
In an unexpected twist of fate, the story that seemingly ended in a tragedy on Earth begins anew in an arcane land, as the former doctor and patient find themselves reborn as twins!
Follow along their journey as they aim to make the most of their second chance in a land abound with magic and mystery!
===> This one took me literally forever to come up with and took like half a dozen iterations, but please if you have any improvements or suggestions, do let me know.