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Iron Hands Journey
Chapter 1 "The old dwarf"

Chapter 1 "The old dwarf"

After a blinding white light I regained the ability to see and what i saw was overwhelming

the market place no the whole city

is build in a canyon carved in one side of the canyon the buildings had a somewhat blackish color not a single building is build all buildings are carved out of the wall

Walking to the other side of the market I noticed a map and i begun to look for the training's hall

according to the map the city is build around the market at the edge and a Fortress in the back of the city after around 5 min I found what I was looking for the training's hall is in the fortress with that

information i begun to walk

While looking around I noticed most people are human but dwarfs are also present.

Players are there but in small numbers and the gear seems somewhat expensive i hope i didn’t start in a high level zone after 15 min of walk I reached the training's hall and after looking around I noticed the instructor an old dwarf with many scars and burns as well enough muscles to crush any newbie with one hand.

“hello I m hear to learn the art of battle in order to get ready for the world outside of the walls of this city”

the dwarf snorted “You don't even have a beard go home and help your mother with cooking until you reach the age where you can learn to fight”

I shouted angry “I m not a kid and I’m hear to learn “ after that the world around me went white

and my whole body screamed in pain after 10 min I regained my senses

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the dwarf snorted again “ only one punch ... leave the training's hall until you reach manhood ”

I looked angry at the old dwarf behind him I noticed a huge amount of broken training equipment

“if  I’m not enough to battle maybe I can help to repair the broken stuff behind you I don’t have the skill but if you show me I’m sure i can do it”

The dwarf looked at my with wondering eyes “why would you do that ?“

“I want to learn to fight if I can't learn from you I watch others while helping that would be payment enough …...well something to eat would be nice”

the dwarf laughed “ OK I show you how to repair the training equipment and if you finished I give you something to eat”

he reached inside one of his pocket and give me a book with the title “repairs for dummies” “here learn the skill than begin”

I think the game hates me well a skill is a skill

Repair beginner LvL 1 (0%) learned

“touch the broken sword and say repair that's it after your mana is depleted get a wooden sword practice on one of the targets until your mana is full”

after a short moment he added with an evil smile “I will hit you while you swing the sword your body is to soft you need to learn to endure pain”

and so the days of pain begun

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that's the first chapter i have the story for the first Volume i only need to flesh it out and translate it to the best of my ability  

it would be a great help if i could get some tips and feedback

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