Its afterschool and it is time for me to uphold my side of the bargain for losing against Saya in our earlier argument. Time for a date basically the first one I would have so far with this girl. As we walk out of school holding hands I can already feel the seething anger turning into vapour and coagulating with the air making the atmosphere heavy and thick as blood. I attempt to hasten our pace many times but every time I try Saya lowers the speed two-fold thus by the time we passed the gate we slowed to a crawl. I quickly look to Saya and she looks away just as fast but not fast enough for me to miss the smile of absolute bliss on her face.
Farther down the road Saya lets go of my hand and starts prancing around me in an orbit. “Saito”
“Uhh, yea?”
“Do you even like me” she stops in front of me and looks at me with upturned eyes.
I know in my head that a moment’s hesitation would spell the end of everything I hold dear with the possibility of turning the whole school against me. I might have spent too much time thinking.
In Saya’s eyes tears start to form. “I Sniff Though Sniff This could work Sniff Sniff”
“No, Saya I’m sorry” by the time I can get that out she already bolted off.
I chase after her, me knowing how she manages to get herself in trouble when she gets emotional. Street after Street, Alley through Alley; it really doesn’t help that she is so damn athletic. We get near the family restaurant, although I’m not sure how we managed to get here with the random twists and turns feels anime-esque; we just have to cross the street.
Saya still in an emotional frenzy doesn’t want me to catch up to her and bolts across the street but she doesn’t see the car coming.
“SAYA NO!!!!!!!!” I can’t help but scream while being almost 3 meters behind her there is no way for me to catch up to her.
I hear a Sickening thud yet I can’t bear not to watch my beloved get hit it. It knocks her 2 meters in the opposite direction and I hear a crack as her head impacts the ground, blood seeping out of the fracture.
“SAYA!!” Again screaming now in the pain of loss instead of screaming in horror; I sprint towards here “Saya can you hear me PLEASE SAY SOMETHING SAYA!!!!!” all I can hear is a whimper
“I’m sorry Saito” is all she can get out.
A case of content theft: this narrative is not rightfully on Amazon; if you spot it, report the violation.
“You’re Sorry IM SORRY”
“I LOVE YOU SAYA” I whisper into her ear quite loudly.
“I’m glad you feel that way and I love you too Saito” she finishes as her eyes dim the light of life quickly leaving.
Within 10 seconds my life takes a turn for the worst; due to the fracture of the skull piercing part of her brain Saya bleeds out.
“NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO” I start screaming.
“I Refuse, I DENY, I REPULSE THIS FALSE TRUTH” I continue still screaming out loud.
“IF THERE IS A GOD OUT THERE ANYWHERE PLEASE HEED MY MESSAGE” I keep going.
“TAKE MY LIFE IN REPLACE FOR HERS BRING HER BACK” I continue to Plead.
A blindingly white being appears in front of Saito and Saya’s corpse.
“Very well, I shall take your life in exchange of hers; although, she will lose all memories of you and your existence shall be wiped from this plane of life. Also…… “I AGREE” Saito snaps out his answer before the being can tell him their full requirements.
“Hasty on are ye?” as the words come out of the being’s mouth; Saito feels as if he’s getting ripped apart piece by piece and he can see his body parts entering Saya and her visible fracture begins to close and her eyes start to glimmer showing the return of the light of life. Slowly, Slowly, her eyes regain their light and finally she sits up people around screaming if fear over the zombie-esque revival and then one thing comes out of her mouth.
“Who are you?”
Broken by the pain of loss, denial and grief as soon as those words come out of her mouth Saito body begins to disappear and turn transparent sending him another wave of pain and he blacks out to not break mentally.
But not after his heart gets destroyed and ravaged by the pain of loneliness.
Saito wakes up looking at the scene from a 3rd person view floating, he goes towards his house and enters it only to see that his room is changed into an exercise area and all the pictures of him and his family are without him in them.
“IM Gone?”
----------------------------------------
I enjoy strict criticism because it helps me improve so anything is fine.