Action: So we are here with another rewritten chapter in the works and maybe my last. I don't see anything wrong with the others, it shows my growth as a writer.

Tyler: I'm so proud of you.

Action:No I'm proud of you my masterpiece.

Arthur: Will the two of you shut up this lovefest it's getting annoying.

Jason:I agree.

Skye:You'll agree with whatever he says.

Jason: Guilty as charged.

Luke: *Sigh* Action doesn't own pokemon or music links or art used in todays chapter.

~Tyler's~

I'm sitting at my desk, earbuds in and I'm listening to my anime music from my favorite show as I draw my favorite character Fei Rune. I was lost in a trance cause I would've noticed someone entering my room and no, they didn't let me know they were in the room until they said "nice art" I jumped out of my chair and turn around there was a young raichu sitting on the edge of my bed looking at the drawings I had hanged up.

"CHRIS! GET OUT OF MY ROOM!" If you didn't know Chris is a little stalker of mine I could ever get rid of. Also he is a freshman, but I never see him around and I have no problem with that. Back to the situation at hand. " How many times do I have to tell to stay away from me" I say as I usher him out the room.

"Aww c'mon, can we just hang out a bit?" He said as he's in my door frame looking at me with puppy eyes.

"No, I have a friend coming over soon"He looks at me with a defeated sigh and walks out my room. As soon as he does I go back to my drawing and listening to my music but, I hear a faint ding dong, a door opening and closing and a light thud like when a bag hits the floor. I was about to say, Chris get out before I shove you through my window. Then I heard a smooth older voice that sounded so sexy and familiar say

"Nice art, what you drawing there?" I'm glad I'm not facing him because he would've saw my deep red blush. The guy behind put his hand on my shoulder and my blush got deeper. "C'mon are we gonna get started on our work" I'm pretty sure the fur around the back of my neck is red.

"What should we work on first?" I said as I bit my lip. The guy who was making me so heated spun my chair and I finally saw Arthur. I looked in his golden amber eyes, they reminded me of Autumn my favorite season. I would've been lost in his eyes forever but he lifted me up and brought me to my bed. "How about we start our project early" he whispered in my ear so seductively as he reached his hand under my hoodie. I let out a small moan.

"A-Arthur" I said between gasps. He releases me from his grasp and I see a slight look of disappointment. "I'm sorry it's just I'm a virgin a-and I want the special day to be the first thing I remember wh-when we g-go back to school" He looked at me with a slight grin. He leaned in and laid his head in my neck as he made a rough growl as the rest of his body was on top of me.

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"Your fur it's so smooth and soft, I could stay like this all day" he said with such a relax and carefree tone. Then there was a buzzing sound coming from desk. Arthur got off of me and read "Luke"

"Pass me my phone please" as he passed me the phone I answered " Hey Luke, what do you need?"

"Remember there's a battle tournament tomorrow and make sure to show up" his voice sounded off but I heard the Skye whimpering in the background and put two and two together.

" Okay I'm coming and I'm bringing Arthur, bye" I hung up my phone.

"So, where exactly are you bringing me" I heard from the corner of my room. I looked at him and it looked like he was slightly angered as he was texting.

"I'm taking you to a battle tournament tomorrow" he puts his phone away and walks up to me and traps me in a kiss. I was caught off guard as he held me tight with his hands around my waist. I responded by kissing him back and wrapping my arms around his neck. To my disappointment he broke the kiss. As he pulled away he said.

"You know, we could do something else" with a slight grin he picked me up bridal style and put me on my bed. Before I knew it he had his shirt off showing his chiseled abs. I started to drool a bit. Once again I was pinned down on my bed and he was slowly unzipping my hoodie. I could hear each individual zip be undone. Arthur noticed I wasn't anything underneath and he started caressing my chest. All I could do was moan but that stopped as quickly as it started because my dad came barging into the room saying,

"TYLER! I'm back, did you meet anyone new today?" and I was now looking at my dad with a deep crimson blush as he looked at us with confusion. Arthur slowly let's go of me as he explains to my dad.

"I'm Tyler's friend from mating class and I'm here so we can work on a project" My dad's look of confusion turned into a smile.

"Be gentle with him, he has never done anything with his clothes off" He winked at me and closed my door as I scream.

"DAD!" Then I realise that I'm still held under Arthur's grasp. Not to soon after my realisation he switches our position so that we're facing each other and he wraps his arms around me and I do the same.

" Can we go to sleep a bit? I'm tired," Arthur asked.

That caught me off guard. It was only 5PM and he had just got here.

"Sure," I said. I was tired a bit myself, so we both fell asleep.

~Arthur's~

I slowly open my eyes and realize that Tyler wasn't in my arms. Moonlight shone through the window, and I heard the sound of running water coming from the door to my right. I hopped out of the bed and looked to my left. There was a clock on the nightstand and the time was one in the morning. I jumped a little as I heard a creak coming from the door where I heard running water and Tyler came out of the room in shorts as some of his body was still wet. I had to rub my eyes because he looked a little blurry.

"Oh sorry, did I wake you?" he said with the softest tone as he looked at me with the cutest pair of eyes, shining like the sun. He walked past me and started to climb up on the bed,"C'mon let's go back to bed" I joined him in his bed and he started moving in the bed with slight annoyance. He then climbed on top of me laying his hot body on top of mine and he laid his head on my chest. We stayed like that for a while, feeling the pulse of each other's heartbeat. I started to hear light snoring as he nuzzled my chest. I soon too felt dreary and fell asleep.

Action: There truly wasn't much to fix so this was easy.

Tyler: So you are saying you had massive growth from the first to second chapter.

Arthur: What else could he be implying,

Luke: He really took what st. Elmo's fire took to heart though it had to hurt him bashing you on your very first post.

Action: Stop all of you we are here just doing a rewrite. Any way don't forget to fav follow and review and we'll see you in the next chapter. Bye!