My dear readers, whispers from the trees and rocks tell me you're not too keen on some story choices I've made. So be it. Let's see where you want to steer this ship:

Soft Rewrite: You're digging the story but Yav's not your cup of tea? I can scrub everything up to Yav. Either I toss the character out or morph him into a cute, stingy, and feisty girl (caught wind of someone wanting that).

Hard Rewrite: You're all in for the story but not quite how I've played the cards? Then, it's back to the drawing board for me, keeping the main ideas intact. (We're holding onto Oko and his powers, maybe a few events here and there would stick around.)

The story has been taken without consent; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.

Hardcore Rewrite: You're head over heels for the world but that's about it? Then it's a total do-over for characters and situations. (Our main man turns into a Merchant, and we're leaning more into the business/economy side of things with a deeper dive into levels and unlocks. More planning, too. Dungeon creation and all that jazz... And yeah, he gets to keep his memories. We're talking "Hell Bound By the Money Making Tcha Tcha Tcha".)

No matter the rewrite, I'll pack in more progression. You'll be in the loop about his current level more often (maybe blue screens? Still mulling over that).

Got more on your wish list? Holler at me!

(Just between us, I'm cool with all options. Rewriting just a chunk of the story feels like I'm closing doors on some choices I've made, not all of them top-notch. Hard writing feels like a toss, but I get to serve a more refined story.)