I have two thoughts in my head.

Either this was fire, garbage fire, or straight up flop.

I was listening to Gundam Thunderbolt Jazz while writing this.

There's probably a lot of writing errors within this short story even though I had considered a lot of things during the process. Well, I'll leave it to that. After all, this was meant to be an one shot. I left grammarly because I just wanted to write without potentially rewriting the same sentence 10 times.

As for my prose, I drew some inspiration from Ulysses with the introspection, but not too much. 6/9/2024: To say at the least, I don't think this writing style is meant for everybody, so I would go for a lighter prose. But it's obviously erroneous to try and satisfy everyone in the first place. So which whatever one makes me feel better, that would be within the sequel. I'll need further experimentation, though.

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I didn't want the intended gibberish to be too gibberish. Trying to make every word count is hard. I think the pacing should be good enough to read, but do please tell me any concerns that you feel you need to speak up for. Or you can leave a brief review for me to read and that's your reception. I am expecting harsh criticism, because I would be really surprised if you read everything till the end and thought "shit, this shit was fire." Well, it was fire for me, but that's because It's really hard to be objective right now.

(removed outline)

2/09/2024:

Sequel INCOMING!

19/09/2024:

No sequel. Let's go back to isekai.