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Do you want to connect to Another Life?
Yes
No
"Yes"
"Welcome to Another Life. The scan on your iris and vein has determined that you are an unofficial registered user with name Raito Jim. Do you want to create a new account?”
"Yes"
"Please select your avatar name"
"Rim"
"Select your gender, there are male, female and neutral"
"Male" 'the hell with neutral'
"Please select your race. There are 48 race, with 4 main race and many sub-race"
'hm... Maybe human?.... No it's to boring then maybe an elf'
"Elf"
"Do you want to change your appearances?"
"Yes, change my hair color with silver and my eyes color with crimson red"
"Is this okay?"
In front of him there was an avatar of himself.
"Yes"
"As an unofficial registered user you get one wish"
"Wish?" Raito said it with a little confusion
"Yes, you can wish for anything"
'Anything?..... Hm..... how about if I wish to an AI player so I will not bored or lonely'
"I want to get an AI player"
"Yes?"
'look like she don't understand'
"I want a player but that player is AI and that AI is become my friend or to be simple bound to me" Raito tried to explain it.
"Oh I understand then please select that AI name"
"Yami"
"Gender?"
"Female" 'I don't want to be alone with a guy'
"Race"
"Elf"
"appearances?"
"Hm...a little shorter than me. Her hair is long and the color is black but a little blonde and her eyes color is black"
"Is that all?"
"Yes"
"Then please.."
"Wait about her level she will grow like other player like? and what happen if she death?"
"Yes she will, if she death she will get penalty same with you and revived after 24 hours real world time. Then please select where you start"
"Where is the fewer another player start?"
"Gin Forest, fenish desert and thumb village"
"Then Thumb Village"
"Please enjoy your game"
Thumb Village
Rim now in the middle of village.
'What a great game, this feel so real' Rim amazed with the view he saw right now.
'Oh yeah that girl' Rim remember with the girl. He turning his back and saw a girl he create before.
"Are you my master?" said that girl to Rim
"......." Rim was at lose his word because the girl in front him was pretty
"Master?"
"Huh... Oh yeah I'm your master. My name is Rim"
"Then Master Rim, My name is Yami nice to meet you"
"Don't use master just call me Rim"
"Really? Then Rim"
"Yeah that's right. Nice to meet you too Yami" Rim smiled
"What will we do Rim?"
"For now let's check our status window"
"Yes Rim"
"Status window" said two of them
[quart=Name,Title]Rim,None[/quart]
Status Window
[quart=Race,Aligment]Elf,Neutral[/quart]
Class
None
Unused SP
0
[quart=Level,Fame]1,0[/quart]
[quart=Health,Mana]300,400[/quart]
[quart=Strength,Agility]10,8[/quart]
[quart=Wisdom,Intiligence]12,12[/quart]
[quart=Vitality,Luck]8,8[/quart]
Stamina
10
Magic Resistance
[quart=Fire,Water]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Wind,Earth]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Lighting,Neutral]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Holy,Dark]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Name,Title]Yami,None[/quart]
Status Window
[quart=Race,Aligment]Elf,Neutral[/quart]
Class
None
Unused SP
0
[quart=Level,Fame]1,0[/quart]
[quart=Health,Mana]300,400[/quart]
[quart=Strength,Agility]10,8[/quart]
[quart=Wisdom,Intiligence]12,12[/quart]
[quart=Vitality,Luck]8,8[/quart]
Stamina
10
Magic Resistance
[quart=Fire,Water]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Wind,Earth]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Lighting,Neutral]0%,0%[/quart]
[quart=Holy,Dark]0%,0%[/quart]
"Look good.. Then let's check our inventory"
"Inventory"
Inventory
[quart=Bread,Red Herb]10,5[/quart]
'So except beginner equipment this is what new player get'
"Information about bread"
Bread
+30% Stamina
Satisfy you hunger
"Information about red herb"
Red Herb
+15% Health Point
The story has been taken without consent; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.
Heal your wound
"Rim, what will we do now?"
"Yami I want to training so what will you do?"
"........”
"Ah... Yami why don't you become a priest?"
"Priest?"
"Yeah I planning to become a knight so why you don't become a priest?"
"I see, then I will become a priest"
"Yeah, Yami you do some quest, increase your intelligence and wisdom, become a priest. When time to eat lunch we meet here again"
"Lunch?"
"Yes lunch.. Let see how I can call you if it time to lunch?"
"Um.. If Rim want to talk to me just call my name. I will able to hear it"
"Just call you? Okay then it settled. Um Yami you understand right?"
"Yes I will do quest, increase my INT and WIS and then become a priest"
"Good. Then until lunch." Rim then ran toward training ground
Yami walked to library but before she start to walked she hear someone shouting her name
"YAMI"
"JUST DO SOMETHING YOU REALLY WANT TO DO" Rim shouted a loud voice
"Rim you don't need to shout just speak in your head"
Rim hear what just Yami spoke now then spoke in his head
"Sorry Yami. I forget about this"
"Then don't forget it anymore"
"Yes,yes... Then good luck"
After that Rim started to ran again. Yami walked library too.
Training Ground
Rim finally reached training ground. He saw an instructor there. Rim walked to the Instructor and start to talked with him.
"Good day sir, can I train here?" Rim smiled
"Good day. Are you an adventure?"
"Yes sir and I want to train here"
"Hm.. An elf. Are you serious you want to train?"
"Yes sir"
"I see. My name is Bregmen, what is your name young boy?"
"Rim, Sir Bregmen"
"What weapon you plan to train here?"
"Sword, dagger, and a bow sir"
"Are you sure to learn 3 weapon?
"Yes sir"
"Then grab your weapon and start train by hitting that scarecrow 500X each weapon and for bow there are target hit in that room you must hit exactly in the middle 250X"
"Yes Sir"
Rim then grab his weapon but something came to his mind
"Sir can I use double Sword and double dagger for latter sir?"
"Sure you can but that mean each weapon must hit 500X so for double sword it must hit 1000X and the same with double dagger."
"Yes Sir"
Rim took a sword with his left hand and another sword with right hand. He then started to hit the scarecrow his dual sword.
1...2.....3....4....5....10......13....17...20....25
At 25 hit he got a message window.
Strength +1
Agility +1
He then resume his training and ignored message window.
In 1 days he hit the scarecrow 100 X.
"Well it's time to lunch, how is Yami doing now?"
Library
In the library Yami was done read 5 book. All she did was read a story about legend, about magic, about a hero and everything she can found. She ignored message window until someone called her.
"Yami are you there?"
"Yes Rim, what wrong?"
"well it's time for us to lunch remember"
"Ah yes I remember"
"Then I will wait for you"
Hearing that Yami walked the fountain where she and Rim promise to lunch there.
Fountain
Rim is sat on the bench near the fountain. He noticed town become more crowded than before. He then looked around and hear about what the player around him talking about.
"What class you get?" "Do you know a good quest?" "Wah... I want to hurry to get a class" .....
Not interested anymore he just sit there waiting for Yami to came. He waited for 10 minutes and see Yami walking to him. Around her there were many player who try talked to her, but she ignored them.
"Rim did you wait long?"
"No, I didn't"
"Well what will we eat Rim?"
"Maybe just eat bread from inventory"
"Okay then"
Yami then sat beside Rim and took out her bread.The two of them eat bread calmly. Around them there were player jealous with them.
"What a lucky guy" "Why they just eat bread?" ""The girl is so pretty" "I want to be with her too"
That's what the guy think. And it can be heard that girl was jealous to Yami because Rim was so handsome so that can't be helped that every girl like him.
Rim and Yami ate for 10 minutes and then they talked about what they doing.
"My training maybe finish around 20 days more. So until then just do something you like"
"Yes Rim"
"Also, If there are player who trying to hurt you call me. So I can give them some punishment"
"Yes, I will call you Rim"
"Then until another lunch"
Rim stood and ran to training ground. After Rim left Yami started walked to library.
Training Ground
"Oh You're back young boy" said Sir Bregmen to Rim.
"Ah yes Sir, I'm back" Rim reply with a small voice
"Then why don't you continue you're training?"
"Yes Sir"
Like that Rim continue his training. When it's time to ate he call Yami to ate together.
It’s already 5 days he started to train and now he already hit 500X. Rim checked all message window he ignored before.
Strength +20
Agility +18
Vitality +15
Stamina +10
You get a new stat : Sustenance
You are able to use less stamina in action. You are prohibited from distributing stat bonus points to this stat.
You get a new stat : Endurance
Reduces physical damage and slightly increases life. You are prohibited from distributing stat bonus points to this stat.
You learn a new skill : Sword Mastery Beginner [2] passive
Increase Attack power with sword (+10% ATK)
Increase Attack speed with sword (+4% ATK SPD)
You learn a new skill : Dual Blade Beginner [2] passive
Increase attack power with double sword (+10%ATK )
Increase attack speed with double sword (+4% ATK SPD )
Library
Yami continue to read book and went to eat when Rim called her. After 3 days, she already read more than 100 books. When she wnt to read another book she was called by librarian.
"Excuse me young lady, I think you already read more than 100 books in this library, right?”
"Yes, that’s right"
"Wow I never meet someone who diligently read a book like you"
"Thank you"
"Em... If you want can you help me?"
"What can I do for you miss?"
"Well you know there are a room in this library. In that room all book is still not arranged. Can you help me?"
Help the librarian
In the library there is a room to book place. But that room is still at mess. Can you help the librarian to clean and arrange the book.
Difficulty: E
Restrictions: Read more than 100 books in this library
Rewards:relationship with librarian become more deeper
500 Chopper
??
"I will do it"
You accept the quest
"Thank you, then let's head to the room" Librarian then walked to the room followed by Yami.
'Rim said do some quest and beside I want to help this lady' though Yami.
"This the room"
Inside the room there are so much book at the floor.
"Think you can do it?"
"I will do it" Yami then started to collect the book, read it for a second and arranged it.
It's already 1 day Yami finally finished her task. She then talked to the librarian.
"It finish miss"
"Oh you finish it so quick"
Quest Complate
You already finish arrange book in that room.
Reward :relationship with librarian become more deeper
500 Chopper
Int + 20
Wis + 15
"Thank you young lady"
"No I was happy to be able to help you"
"Then you can continue your reading"
"Yes I will do it"
Yami took 5 book with different theme and started to reading it. She enjoyed reading the book. She ignored message window.After she finish read the book,she check her message window.
Intelligent + 30
Wisdom + 25
You learn a new skill : Fast Read Beginner [3] Passive
Enable you read faster than anyone.
You can learn skill by reading faster than anyone.
She heard Rim talked to her.
"Yami you hear me?"
"I hear you Rim"
"I will log out for awhile so Yami you just continue your activity and don't forget to eat lunch"
"Yes Rim"
After that Yami continue to read another book.
Training Ground
Rim began his double dagger training. After 10 hit he realized it’s already midnight in real world. He then called Yami and then log out.
Raito Room
After log out Raito took off his MR and walked to the kitchen and took something to eat. While ate he saw his sister walked to the kitchen from her room.
"Still awake Rias?" Raito said it to his sister made his sister a little shocked
"Brother, you made me shock. I think it was a ghost talked to me"
"How cruel you thinking your brother as a ghost"
"Enough with joke"
Rias then took a milk from refrigerator. She then sat in front Raito and began talk.
"Brother you already play Another Life right?"
"Yes"
"Where you start?"
"Thumb Village"
"I see what's your avatar name?"
"Rim"
"Alright then. I will begin there too"
"Eh Rias?? You still didn't play it?"
"Nope, I'm waited for you to start. So what level are you?"
"Level 1"
"Eh.... Level 1?"
"I just did some training so I don't do any quest"
"I see. Then tomorrow I will play it too. Look forward to it Brother"
"Yes,yes"
Rias stood from her chair and then walked to her room. But before she got so far from her brother she asked her brother
"Brother do you already talk again with Ra-nechan?"
"......no" Raito avoided her sister eyes
"I see...."
Rias walked to room.
"Sorry Rias....." Raito whispered it and then walked to his room and then sleep.