Just so everyone knows I'm going to use inverted commas for all thoughts i mean this (')
All speech is going to be in (")
and all telepathy will be in (())
Now a note from the author: This is my first ever time posting what I write on the internet so please don't be to rough to me, but I do appreciate criticism as long as its not to harsh. So please comment a lot. i Will also place the name of the characters that are narrating/ being the subject of the story at that point in time.
Damien : It was raining that night at Georgia Tech University
'Fuck that class; I can't believe the school thinks it's a good idea to have an 8 PM class that lasts 3 hours' I thought as I walked back to my dorm room while listening to some music on my iPod. 'Well I was the one who signed up for it in the first place. What does that say about me?' I thought. 'Maybe I'm a closet masochist.....nah there's just no way.' Then I just sort of zoned out while walking back to my dorm room like people do when they're listening to music. About halfway back to my dorm room I was starting to get quite wet, because it was coming down quite hard. "Damn I'm getting soaked out here better hurry back.'
So while I'm hurrying back to my dorm-room to read some C@@lling Dr@gon, some light novel, or maybe some fanfics, I see a moment out of a badly written reincarnation novel that gives the author an easy way to off the main character. That's right I see an out of control car barreling down on a little girl. The little girl having fallen behind her mother probably because of the groceries she is trying to help her mother with. Funny that was the only thing going through my head as I just moved, I mean I was running in front of a fast moving car and the only thing I'm thinking about is the little girl's fucking groceries and not even what type of car it is. Then I'm grabbing the little girl and pulling her into my chest and then PAIN and everything goes red.
Congratulations, you are dead. And while this might come as a surprise to you. I The God of Blue Boxes have chosen you to be my champion in a new world in order to-
"Wait I'm Dead?"
Well sort of dead anyway. I am impressed that you would sacrifice yourself for another on pure instinct. Not many have that trait in humanity and I find it quite admirable, to bad about the girl though. Well sort of dead anyway. I am impressed that you would sacrifice yourself for another on pure instinct. Not many have that trait in humanity and I find it quite admirable, to bad about the girl though
"Wait, the girl she's okay right please tell me she is okay."
Yeah sorry bout that she is dying
"How I'm sure I grabbed her before the car hit us"
Well, you did take most of the force from the car and even took most of the hits on the cement for her, but unluckily for her some of the force from the car transmitted through you and into her breaking one of her ribs and puncturing her heart pretty badly.
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"But she's still alive right? Of course if she is still alive and she is at the hospital on campus not a few hundred yards from there the doctors there could stitch up her heart right with surgery right?" I babble hoping praying that the girl will survive.
I'm sorry. But no. She is going to die her heart is to damaged. The doctors can't do anything, and there are no suitable hearts around.
"NO SHE CAN'T DIE AFTER I FUCKING DIE IN ORDER TO SAVE HER"
I'm sorry nothing I can do. My hands are tied. Human free will and all that bullshit. So you ready to be reincarnated?
"WAIT, you said I am sort of dead what do you mean sort of? And how badly injured am I?"
You are a dead man. Hell only a few of your internal organs like your heart, brain, and lungs are even are even functional at al....... No you can't if you go back you will be denying fate, and shes a bitch if you go back she will remove you from the reincarnation that I have planned for you and you will most likely go back into the cycle of souls after life.
"So can I save her? That's all I need to know."
Maybe
"Then I'm doing it."
Are you sure?
"I'm sure"
Well I am glad you are the man I thought you were
"I'm really not if it was a dude I would have yelled at him, but i wouldn't die for a random dude I don't know"
....
"So how do I get back?"
See that red light behind you? Run into it and prepare for a lot of pain.
"Thanks well see you God... Might want to rethink the of blue boxes thing."
Fuck that I can't be referred to as God that dude might get pissed and destroy me.
"LOL, a blue box is terrified of a fictional entity."
FUCK YOU!
"Well see you." Then I jump into the red light of dea...Life I guess. And then I feel.... PAIN and I start screaming.