OK time to add a new box thingy too the list
I put a underlying story of how cruel it was to eat each other to grow stronger.
(****) thoughts
*""""* noises
{****} names
"****" speech
[****] date or duration
[2 Months later]
"Hey how much bigger should we grow?" {Jed}
The 2 men had named each other. One Jed the other Dej to signify their opposite nature.
while being inside of the void like space they found out a few things in between ripping each other apart.
1. They only retained memory's of 'Good' if they were the good side or 'Bad' if they were the bad side.
2. If they ate each others muscles their muscle density would increase.
3, If they ate a small part of each others brains they would obtain increased intelligence however it made there head slightly wonky if they didn't eat a exact amount from both sides of the head.
4. They both knew they would have to either kill each other (Pointless) or they could choose one to survive.
5. The stronger they got the larger the floor of the void became. leading them to hope that they could eventually expand it to a point where it either stops or leads somewhere.
at this point they were wondering when to stop growing and start deciding on what to do. They had grown 100 times the size however the void space looked exactly the same a 50x50m3 from their perspective however it was really 5000x5000m3 space now as they along with the space had grew by 100 times.
"Not now soon" {Dej}
Dej smiled bitterly as he knew they had to decide soon, however they had both come to be best friends as they were each other. they may be 'good' or 'bad' however this didn't affect their thinking process, it just affected their memory's.
[3 month later]
"We should decide." {Jed}
Dej let out a defeated sigh.
"Indeed." {Dej}
Jed smiled softly at Dej he loved him like a brother, yet they were closer then brothers he would not let Dej die. However Dej felt the same.
"I will end my life." {Both}
they both stared at each other in shock. They then started getting depressed, just hearing the same words from each other confirmed their suspicions. Neither wanted the other to die.
*Cold laughter*
"Then let us have one last fight." {Both}
as they had been in this realm for months they decided already to fight occasional to relive boredom always stopping when the other was on the verge of death.
Gathering the scattered meat on the floor. instinctively choosing the others body parts. However one rule that always stuck, never to the death. Never. If one dies the other would kill themselves. However they resolved themselves. One had to die. And the other had to live.
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However as they were preparing to fight they noticed something, it was a slight breeze. Being trapped in a void for months without a single feeling other then flesh, pain and the rocky floor. it made a tear come to their eyes. but then they realized something if they could feel wind where was it coming from? Why was it even blowing without any forces.
Their hopes were crushed when they realised it was just each others movements. there size had grown enough to affect vast quantity's of wind however as they only stood next to each other eating each other they never noticed. a full tear fell the second they looked at each others fallen faces, despair. Despair at the fact the afterlife was so cruel. why would gods do this? For their entertainment? To make brothers for themselves perhaps sisters? All this did was torture them.
They no longer cared and walked up to each other. They both had the same thoughts and they knew it. They were thinking of jumping together to end the suffering. as they walked up to the edge they looked at each other and smiled a brotherly smile. they were comrades in life and death, the term till death do us part fit nicely here. They loved each other deeply not a sexual love but a deep familial love. A unconditional familial love.
They jumped together bear hugging each other. Scared of the outcome. Scared of the possibility of death.
And then.
They died...
welp it got really dark at the end but yeah. hope you enjoyed... :P next chapter in a bit this one was a bit small.
In case you guys did not notice the underlying message look at the bold text and read each bold text as if it was a sentence a really shit sentence with poor English but I tried.