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神眼(God's Eye)
神眼 (God's eye) chapter 1

神眼 (God's eye) chapter 1

This is my first time writing a story ever. The updates on this for the first 10 chapters will be as soon as i get everything edited (which i do by myself or my friend).I feel like my imagination on this story will take my character far and wide just like space. I appreciate any advice from anyone whether bad or good. Just know I plan to write this story till it reaches it’s end no matter how long the road is. I thank you for reading and i hope you enjoy reading this as I enjoy writing this. :D

P.S. Only this chapter is the shortest one XD (hopefully)

____________________________________________________________________________ In a hospital room somewhere in China, Earth a women was giving birth.

“Push dear!” cried Li Wei

“Ugahhhhhhh!!” screamed Li Yan

“Almost there ma’am!” shouted the doctor “I can see the head!”

wahhhhh

“Its a boy!” the doctor excitedly said

The tense atmosphere that was in the surgery room was broken with the bliss that the delivery went without any problem. Just as everyone in the room was beginning to relax the doctor examined “Oh sh-Jesus! His eyes!” For the baby’s eyes were not the color that could be found in the human race; it wasn’t blue, brown, or green. Neither was it red, which all citizens under the Draxim Empire had, no it was tinted with the color of pure gold. It seems when one look at his eyes made one feel that they were under the presence of a heavenly-sent being.

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“Mr.Li, Mrs.Li, i believe that you have a very special baby boy and I wish that the heavens bless his life and may he grow up to be strong yet wise. I will take my leave. Please takes as long as you need.” 

“Thank you doctor” nodded Li Wei

“Dear, what should we call our son?” Li Yan weakly asked her husband.

“Our son does have eyes befitting a god but calling our son ‘God’ itself is wrong. Mhmm. Ahhh. I got it! We should call him (天王) Tian Weng. Li Tian Weng! He who bears heavens itself!” examined Li Wei.

*giggle* “Only you would pick such a cheesy name, dear. But I still like it.” laughed Li Yan

“Honey, please….” Li Wei softly said

“But, dear, our son would surely achieved great things in his life time.” cooed Li Yan