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Jon Arctic POV
Arctican Realm, lands beyond the wall, 295 AC, During the third year of the 3-year Time Skip.
One year later.
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Jon took Seryna and Ygritte to his room in the grand weirwood after arriving in the sacred grove with the girls atop Ghost. Eragon tried to follow out of curiosity, but with a mental command, he dismissed the dragon.
"Hahaha. Finally, I can take off this southern dress." Ygritte complained, preferring to marry in armor rather than the garment she was wearing.
"You looked very pretty in it, though." Seryna commented beside her as they entered the room.
"I don't know how you don't complain about these clothes..." Ygritte murmured, looking at Seryna's white dress.
"Jon likes it, that's all that matters to me." Seryna said, crossing her arms and turning her attention back to Jon, looking around the room.
"What are you doing? Why don't we just do what we need to do?" Ygritte asked, sounding somewhat impatient to remove her dress.
"Aren't you nervous?" The woman beside Ygritte asked amusingly.
"Of course I am. But I want to get to bed as soon as possible..." She murmured.
Jon turned his gaze back to the girls looking at him and sighed. "I'm checking on the animals, I don't want any disturbances tonight." He said, connecting with all the animals around the tree.
"That's good, I don't want to have sex with a dragon or a wolf watching." Seryna approached and placed her hands on Jon's chest, giving him a kiss on the neck. This surprised not only Jon but also Ygritte in her dress.
"Hey, what are you doing, you're being quite bold." Ygritte complained with her face quite red watching Seryna act this way.
"Didn't you talk about this with the older women? They told me to start like this." Seryna kissed Jon's neck and sealed their lips before turning her attention back to Ygritte behind them.
"Of course, but that doesn't mean I'll act that way, I'm quite embarrassed." Ygritte spoke, her face competing in redness with her hair as she looked away, clearly embarrassed. She spoke again, looking at Jon, who seemed to have enjoyed Seryna's action. "How are we going to do this, all of us are virgins, should we do it one at a time? Wouldn't that be better?" Ygritte asked.
"Why? We're a family now, let's do it together..." Seryna left Jon and walked over to Ygritte.
"Hey, what are you doing?!" Ygritte, still embarrassed, was stunned as Seryna passed her until she was behind her, with her face close to her ear.
"I'm sure our husband will appreciate this very much." Seryna commented as she began to remove Ygritte's dress in front of Jon.
"Stop it!" Ygritte complained, but didn't move to stop the girl as her body began to be exposed to her husband.
"Jon, do you like seeing your wife like this?" Seryna teased the man, Jon couldn't deny he was getting aroused by all of Ygritte's curves and intimate parts exposed in such a way, he had always held back over the last years, merely limiting himself to kisses and trying to avoid the temptation of sleeping with some of them, Ygritte had always been more reserved than Seryna, but he couldn't deny the beautiful woman, as he looked at her beautiful breasts and her intimate part with fire-kissed hair like her head.
Without a word, Jon approached Ygritte as she looked at him with a mix of shame, excitement, and anticipation in her eyes.
"Of course I like it, if you all want to do this together, let's do it." Jon commented, approaching and taking Ygritte's face before sealing it with a deep kiss.
It was no longer a simple kiss they used to share, it was something wilder, Ygritte surrendered to her desires in the moment letting her mind go blank as she began to feel her body heating up as she experienced those emotions and her intimate parts starting to get wet.
"Hmm..." She moaned as Jon pulled his lips away with saliva still connecting them and he moved to the side of her head where Seryna still was to do the same with the other woman.
"Hmm..." Seryna, feeling the same things as Ygritte, let out a moan.
"Do you want to do this with both, Ygritte?" Jon spoke directly after kissing Seryna and looked at the other girl with interest and hesitation, it was no secret he wanted to sleep with both at the same time, as his lower head seemed to have taken control of his body.
"Yes..." She said, still embarrassed, but she felt her body giving in to the excitement she was feeling.
"Let me take off your clothes, Husband." Seryna spoke beside him, seeing this, Jon grabbed the naked Ygritte by the waist and began to move her so they were all standing, he turned back to look lovingly at the redhead woman while the giantess in human form began to approach and kiss his neck while starting to remove his clothes that he got married in.
Jon went back to kissing Ygritte while feeling Seryna undressing him, he moved his hand from the girl's waist to other parts of her body making her move with his touch, he caressed the girl's rounded breasts, which had grown quite a bit over the last years, and gently pinched her pink nipples.
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"Hmmm... Jon..." Ygritte moaned as her mouth salivated with Jon's saliva.
"So hard..." Seryna commented as he became completely naked, his body was muscular, the result of extensive training and potions in recent years, Jon did not limit himself to learning in greenseer visions the arts of war, how to be a warrior and a commander, he practiced everything he learned, it was no surprise he had become the most skilled man in the arena and even the giants could not fight him now, even if Jon had to switch his sword for a hammer to face the large men.
Seryna knew much of this, as she always proved to be the biggest challenge against Jon, with the potions she received, besides becoming a woman Jon doubted there were more beautiful in the world, she became much stronger than her peers, she was even stronger than Jon, however, Jon was quicker and managed to outpace her. They had a very strong connection and Jon appreciated that Seryna had stopped hugging him to death over the last year.
Jon left Ygritte even more blushed showing off his muscles, but she was not as bold as Seryna to comment on it, even so, she ran her nails over Jon's chest appreciating his warrior build.
Seryna's earlier comment was regarding Jon's manhood, with its 20 centimeters the girl looked for the first time at that part quite hard and Ygritte could feel it brushing against her leg making her even hotter.
Jon, letting his mind wander even wilder, moved his hands over Ygritte's body and reached her intimate part, which was quite wet from the contact.
"Jon...." She moaned surprised, almost wanting to remove her husband's hands from there, as they were feelings that were frightening.
"Relax, I'll be gentle..." Jon spoke as he began to caress, leaving Ygritte breathless and trying to moan.
He turned his attention to his dark-haired wife. "Seryna, I want you to do something for your husband." Jon spoke while feeling Ygritte running her hand over his body.
"What is it, my husband...?" She said with some anticipation.
Jon turned to her without removing his hand from Ygritte's intimate part and placed his hand on the shoulder of the still-dressed woman, making her kneel as he pointed his penis at her.
"Well, I want you to kiss it." Jon said without any shame, he saw in the greenseer vision that people loved doing these things in the Red Keep, it was a way to experience why the renegade prince, Daemon Targaryen, asked all his women and prostitutes to always do this.
Seryna looked at Jon's intimate part and gave in to his request and her own desires, since it seemed to excite the giantess, even though she had never heard of something like this.
"That's it!" Jon was surprised by the sensation despite seeing that Seryna was still inexperienced with it, but she kept kissing and even sucking his penis.
Jon seemed to respond to Seryna sucking his penis by getting wilder with Ygritte, making her moan more. Jon picked up the naked Ygritte and removed himself from Seryna's mouth, asking them to go to the bed. Jon placed the girl's body on her back on the bed while asking Seryna to continue. Jon let Seryna kneel between his legs sucking his penis while he approached Ygritte with his tongue.
"What are you doing?!" Ygritte, still excited, looks at Jon surprised as he approaches her intimate part, but when she feels his tongue, she starts to go crazy. "Jon! ... This... What is this!" She moaned, screaming this phrase with an emotion she had never felt before in her life, as Jon played with the pussy in front of him.
Seryna seemed to respond to Ygritte's scream by sucking on her husband's penis harder, and Jon consequently felt it and sucked Ygritte's pussy with more intent to drive the girl crazy.
"Jon! I'm getting wet! I'm going to..." This lasted minutes before Ygritte felt her body strange, she was ejaculating for the first time, she first thought she was peeing, but the women said that this was common when a man knew how to touch them and it wasn't pee, but bodily fluids.
Jon liked this and even increased the intensity on the girl. She writhed for a while and he looked at her satisfied as she seemed to be passed out, while breathing deeply.
His gaze went to Seryna below him still sucking, when she looked up at him with her blue eyes, Jon looked like a wild animal, taking his penis out of her mouth, he grabbed her while she seemed surprised, tearing her dress violently, he threw her on the bed naked.
"Jon... Jon!?" She shouted the second time she said his name, as Jon went on to suck her pussy too, making her have the same feeling Ygritte was having, and she seemed to enjoy it the same way, while clutching the bed sheets to hold her emotions as she felt her body quite hot and her mind in ecstasy with Jon doing that.
Jon played with her and in the midst of that, Ygritte returned to action, still excited, it seemed that the embarrassment had gone away as she sought Jon's penis to do the same as Seryna, Jon did not dislike the girl's attitude and she was surprisingly better than Seryna, making Jon even moan and increase the intensity of his activity on the giantess.
"I'm going to cum!" Seryna declared before writhing and letting her fluids come out over her body.
"Let's consummate the marriage." Jon spoke already quite satisfied with the foreplay, he moved Seryna aside to rest and went to Ygritte while he threw her on the bed and climbed on top of her while spreading her legs.
"It's going to hurt a bit and bleed, but I'll do it slowly and using my powers." Jon declared and the girl nodded her head, waiting for her man to finally make her his woman.
Jon took his penis in his hand and began to rub it on Ygritte's pink pussy, making Ygritte almost lose control of her mind.
"Put it in..." She moaned softly.
"I'll start..." Jon said, sealing a passionate kiss on the girl before beginning to insert himself into her. He felt her hymen break, and she felt discomfort. Placing his hand there, it began to glow in a green hue to heal and make the first sensation more comfortable. Ygritte seemed to be relieved, and Jon saw it as a cue to continue. He started to move slowly, making her moan louder than before. His hand never left her belly while it glowed, easing her from the initial pain, and when he saw she was getting accustomed to it, replacing pain with pleasure, Jon began to move faster.
"AHHH!" Ygritte moaned, and even Seryna beside them looked over with curiosity, approaching Jon and kissing his neck as he moved inside Ygritte.
"I'm going to cum!!!" Ygritte, now knowing how her body worked, announced before cumming a second time.
"Jon, I love you!" She declared while grabbing him to kiss him after cumming.
"I love you too, Ygritte." Jon spoke, sealing their kisses. He then turned to Seryna, who looked at him with expectation, and placed her in the same position as Ygritte, on top of her, and approached her intimate part with his penis.
"Now it's my turn!" She declared happily.
Jon entered her, and she seemed not to mind even with her hymen broken. He began to move his hips against her pussy, and she naturally responded.
"Harder, Jon." She said moaning, and Jon responded.
The sex between Jon and Seryna made the bed rock while Ygritte was still trying to recover from her climax.
Jon spent the next 10 minutes thrusting his body against Seryna until she finally came.
"Do I need to say I love you too?" Seryna joked as her hands grasped Jon's neck and pulled him towards her intending to kiss her husband.
"I believe not, shall we continue?" Jon said and turned to Ygritte looking completely open.
"Yes." She said, and Jon went to treat the girl. The rest of the night was a play of various positions among the trio.
Jon took one girl at a time, in positions like doggy, sideways, until the girls climbed on top of Jon to bounce on his penis, a position that resulted in Seryna breaking the bed with the force of her ass against Jon. They even went back to foreplay, while Jon sucked one pussy, the other girl was sucking his penis.
Hours passed, and the trio had superhuman stamina while having sex, only resting for a few minutes to return to the activity that lasted the entire night. Jon lost count of how many times he had cummed, but was sure he had planted his seed inside each of his wives.
When the sun rose in the arctic, besides many people sleeping in the streets after celebrating the wedding throughout the night, Jon and his wives woke up from their first night with the entire room messy.
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