I FINISHED REVISING THE PROLOGUE FINNNALLLYYY. It should be not quite as cheesy now, and i fixed some grammar shit.
Where am I?
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Whats happening to me?
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I feel a familiar sensation.
Skin brushes against my hand, and a soft sensation tickles gently inside my ear.
“My love I will miss you” A gentle voice whispers. I feel something soft and warm press against my lips.
What is this?
A warm sensation climbs up my legs and through my veins.
My muscles feel loose and i could feel myself drifting away.
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"Woosh "
Air blew against my face.
My eyes shot open. What i observed made my jaw drop.
It was a city. Beautiful white stone as far as the eyes could see. The massive buildings that occupied the space around what seemed to be a large central plaza were each made of gold and white quartz. They were supported by gigantic pillars which seemed to be made from a metal with similar properties to diamond. Even the spacious streets were made of pure white marble.
The scene in front of me would have been truly amazing if not for the complete lack of sound.
The entire Place was in complete silence.
Whilst observing my surroundings I noticed A crowd of people. each pf them them look at me with calm smiles, men, women, children all staring at me with warm passionate smiles. My heart skips a beat as I look at all of them. Each of the people were perfect. If i had one word to describe them It would be Angels. Their skin was smooth and unblemished. Their faces were each perfectly proportionate. Then I heard a heavenly sound. It was the angels, it had to be. Even their voices were godly.
A warm radiant aura glows from the people in the crowd as i gaze over them observing each and every one of them.
As i rake my eyes over the chorus of angels something catches my eyes.
What I see terrifies me.
Out of the warm bright aura comes a single spot of darkness. The darkness grows becoming cancerous and infectious. All around me the heavenly songs became black and twisted. Warm bright smiles turned into scowls, frowns, and . Angelic white eyes became red and angry.
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The crowd had turned from heavenly beings to ravenous demons. The demons swarmed me and held me down. Their claws ripped apart my skin. and slashed my blood vessels. I screamed in pain but no sound came out.
I was sure my life would end, but then they stopped...
A black claw rests inches from my eye. The previously frenzied mob was now silent and un-moving.
their frozen faces still held terrifying expressions.
My fear grew even deeper as a heard a sinister laugh. It was a deep and guttural sound that was laced with hints of blood lust and hate.
A dark aura appeared from the center of the demonic horde.
As the aura approached the crowd parted.
I felt an overwhelming pressure pressing me down. My limbs wouldn't move.
The crowd parted down the middle. An entity of terror walked in front of me. It was a giant black skeleton. In its large skeletal hands it held a gargantuan scythe.
His face extended into a skeletal grin.
"I am death" he declared.
"You have been chosen as the successor of my friend evil as he has just died,"
"....?"
Death sighed. "Fine ill drop the whole scary act."
The skeleton standing in front of me shrunk until he was about 2 meters tall, so just about 7 inches taller than me. He now had flesh instead of ominous black bones
"Well this is my true form, not that impressive compared to the form I took earlier right?"
"Anyways my best friend the incarnation of evil died a couple days ago but before he died he chose a successor, and i guess that successor is you otherwise you wouldn't have ended up in Tartarus when you died, your soul is too damn pure to end up in a shit-hole like this... well i say that now but there is still some room for you to improve,"
He said those last words with a wicked grin.
"Well then guess I should kill you now so that you can get your childhood over with."
"WAIT WHAT!"
"Hehehe be patient i'll explain everything to you later when I've got some spare time from reaping souls ."
"Chow" he said as he swung the scythe towards me.
I felt a piercing pain, and then the darkness pulled away my consciousness
That is the story of how i met death, and became evil.