Okay. So, first: I posted my original prologue, which really sucks, so I could get the story accepted before I could write. Then, I posted the actual prologue, but part of it was cut off for no good reason. Finally, I have the actual prologue out, and the rewrite can start. Monsters will be rewritten soon as well, but Forsaken Eternity is getting a lead.
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I have to keep writing because of the five hundred characters thing, but I think I've reached it just about now so Imma stop now.