To anybody who likes this story,
I'm gonna do some revisions for Ch 1-2 and might even combine them so they are higher quality.
I'll leave the 2 unedited Ch. on here if you want to look but I'll busy myself with editing and maybe combining them into a separate Ch.
So I might release Ch 3 on Oct 3rd or a little later.
If you spot this narrative on Amazon, know that it has been stolen. Report the violation.
Sorry for the inconveniences.
-Bishop
(P.S. It's been really making me guilty that I write a half a page a day then I don't edit it later and I just publish it without looking back at it)