I am aware of the comment that people would rather have a slower, more detailed story.

But I don't want a boring story, where characters do nothing but chatting non-funny stuff or passing most of the chapters just describing things in the world instead of living it.

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thing is, I have thought how to make " normal situation " interesting but it doesn't seem I find the way to do it in my novel. I will try to re-adapt my story if I get inspired. For the moment I have to think of a way to improve it before continuing it in a wrong way.

If I don't find the way to do it the way I want, I will probably drop the novel.

Still, thanks for reading.