I had chapter one for some time and I finally uploaded it. It is my first try so i don't know how you people like my writing please comment what you think. English is my secondary language so some spelling maybe wrong or doesn't make any sense, please point it out and I try to make it better! Enjoy your time reading

Greets SLM

The sun was shining bright on the hills of Cruion, for everyone else it was a normal day but for this young men it was a day of remembering. It was 4 years ago that his grandpa past away. The young men and his grandpa had a special connection. His grandpa was the one who raised him for almost half of his life. The young men was starring the whole day at the sun. He looked at the sun “it is almost time” said the boy to himself.

He stood up and was trying to climb down the hills to the road leading home. When suddenly three boys jump out of nowhere.

The big one was yelling “Axel you loser, how is your grandpa doing, He didn’t move for a long time, did he?

Axel was feeling angry and sad at the same time. He was battling to hold up his tears. He was always bullied by the three of them for a very long time. He was afraid, what could he do, alone, nobody who would ever back him up. He never had any friends he could play with or even talk with. His family was his most important treasure and those three dared to take it away from him, even on his special day…

“What is it Axel, loos your tongue?”

“Aren’t you going to cry, right?”

“Maybe we should beat some proper respect in to you, guess you never learned it”

The moment Axel heard Teron say it his thoughts went black. He was running at full speed towards them. Jeffer, the small guy threw a stone at Axel. He moved quick, dodged the stone while running at them. Axel was only seconds away from striking distance. With a quick jab axel hooked Jeffer right on his right cheek. Axel felt the excitement of battle running through his veins. He could sense a punch coming for his stomach. He quickly stepped aside and Teron punched Jeffer right in his side. Jeffer was screaming it out. But a shock went through the mind of Axel, there were three of them. When he suddenly was grappled by 2 hands pulling his arm in a lock were he couldn’t escape from.

There he was standing alone again, nobody to help him. It was Clem who held his arms in a tight lock. No escape was possible, he was prepared for a beating he never had. Teron was standing right in front of him. His face was red of rage. He yelled “It is time to beat the shit out of you” Jeffer who had recovered from the punches said with a shaking voice “Teron, ple ple please let m m me hit him first?!” Teron agreed and Jeffer assembled all his strength and hit him right in his face. When the punch connected to his face you could hear a cracking sound. Axel felt every inch of his body shivering for the next punch but he didn’t cried, he never broke.

When the boy were finished beating the shit out of axel they left him suffering. Axel waited for three hours to be sure the trio was away. He couldn’t hold his tears anymore, he was crying. He didn’t want to life anymore. He cursed his powerlessness but then he remembers the warm voice of his grandpa saying “Never give up axel, I have always believed in you my son”

The thoughts of his grandpa gave him the power to stand up. He couldn’t stand on his left leg, a broken nose, broken left leg and blood all over his face he stumbles towards his home.

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The 40 minutes’ walk took him over 2.5 hours. He felt many times making his wounds much much worse. Axel never ever had giving up. He had to walk home. When he was at the gateway of his family estate he dropped on the ground with a soft smacking sound. He was unconscious for a long time.

When Axel woke up his mother was laying half over him. He tried to move its hands but the bandages made it impossible for him. His mother was waking up when he saw Axel awake. Tears begun to roll over her soft cheeks and with a little smile of happiness she started to kiss Axel. Axel couldn’t say a lot he tried to act tough and let a little cough right after that he said to his mom “I felt form the hill, you don’t have to worry mom, just some scratches”

His mom pinched his broken leg and Axel screamed from the pain “AAAAAAHGH, its nothing mom” His mom laughed “your just like your dad when I first met him.”

Memory of Mora:

The sun was going under slowly and Mora was walking through the forest home when suddenly something felt from the sky right one meter away from her. She screamed like she never had screamed before “AIIIIHHHW, HOLY COW” The thing what felt from the sky was moving. Mora rushed over to it. She quickly could see it was a boy. She moved his head on her lap and the boy opened his eyes. The boy didn’t said anything he was only staring at her chest. Mora pushed the boy away and screams “AHW PEVERT” The boy was rolling from the pain. When Mora tried to move closer the boy jumped up and stood wavering on his feet. Mora ask the boy if he had any pain. He said “It is nothing you should see the other guy” when the boy said it, he had to mourn from the pain. At the same moment Mora and the boy started to laugh. They laughed for 10 minutes. They boy said his name “Btw my name Clyde, I have to go but will I see you tomorrow at the same time?” Before Mora could say anything Clyde ran away. Mora was standing there with an open mouth……

“Mom…. Mom…… MOM!” Mora became aware she was daydreaming. “Is there something wrong?” Mora replied” No nothing’s wrong dear, you... you just look a lot like you dad, that’s all honey” “You need some rest, please be a good boy and close your eyes for a minute” Axel replied “Yes mom” and he went to sleep or his mom thought he went asleep.

When axel heard his parents go to bed he jumped out of his. He wanted to look up a drawing of him and his grandpa. He sneaked through the dark when he arrived at the attic. He found some old pictures with documents. When Axel looked at the pictures he saw a boy who looked a lot like him and a beautiful girl. He looked at the back; Clyde and Mora,

Year 451 of Ren. It’s almost 25 years ago.

Axel found more old stuff and love letters of his parents when he found a documents with his family seal. He wrote the documents and couldn’t say anything. The documents told him about the dark aged and that he was a descended of the legendary hero Hirokku. He couldn’t believe his eyes, “If the village knows this, some people might start liking me” “Axel found new hope of finally making friends. His boring lonely years were finally over. Axel took the documents and went back to his room. He never was this happy before he finally had hope of making friends. Axel fell quickly in sleep because he was still tiered from his fight….