Hello guys, It's been maybe a week or several days since I started writing this and yes I have something to say about this.
Ok so, The concept of an EU in another world is new of course given that I have searched far and wide for this fanfic to appear to no avail. So, I wrote myself one in response to that matter. The major problems I encountered when writing this is grammar which is pointed out by DoritosMD and Roan who just rewrote an excerpt of the first chapter. This led me to believe that my grammar, dialogue, and sentence structure may be FUBAR that I ended up overusing the same words in some chapters.
You see, I wanted to avoid overusing the same words as that made some sentences wordy or unclear to average readers that the drop on views became so clear when I checked the dashboard. I may theorize that some readers weren't aware a new chapter has come out as I uploaded new chapters everyday which leads me to the fact that I can quickly run out of steam and at the same time sloppily writing new chapters which would cause reader views to decline. I also tried extensions like Grammarly and other alternatives to improve but overelying on these extensions would make me as an Author unable to improve my grammar.
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Thus I want to discontinue this and all until I improve sentence structuring, grammar and dialogue as those are the major issued that plagued much of the chapters.