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Bang!!, A loud pop woke Lozen up."Mom?" He asked while rubbing his cold silver eyes.
As he stopped rubbing his eyes, he noticed a light shining bright on his face."Huh? did I leave the window open?" Lozen asked himself. He began to focus on his surrounding, and he noticed bluish green grass all around him.
"What?! Where am I?" Lozen said out loud, but received no response. He noticed he was still wearing the same clothes he wore for his friend's birthday party. "Can this place be somewhere near John's house?" another thought came to mind.
That thought quickly disappeared as he quietly observed his surroundings, he couldn't believe what he was seeing. “Am I still on Earth?” He said as he looked at the trees. The trees were nothing like he had ever seen or heard of before, they were almost 10 times taller than him(He is 6ft or 182cm tall). The beautiful blue glow of the trees gave off a nice aura as the leaves that looked like clouds waving through the wind.
“This place…”. The sky had various different colours that moved around freely creating new colors. The sky was so beautiful that he could sit there and look at it for hours, maybe days. There were also 3 shinning things in the sky,”Are Those stars(Suns)?”. Lozen was still staring at the sky, with a smile in his face when all of a sudden, “Bang!”.
The same sound that woke him up caught his attention. He looked at the direction of the sound with confusion on his face. The source of the sound came from some tall bushes a few feet away from him, when all of a sudden a bull like thing came charging at him. “What is that?” He screamed out loud without moving. The monster had 3 gigantic horns, and an armored body. At the end of it’s armored tail, was a ball full of spikes.
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As the monster got closer Lozen didn't know what to do, sweating, his mind began to race.”Am I going to d-” as he was about to finish the sentence, he heard a loud, powerful male voice coming from behind him saying,”Move aside kid, He is mine.”. Lozen turned and examined the figure who had just spoken.The man was around “6ft 5” with broad shoulders and muscular body, he was wearing leather looking armor that almost covered his whole body, leaving his muscular arms and the his knees exposed. The the gray leather looked as if it shined under the 3 suns everytime Lozen stared at it. After looking at the man’s body he began to examine the man’s face.With hazel eyes and an olive skin tone, the man had long thick braided hair that reached his waist.
Lozen looked in awe at the man, not because of the armor(or his amazing hair), but the huge sword he was holding in front of him. The silver sword had a long blade that zig-zagged its way up to the point. The sword’s guard was oddly shaped like spikes that faced upwards.
“I hope he drops something good…”. Lozen hears the man murmur to himself. The man began sprinting towards the monster at full speed holding his sword up, “at this rate he will totally collide with the monster, does he have a death wish?” Lozen began thinking to himself.
As the man was getting close to the monster he screamed, “Sinister Slash!”. Bright light surrounded his massive blade and before the monster could react “Slash”.
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The moster fell to the ground and began to disappear, like it was never there, leaving a few things behind.