Chapter Two
It took us a few days to recover from that battle Ternipa and Leakz were both pretty beaten up. My wounds were nothing
to be worried about though and I recovered pretty quickly. During the few days whilst they were recovering I tried
manipulating my Ki internally, some of the techniques the Reedanoid’s used I figured could only be used after
compressing Ki within ones body before releasing it. It took me a while and a lot of meditation to realize that the more I
compress the Ki inside myself the lower my power level shows on the scouter. This is a huge break through for me as
the refined Ki manipulation opened up other avenues for training other than just my body. As a Saiyan most of our
techniques are learned through instinct and repeated trial and error during combat. Because of this our Ki manipulation
is rather skewed toward emitting of said Ki. By focusing our Ki I can for example feel a faint presence around me,
currently it’s not usable as it feels more like I’m in a dark room with my eyes closed wearing a blind fold. But the faint
presence I detect if I practice I should be able to abandon my usage of the scouter. Ternipa and Leakz were confused by
my sitting quietly with my eyes closed and Ternipa even asked what I was doing. I explained “That after watching the
Reedanoids I had grasped an idea from their use of Ki. Because of this I can kind of feel the presence of the people
around me” Leakz seemed skeptical. So I said to him “Try and sneak up on me from any direction while my eyes are
closed. If you land an attack on me then I will obey any one order you give me”. Leakz looked intrigued by the idea and
although he is still slightly injured he took me up on my challenge. I closed my eyes and compressed my Ki within myself
and as I did i felt my senses rising becoming more and more aware of not just my surroundings but a small degree of the
power levels Leakz and Ternipa were leaking out. After waiting for a while the presence of Leakz moved and within less
than a second I felt it near my right side. He was trying to land a hit to my temple but I reacted immediately sending out
an elbow with speed he couldn’t register. As it hit him in his stomach he crouched down on his knees gasping for air.
Ternipa was amazed that I had managed to grasp the enemies whereabouts without the use of a scouter. It seemed that
the two of them wanted to train in the same way I was to get the feel for it themselves. After recovering we continued to
train and hunt for food and spar among each other. I had Ternipa weigh himself down the way that Leakz and I do and
with just over a weeks training in this method we had completely abandoned our scouter’s. Our ability to lower our power
levels gave us far more freedom in hunting down the inhabitants of this planet. We even started going into battle with
weights on and treating it as training. After several months Leakz and Ternipa seemed to think we were on the border of
a revolutionary concept. We as supposedly low-class Saiyan’s were powering up so quickly that the elites could no
longer look down on us. My power level after the constant battles had risen to just over 9000 with my weights on Ternipa
had reached 5400 and Leakz had reached 5380. I smiled thinking to myself that even those two could now battle an
adult Nappa and most probably win. I warned them though that we have to be careful when we return to planet Vegeta.
Should our sudden growth be detected we may be targeted by the elites who look down on us lower-class. This mission
itself to me seems to be tougher than I would assume they would send a group of young Saiyan’s on . I don’t know if I’m
being paranoid but I can’t help but think we were sent here not expecting us to succeed. Given that Bardock is almost
twice as strong as king Vegeta I can’t help but think that the elite faction are targeting us due to fear of our power,
Bardock has the weakness of Mother being at such a low-level and needing protection. I myself have no such
weakness, yes i care about Mother but as a Saiyan I feel that power means more than family even if it is over writing
some of my past morals a bit. Oh well I don’t suppose I have time to worry too much about those kinds of things while
I’m on a mission.
The next day we target another tribe of Reedanoid’s. Our attacks have become more brazen, between the three of
us we are now able to attack some of the larger tribes. Sometimes I leave it to Leakz and Ternipa while I watch and
unravel more and more about the Reedanoids fighting style. It is getting to a point now where I can duplicate almost any
skill that they show us. The leader of this tribe has a peculiar ability to boost his power level to an unnatural degree. I
have noticed that he has a momentary blip of power for around a minute whilst releasing a greenish aura and after
watching for a while I realized that his life force was getting thinner and thinner. It seems that this technique which I
initially though was like the Kaioken is using his life force to magnify his Ki for a short duration. After figuring out the trick
behind his ability I figured I could put it to use after some tampering with it. Now as I had no need for him I stepped into
the fight between him and my two companions. They were rather disappointed that they couldn’t beat him themselves
but given that they had already destroyed everyone else in the tribe it doesn’t really matter. The Leader looked at me
before releasing the ominous green aura. The wind around him circled around like a tornado as he let out a soul piercing
yell as he powered up. I smiled as I watched this I felt the aura that if read by a scouter would shoot up from around
6000 to around 7000 but to me that was still not a threat. Not that I was taking it easy or underestimating my opponent
but as he continued to scream and raise his power level I laughed thinking that he had used so much of his life force that
even if he survived I doubt he could live for another year afterwards. The green aura flickered around him flowing
outwards. With his powering up finished he rushed towards me. He threw a beam of Ki that flew through the air in an arc
towards me. I could block this Ki no problem but I didn’t even see the point. I focused my Ki into my eyes and shot out
two laser beams, one disrupted the Ki and the other flew towards my enemy. He tried dodging but as long as I could see
my enemy the beam would continue to follow them. He made several desperate movements to dodge. He ducked and
dived flipped and somersaulted out of the line of fire numerous times, he even tried to lead it back towards myself which
I thought was funny. The red streak followed him no matter where he went but this was yet another strategy I had used.
As he was distracted by dodging I made my move. After my enemy did one somersault too many I appeared to his side
and with a large spin I put all my momentum into a kick that sent him right into the path of the laser beam. This was a
double attack that worked because my opponent thought I had to stand still to keep it chasing him. The smoke cleared
and the Reedanoid was standing his arms crossed in an X to block as much as he could but his fur clothes were torn to
sheds and he was bleeding from multiple places. Not to mention the large dent I seem to have put in his shoulder-blade
where my kick struck. I was impressed he could still stand but I was aware it was all bravado. He gambled the very last
of his life force to block my attack so he essential has one foot n the grave right now. He was gasping for air as steam
rose from his body. His eyes had lost their light he was clinging on only through pure determination. I kind of admired
that as one warrior to another, so I decided to put him out of his misery. I shot a purple ring of Ki that encircled his neck.
As I clenched my hand into a fist the ring tightened and with in seconds the leader of this tribe was dead.
Later that night we were eating a large pterodactyl type creature that we were roasting over a flame while
discussing the battle Ternipa said “That old guys ability to boost his power level was incredible”. I shook my head as I
thought it was a rather stupid way of using that ability. “Using your own life force just to boost your Ki. That was the
dumbest way to use that technique”. After I said that both Ternipa and Leakz looked at me confused. The always simple
Leakz asked “what do you mean?”. I sighed and figured the easier way to explain would be to show them. I had thought
about this during the day but instead of using your own life force why not use the life force around you. I reached out
towards the nearby forest with one hand and closed my eyes, as I struggled to sense the life force all around me i
imagined Goku and his spirit bomb. In a little while I managed to call the life force towards me. With only a small amount
gathered I quickly used the leader’s ability. My Ki rose substantially and I was surrounded in a pale blue aura. I quickly
released it as it was incredibly difficult to handle but I made my point. As soon as I released it I felt as though my body
was on the verge of breaking. Just a small amount of life force from the forest doubled my power level but the strain it
placed on my body was unreal. Ternipa and Leakz were staring with their mouths open. The heightened power level I
showed for a moment made them brake out into beads of sweat as they struggled to stand before it. For just a moment I
had reached a power level of 18000 which is the level adult Vegeta had on earth. If I could master this then after raising
my power level no living Saiyan could be my equal as of yet. That however is going to take some time. Both Ternipa and
Leakz tried to gather Life force from around them but neither of them could manage it, they had difficulty sensing the life
force around them. I warned them not to do so anyway until they were more powerful, the strain would be too much for
their bodies to handle at the current moment in time. I couldn’t help but smile though, I began thinking of this as a trump
card I can continue to polish until it is more usable. I think I’m going to name it spirit fist its a kind of cross between the
Kaioken (king Kai fist) and the spirit bomb. I’m honestly surprised Goku never thought of this in the original anime and
manga. I then told the other two to get some rest tonight as we are going to be busy tomorrow. I plan to attack the
largest tribe tomorrow the one that has a power level of 10000 as their leader.
We wake up reasonably early. After quickly washing ourselves in a nearby lake and eating our fill we fly towards
where the largest tribe is situated. They seem to be living on a large mountain. The tip of which we can’t see from the
ground. We could sense around one hundred different power levels on this mountain. We smiled thinking of what kind of
battle is ahead of us with so many people. Sadly most power levels were around 3000 but there were a few around
6000. We slowly began to fly upwards. On The mountain was a large path cut out from the bottom with steps that snake
their way right to the very top. We however ignored those steps and continued flying until we came to a large golden
gate with ornate carvings on either side. On one side it had the figure of a large man who seemed to be a Reedanoid in
black clothing, the other is almost exactly the same other than he was wearing white clothing instead. Beyond the gate
were many small tents and fires lit here and there. I was at a loss for how these savage nomadic people could have built
such an ornate gate and for what purpose. Oh well guess it doesn’t matter we headed on wards. The weaklings were
killed in moments Ternipa was laughing maniacally as he blasted them away. Leakz was more subdued but he did
however have a villainous smile plastered on his face. We continued further and further up the mountain destroying any
inhabitants we saw until we reached the very top. As we arrived there were three people sitting with their legs crossed
and eyed closed. I could sense a great deal of Ki from the one in the middle. He is the one who no doubt has the power
level of 10000. The other two seem to be about 60000. Unlike all the other Reedanoid’s we had seen on this planet
these three were wearing finely embroidered robes made of a White silk like material. The one in the center was wearing
a Black looking material but his robes were of a similar design to the other two. The one in the center then opened his
eyes. His eyes were a piercing grayish blue color. He had a look on his face that seemed almost serene. “Welcome
travelers” He said his voice was almost a whisper, it carried a strange kind of strength that even at our distance we could
hear him clearly. “I am the guardian of this planet. My name is Gram. These are my pupils Shiro and Kuro”. He gestured
toward the two that were sitting down and they opened their eyes almost on queue. The three stood up and as they did
their auras began to flow wildly around. The two pupils had a similar green aura to the leader from the other day, only it
was a darker shade of green Ternipa and Leakz were ecstatic. They had wanted to view this technique again and see if
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they could gather any more insight into it. I was more bothered about the man in the center. He gripped his fists and
began to yell as loud as he could. The mountain wind and snow from the top of the mountain all began to gravitate
around him as he boosted his Ki to even higher heights. I have no doubt if we were using our scouter’s they would have
blown up long ago. His power level was going up and up. I however was not Phased by this I was watching carefully and
noticed he was using a similar technique to boost his Ki as the others the only difference is the skill in which he was
doing it was unmatched. He seemed to steal the Life energy forcing it directly into himself and circulate it through his
body. I could sense the Life energy slowly combining with his own Ki. A bright blue aura was discharged and his eyes
seemed to take on the same blue color of his Ki. Grams aura began to settle and became nothing more than a fine wisp
that gently caressed his body. “What do you think my friend?” He asked with a smile that oozed confidence. I shrugged
as I said “So that’s how its done then”. I reached my arms up towards the sun and called all the life energy I could.
Unlike Gram who almost makes the energy submit to him in his forceful method of taking the life energy I called a small
amount from everything, this resulted in far more energy flowing towards me than him. I Copied Grams circulation
method and the energy I called began to fill each and every cell of my body. By circulating it within me the burden I felt
yesterday is lessened by a lot but not completely eradicated. Gram seems shocked. “OH one so young as yourself
mastering this technique, and so soon after seeing it too. But I feel your method of gathering life energy seems different
to ours”. I laughed at his comment. Whilst his technique was of a higher level than his students who couldn’t summon
life energy and had to use their own his method of gathering it was crude and forceful. To show him the error of his ways
I began to release my Ki. Unlike his gentle caress mine was like a violent thunderstorm. Our blue auras clashed and I
could tell His confidence was shaken. My aura pushed him backwards towards the edge of the mountain. His feet
dragged across the ground leaving a trail. I walked towards him, I could sense that his power level had reached around
15000 but mine was steady at 18000. I felt I could push this technique higher but right now with my current ability this
was the best I could do. With one loud yell of “HA!” I pushed him off the edge of the mountain our little test of strength
complete. He managed to hover there without falling, a look of shock on his face and large beads of sweat dripping
down his forehead. The confidence he had has long since shattered. I got the feeling this Gram had been complacent in
his abilities on this planet due to always being the strongest. For myself however its different, even with this power I now
have I know that I am still weak. If there is one thing reading and watching Dragon Ball taught me was that there is
always someone stronger just down the road. Unlike the Raditz of the anime and manga I am not content with my
abilities and unlike him I will put my body through anything to get stronger. The sheer determination and will I have is
displayed in my aura. The wild uncontrollable power is a mirror reflection of my wild and haughty ambition. I don’t just
want to survive in this universe I want to thrive. I want to reach heights higher than the pitiful Raditz I read about could
ever Imagine. I hated that character more than any other in the Dragon Ball series. I felt everything that could make a
Saiyan great was wasted on him. He wasn’t as stupid as Nappa but he was proud of his pitiful strength lording it over
Goku and Piccolo like he was master of the universe. He was nothing but a punching bag that finally found something
he could punch back. That is not a true Saiyan I’m going to show the universe what a Saiyan is meant to be. I clenched
my fists once more and yelled from the pit of my stomach. The aura started to whip against Gram slicing his fine robes
like a bladed weapon. I moved with all the purpose I could muster. I quickly landed punch after punch and kick after kick.
My body spinning with the recoil using the momentum each time to add more power to the next attack. Gram to his
credit was blocking roughly 80% of my attacks but the pressure he was under was indescribable. Every time a flurry of
attacks ended another one began. We clashed our punches and kicks against each other. The only thing keeping Gram
in this fight is obvious years of battle experience compared to myself. I am still only 5 years old and my body is still
small. I am having to use superior speed to make up for the reach that Gram has over me. I am constantly moving in
and out of his guard to land my attacks and exit before he can counter attack. Grams flustered state is becoming more
and more unraveled. Unlike my usual fighting style where i keep my mind sharp and plan ahead accordingly it seems
like i am falling prey to the wild Saiyan instincts. I’m smiling from ear to ear, my heart is dancing with joy of being in
battle. I deliver a crushing Blow towards Gram and send him flying through the mountain causing a huge crater. He exits
the crater and wipes off the blood from his mouth and begins to smile. It is at that moment I notice a change. His aura is
no longer as gentle as before. The blue color becomes more of a cyan. He is adding his own life force into the
combination. The life force he stole from nature and the life force from himself seemed to be of polar opposites. I could
sense that they were repelling each other but with a huge concerted effort, Gram forced them to combine and his power
level raised even higher. If a scouter was used it would say his level of power is around 23000. He disappeared outside
of my awareness I couldn’t track him any longer. He moved at such speed my eyes couldn’t follow and my ability to
sense energy was lagging just a second behind each time. This one second gap led to him launching dozens of attacks
in that one second. The tables had well and truly turned. I was being hit left and right across the sky. Not being able to
catch my bearings before another attack landed on me. I was being pummeled across the sky like a pinball. My
unbreakable will was finally being tested. My consciousness was fading with each blow I sustained. My armor was
starting to crack here and there under the heavy onslaught. It was my turn to be hammered into the ground. All I saw
was the ground engulfing me as I crashed into it. This break in the battle was actually to my advantage though. I
strategically used this moment to remove the weights from my armor. As soon as I was unencumbered from the heaviest
set of weights I had used yet my power level soared. It almost Bridged the gap between us. As I am right now i could
probably go toe to toe with Dodoria but it was just a little short of Grams Suicidal usage of his own Life energy. I decided
to try to Gather a little more life energy from around me. Without my weights my body could handle a little bit more but
surely not much. I flowed the life energy through my body mixing it with my Ki as quickly as I could before Gram decided
to Launch another attack. Just in the nick of time i fled out of the crater as he was gathering Ki for a large energy beam. I
put my hands out and gathered as much energy as i could into my palms. The sparkling purple Ki was being
compressed getting smaller and smaller with each compression. With each compression the purple color got darker and
darker until it was almost black. With the biggest yell I could muster i shot it towards Gram, The tiny bundle of energy
exploded into a vicious beam just as he was shooting his own beam of Ki towards me. The almost Black Ki I shot
pushed against the blinding white Ki Gram shot. “”HA!”” we both yelled. I was slowly being pushed back little by little
Grams Ki was so dense and powerful but I refuse to lose this fight. Digging my heels into the ground I grit my teeth and
pushed out more and more Ki. It was my turn to push Gram back. My hair was fluttering behind me in the wind from the
shock-waves of both attacks. My body was gradually starting to give up on me. My small legs were quivering under the
strain but I will not fall. I will push forward. I refuse to let myself be the joke that Raditz was in my last life. I walked
forward slowly each step feeling like my muscles are tearing and bones braking. I pushed onward with each and every
step until I had pushed the almost black beam of Ki right down Grams throat. In the final moments I made out the look of
disbelief on Grams face. His body was as beaten up as mine and his Cyan colored aura was flickering like a candle
about to burn out. He had used almost his whole life force to combat me and that thought made me burn with pride. This
feeling I have right now is a Saiyan’s pride to fight. I will never forget this feeling as this is my starting point, in this place
for the first time i can honestly say Raditz was a true Saiyan. I gave one final push and enveloped Gram with my Ki
burning him into ashes. After the battle was done I collapsed on my back. The sweat on my body was evaporating into
the air in a fine steam. I felt utterly exhausted but I felt better than i remember feeling in either life, This is the ecstasy
that battle brings to a Saiyan’s heart.
Chapter Three
After my battle I seemed to have closed my eyes for a while. When I sat up I saw the final stages of Ternipa and Leakz
battles. They both seem pretty beaten up but what was amazing me was the pale blue auras they were displaying. They
had obviously both mastered the technique mid battle and were proceeding to finish off their opponents. I felt a sense of
pride that my squad mates had mastered this technique and raised their power levels. Their auras were a pale blue as I
was guessing they couldn’t gather much life force without causing massive damage to their bodies. Just thinking about
this technique really makes me shudder. The calmness of heart that is needed to gather life force is at odds with the
usual Saiyan mentality. I think only the three of us would be able to do it due to the training we put forth on this planet. I
remember in the anime that King Kai told Goku that energy gathered for the spirit bomb can’t be used by anyone with an
evil heart. I think he was just over simplifying it for Goku’s understanding though. Even though as I’m a Saiyan I love to
fight but I could keep my heart calm to gather the life force energy from around me and manipulate it. I can even
remember in one of the films where Goku goes super Saiyan he loses control of the spirit bomb it’s obviously not
because he suddenly became evil its just that his heart wasn’t calm given the effects of the super Saiyan transformation.
Just as I was lost in my thoughts two blinding lights flashed and pulled me out of my day-dream. I look towards the
directions the lights came from and see Ternipa and Leakz standing tall over their fallen adversaries.
We rested up for the next few days after that battle. Mostly we slept due to the severe recoil felt after using life
energy. When we are healed up all that is left is to destroy whats left of the Reedanoid’s. As the most powerful one of
their kind has been taken care of we can handle the rest at our leisure. Our power levels have all gone through the roof
after such an intense battle. I am currently at around 14500 at a base level and Ternipa is at 8600 and Leakz is at 8550.
In a short period of time the three of us have become the most powerful creatures on this planet. I can only guess the
reason our power levels had shot up so much is because our Saiyan physiology adapted and powered up due to the
battles and influx of life energy. Being a Saiyan really does seem to be like a cheat some times. I highly doubt another
race could mitigate the negative effects of life energy inside the body quite like a Saiyan could. In fact thinking about it I
think Grams forceful method of gathering life energy was because he was forcing his body and the life energy into a
situation that was at odds with their very nature. We continued training in between hunting the Reedanoids. With our
current power just a single one of us was capable of doing it so we took it in shifts, the two left behind would then train. I
started tying heavy rocks to my tail which may I say was brutal. A low-level Saiyan’s weakness can be trained to be over
come so that’s what I was doing. It also weakened me by quite a lot giving me a decent handicap for sparing with either
Ternipa or Leakz. The two had tried it too but were unable to move at all so they are starting with a lower weight
attached. None of us are using Life energy during training as the recoil is just too much for now until we strengthen our
bodies more.
We did however discover that it is easier to gather life energy more efficiently if we lower our power levels.
It however becomes next to impossible if our power levels are too low. Because of this we constantly kept our power
levels around 4000 -5000. This continued for around 3 weeks as we took our time and then when the mission was
finished we boarded our pods and headed back for planet Vegeta.
After six months in stasis again we finally arrived back at planet Vegeta. Our pods landed in the space port and we
gave our briefing about the mission. Our power levels were measured at almost 5000 for Ternipa and Leakz and 6000
for me which they found shocking. Ironically we are now stronger than an elite Saiyan’s, given than we are stronger than
the adult Nappa was when he came to earth we found it incredibly annoyingly that they still call us low-class due to our
birth status. When asked about our sudden rise in power levels I explained that on the planet there was someone the
scouter read as 10000 and said it took all three of us to win. Our superior officer seemed a little skeptical but took our
words for it anyway. We agreed not to stand out too much right now as our power levels are higher than most elites, we
were concerned we may find our selves targeted like Broly was at he beginning of the Broly movie. That reminds me I
died before the new Broly movie came out I wonder which version of Broly will exist in this world. It’s a shame I was
really looking forward to seeing that movie.
We went our separate ways after making our report so I headed home. Our home is in the low-level district. Given
Fathers power level surely this is an insult. The caste system of the Saiyan race makes me sick. Given that they are a
race that is all for power what does it matter what our levels was at birth as long as we raise them as we grow. They
don’t mind sending Father on dangerous missions that the so-called elites refuse, but they still have the gall to call him
low-class. As I got closer to our house I could hear sounds of fighting coming from the back so I quickly went to have a
look. Father was battling against Monty. Father was wearing and incredibly heavy-looking outfit. It was a large round
looking suit that surely limits mobility, It also looked incredibly heavy as well. I sensed Monty’s power level he seems to
have been raised to around 2500 making Monty the most powerful Saiberman. With the handicap of the incredible
weighted suit Father is wearing it is a closer fight than what it would normally be, although Poor Monty is still being toyed
with by Father. After Father knocks Monty unconscious he notices my arrival. “Hows Training?” I asked. He smiled and
said “This method you cooked up really helps. My power level was stagnant for a while but seems to be rising steadily”. I
took a fighting stance and laughed before saying to him “Do you think we could have a spa”. Father seems to think
about it before agreeing. I’m sure he wants to see how far I came. As I’m keeping my power level around 6000 and the
size of those weights I should be able to make it interesting for Father. I disappeared as fast as i could to sneak behind
father. While his eyes followed me with ease his movements were hampered by the weights he was wearing. I managed
to land the first blow to which Father chuckled. We continued for a while I got him working up quite the sweat and
breathing heavily in that large weighted suit. As we finished our spa Father asked “How much were you holding back?” i
was quite surprised and didn’t know how to react. He then said “You’re not even out of breath you obviously did’t use
your full power. So how strong are you really?”. He was smiling as he said that so I looked around to make sure no one
was around before saying to him in a quiet voice “14500” He was taken aback before he made a whistling noise.
Something else seemed to come to his mind so he asked “you don’t seem to put out that much of an aura how come?”.
Leaving myself with little choice I decide to power up. Obviously I’m not using life energy and the only reason I’m doing it
is because since its well-known Father has almost 20000 power level. His power seemingly doubled since I left. If any
readings go off however unlikely given the training room has energy absorbing tech in the walls, they will think its him
taking it easy. I spread my legs a little digging my heels into the flaw. i clench my fists and begin to power up. Fathers
Scouter is a newer model so as I begin powering up it starts to beep none stop with each raise in power. Father is
watching in awe as the numbers go higher and higher until it eventually levels out at the 14500. At that point i retracted
my aura and brought it back down to 6000. “How do you do that thing where you hold your aura back?” he asked,
anything to do with fighting and Father tries to find out how its done. This made me chuckle thinking about the error in
the dub that called him a scientist. “It’s something I learned on mission. The inhabitants of Reedat had a strange way of
using Ki so by fighting them I started picking it up as I went”. I then took off my scouter and stood with my back to father
and closed my eyes and said ” come at me when ever you want from any angle while my eyes are closed”. Father
seemed pretty intrigued by what I was suggesting so played along. I focused all my concentration into sensing his aura
and my surroundings, within a moment I reacted and blocked a sweeping leg kick from my right hand side. “What the
hell was that?” he was so shocked his voice seemed to go up an octave. “Something else I learned about Ki while I was
there because of it i don’t need a scouter anymore”. I was barraged with question after question, his intrigue was surely
piqued so i demonstrated compressing my Ki within my body. It took him a few times before he got it right but as Father
is a genius among Saiyan’s it didn’t take long. “Okay now you have compressed your Ki you will find your senses have
heightened slightly. All you have to do is train this sensation until you can detect your surrounding and your enemies Ki
and you will no longer need a scouter”. The rest of the evening Father had me sneak attacking him from different angles
until he got the hang of it. His method of learning was far more spartan than what I went through but he grasped it in no
time. Just as we were finishing up Gine my mother came out with a huge smile “come on you two I just got dinner
ready”. We got washed off and entered the house where we attacked the mountain of meat with gusto. Father was
bragging to mother about my “innovations” It seems he couldn’t wait to get back out to train them again. Father is rather
eccentric as Saiyans go. He will learn anything if it has to do with fighting so I found myself from then on repeatedly
being his training partner between our missions. I couldn’t help but find it amusing Bardock seemed to have next to no
relationship with Raditz in the original so I felt pride that I got him to be proud of me.
It has been about 4 months since I got back from my mission I am now 6 years old. Mother has started to show
signs of being pregnant. Whilst this is good news it hammers home the fact that planet Vegeta Is on borrowed time. The
child that will grow up to be Goku was one year old when he was sent to earth. That means we have at most 1 year and
9 months left. I’m not deluded to think I am capable of stopping Freezer. In his base form he has a power level of
530000. It was one night when i was worrying about such things i overheard my parents talking. My mother asked “Is it
true Bardock are the other Low class Saiyain’s planning a coup” It went silent for a while it seems like father was thinking
of how to respond. He broke the silence eventually and said “The treatment of us low-class warriors has become
unbearable. King Vegeta is a fool. He treads down on the low class warriors all to keep his position of king. He can’t
stomach that I am more powerful than he is and I fear that If he were to learn of Raditz abilities he would see him as a
threat to prince Vegeta.” I was shocked hearing this Vegeta the prince of all Saiyan’s currently has a power level of over
11000 he has already surpassed his father. It seems however that King Vegeta is worried about members of the lower
class being too powerful. It seems teaching Bardock the weighted training method has had adverse effects. Given that
Bardock wasn’t quite as powerful as King Vegeta in the Bardock special and has now become twice as powerful in a
short amount of time its only natural that the King would become fearful of an uprising. The problem is that if we make a
move and overthrow King Vegeta then Freezer will move against the Saiyans even sooner. We also have to keep King
Vegeta from making a move too other wise a civil war would erupt. Even though I can’t see us losing it’s still not what is
best for our people. I walked into the room where Mother and Father are talking. Mother seemed to be shocked but
Father had no reaction. I’m kind of regretting teaching him to sense a persons presence already. “What do you think we
should do Raditz?” father asked. I looked at Mother she was stroking he stomach obviously worried about Kakorot. I
thought for a while before answering “The truth is Father that King Vegeta fears an uprising yet at the same time, he
hates living under Freezers rule”. I paused to see if he was keeping up and then continued. “Freezer however fears the
Saiyan race. There is a legend in his race that a Super Saiyan will rise up and over throw their kind” It took him a
moment to understand what I was saying. He then clarified “so you mean to say if we act then freezer will act on his fear
and make a move on our race” I Nodded and then continued on with a few embellishments here and there. “Do you
know on my last mission I battled a person with powerful visions. Before I killed him he told me of Freezers fear. He also
said no Saiyan is capable of standing before him yet as he has a power level of at least 530000”. Just hearing that
number Bardock’s skin went cold. “Is that true Raditz?” Bardock worriedly asked, I simply nodded. then I continued on to
say that “With his dying breath I was warned that King Vegeta plans to move against Freezer which will seal our races
fate”. Mother and Father both froze. Father started to clench his fist in frustration. “That damn fool. He couldn’t even fight
me and he wants to start a war against someone with such a power level” Mother seemed to lose strength and
collapsed Father catching her quickly and placing her on a chair. “That is not all the Super Saiyan Myth is true. I saw a
vision of the future as my enemy lay dying. I’m sure he did it to make me regret the destruction I brought to his race but i
saw planet Vegeta destroyed by freezer but not before seeing that in many years time our race avenged by the one who
becomes the Super Saiyan” I then pointed at Mothers stomach. She gasped and held her hand to her mouth. It seems in
that moment Bardock decided something. He brought his hand to his chin and began to speak “If what you say is true
Our race is doomed except for the child your mother carries” I then decided to tell Father the plan I came up with that will
save as many of us as possible. It also takes advantage as Bardock’s position as the figure-head of the low-level
warriors given his growth. “I was thinking however why should we accept death. Are we not Saiyan’s my idea is to gather
as many Saiyans as we can in this time we have left. Hold King Vegeta to a standstill until we can separate ourselves
from their rule. Why should we obey just because they call themselves elite”. Bardock then looks me dead in the eyes
his face seemingly brimming with pride and says “If we gather all the Low class Saiyans we will have quite the number
compared to the so-called elites. My squad is already closing in on 10000 in power level, The line between low-class
and elite has never been so blurred. I believe we can separate and let the Elites burn with this planet while we Live as
the True Saiyans”. I seem to have worked him up into a fever pitch but I don’t dislike this Bardock. We then began
preparing to gather all the people we could trust the next day to explain what we have said tonight.