So I've thought about this for a while now, and after seeing all of your advice and opinions I considered what I really wanted to do and what I could do. As indecisive as I am, I've come to a conclusion! 

I can not continue 'Dragon Ascension', I don't have any feel for the story at all and I'm sure most of you remember nothing of it. So, I'm going to let it die as my first work and start anew.  

Its already been approved and you can check it out if you want, I only have the prologue up for now but I plan on getting the first chapter done by tomorrow. 

The tale has been illicitly lifted; should you spot it on Amazon, report the violation.

If you want to try it out, you can find it here: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/7148

Thanks for all of the support and advice you have all given me, I hope I can receive it again in this new story!