This thread is primarily for talking about how I will proceed after chapter 2

Originally, I had a plan for what happened to Tobi and why he ended up trapped inside Aevitas.

However, I am worried that many readers will not like the route I planned.

Since the end of chapter 2, you will be aware that it is unknown what will happen to Tobi if he dies inside the game.

There is a possibility that he will actually die... that his brain will believe he really died and real death will be the result.

Whether or not that is what will happen, I will not share.

Or maybe I don't yet know myself. I am still at a stage where certain things can be changed. His death in the game might really be the end of his life - maybe it won't ^_^

That is later though; this is where you come in:

What reason would you have for Tobi being stuck in the game?

What reason would you dislike for Tobi being stuck in the game?

Should I just write the way I had originally intended no matter whether the larger larger portion of the readers like it or not?

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You can really go any way you like with this and take any option into consideration:

Tobi dead in real life? - I can do that.

Tobi's machine malfunctioned? - I can do that too.

I can write in almost any scenario at this moment in time. There are some that I won't consider, but for the time being I will at least read all suggestions and maybe I will be swayed into using a scenario I had previously ruled out.

I will not be using a scenario that may change how the story progresses. Like I said, I can write in 'almost' any scenario for why he is trapped - stress on the word 'almost'. The story already has a set plan for progression. I can't deviate from that at this point ^_^

<3

Looking forward to any and all comments.

~Aspirer

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