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Demon Queen Wants to Paint
Volume 1 edits live

Volume 1 edits live

Hello, everyone!

Thank you all for sticking around and reading Demon Queen Wants to Paint. It has been an amazing journey and quite honestly all of my expectation have been blown out of water. If this spring somebody would have told me that I'd have a story with 3000 followers and have enough Patreon supporters for writing to become a full-time occupation, I'd call them crazy. But lo and behold – here were are! And it wouldn't be possible without you, so thank you all for your support.

However, as I am still very much learning the craft of writing, some mistakes are bound to arise. Many of you complained about the second half of Volume 1 and I completely understand your complaints. They are very valid – I strayed from the path from what I promised. But do not think that your words fell onto deaf ears. I have heard you and have worked hard to fix my mistakes. Today I can proudly announce that Volume 1 has gone through full round of dev and line edits. What does this mean? What has changed?

Stolen story; please report.

Here's the breakdown of changes made:

* Grammar and typo fixes in all of Volume 1

* Order of events where changed in Chapter 12 – Aftermath. Overall event remain the same, just the way Morrigan approached the present opening was changed.

* Morrigan's internal monologue was changed in many chapters. I'd like to think she's a bit smarter and proactive now.

* Chapter 22 – The Exposed Secret and subsequent chapters have completely changed Asdeus' behavior. Instead of her outright antagonizing Morrigan, she tries to appeal to her as an ally.

* Chapter 28 – Writing Lessons. While Asdeus still resorts to hurting Morrigan, she claims that it's normal punishment for demon children.

* The rest of the events unfold the same way aside from some minor internal monologue changes.

Once again, thank you all for sticking around and reading Demon Queen Wants to Paint. I hope you'll continue reading it in the future and enjoy reading Volume 2 as much as I enjoyed writing it.