Before I go forward with this, a couple of you were confused about the last chapter. Let me give you an explanation.
First, I am trying to not have an omnipotent view, as I want for the story to progress with the thoughts of the main character. It might seem a little convoluted at times, but it will get a bit clearer.
Second, in the case of last chapter, he is hungry. So, my plan is to not show hunger, thirst, and other needs as central in his thoughts, but more or less a factor as to what he is thinking, you’ll see what I mean later. I’m going to try to make him think logically instead of on impulse.
Third, POVs, other than the main character’s, are all setting things up for later and will only have a major effect later on (I’m someone who hates side stories, so I won’t write whole chapters just on a small side story).
Fourth, I will focus mainly on character development and on world building, the rest might be a little lackluster in a sense, as I am not good with imagery, etc.
tl;dr version: author tries but fails at explanations
Hope you enjoy, if you don't want to read a chapter that has a temporary timeskip, you may want to skip this one. This chapter is a peek into the future, to show the 'ending' (got the idea from TTGL).
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Vivinius Fields, 15 years after travelling from Earth
Revon sat in a large meadow with her and the children. The gentle breeze flowed as if it knew not to anger the middle aged couple and even more so their children. The scent of baked goods was carried around the meadow, yet the creatures fled the scene. A small tree gave the four shade and they all started to eat.
“Mmmhmm this is gud.” (Imagine them talking with their mouth full)
“Ya, is gud.”
“Darling, aren’t you going to scold them?”
“Ehh, what’s wrong Revon, they’re just kids?”
Revon’s POV:
Hmm, maybe if I tell them a story, they will calm down a bit. It always worked on me when I was younger, back when my dad would tell stories about the Navy.
“Hey, how about I tell you a story.”
Instantly, all of the them dropped their food and attacked me. The kids landed on my lap with glimmers in their eyes and my wife latched onto me from behind, the effects of which were rather… pleasurable. Two lumps of enjoyment crossed my mind for a few milliseconds and I started my story.
“I came from a planet with many names, but I called it Earth. Earth had no magic and had something to replace the void that magic left, science. Science gave humans, who were the only advanced lifeforms, the power to protect and fight. The world was split apart with constant war and turmoil. Many nations rose and fell, and with the science humans utilized, humanity grew greedy. People wanted power and those who were stronger would force others to submit to them. Not many could escape from the strong.”
“Papa, why do you say was like it is no more?”
“Earth was destroyed by its inhabitants long ago. Greed consumed Earth and I am its sole survivor. I was not strong in that world, I was only lucky. They had a way for people to gain power. One would learn how to convince others of their potential and then try to gain power for all of Earth using hubris. This would never really work out as the power would be focused on only that individual and for a short period of time. They became corrupt and wealthy, seeking to gain the weak’s little influence for themselves.”
“Honey~~~”
“What?”
“What happened to Earth?”
It is almost like she wants to scare the kids.
“Nothing of significant detail. Anyhow, the Earth had many cultures and beliefs, like how the beastkin have different subspecies. These cultures believed themselves more powerful than the rest of the world and conflict arose from that.”
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I close my eyes and take a deep breath, trying to live down some unpleasant memories that came from my time on Earth.
“I came to a new world, Caesemiseau. There, I found your mother.”
I continued on for a couple hours about many subjects on Earth and Caesemiseau.
A few hours later:
“Hon~~Ey, why did you mention the other girls earlier?”
“Because they were rather important in Heraim.”
“You should remember that you are mine and mine alone, I won’t let anyone else have you.”
The children were asleep, Revon and his wife were alone for the night, things were about to get interesting.
Be Warned Mature Scene (NSFW):
Revon and his wife walked into the bedroom, with some wine.
They sat around and then put their wine glasses on the nightstand on the side. Revon pushed his wife into bed and started to strip her and himself. Her lingerie was thin and black, with intricate silk lace patterns.
He started to thrust slowly into her.
Using a variety of positions, both used each other for hours, moaning would have been heard but, well, magic is useful.
The room was now a hot, sticky mess.
They still continue, for the 53rd time, using the Cowgirl position. Her hair is soaked in white liquid, she herself crazy for more and more. A glimmer can be seen in her eye. She truly is unrelenting. The darkness of the room shows the now red eyes staring at her mate. She is trying to outlast him, even though she is on the verge of losing it.
Eventually, she is consumed by pleasure.
“It’s reaching all the way~~~”
She could be seen fainting from pleasure with Revon being able to still be going at it.
Moans start to turn into silence as the sun rises, magic sure comes in handy for a lot of things.
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The kids wake up and the family are gathering around the large dining table. Seated in a pair of elaborately cast metal chairs at the far end of the table are the happily married couple. The two kids sitting across from each other are next to their parents.
The room is rather large, spanning about 50 yards by 20 yards with a 10 yard high ceiling. The table seems to be able to fit a few hundred people. There are microphones at each seat and speakers as well. The room was ordained in jewels and gold moldings. Many lamps plugged into sockets in the walls to illuminate the room.
The large and elaborate doors began to creak, they came in. Hundreds of students and four teachers came in and swiftly sat down, the four female teachers sat in the closest available seats.
Everyone looked expectantly towards Revon.
“Students, please allow me start the new year off with a toast for all of you who are able to return for another year at the academy.”
””Cheers””
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The story will be back to the present next time, in case you were wondering.