I'll say it myself. My first chapter is shit. I plan on re-vising it sometime when i've got the energy to do it. But don't give up on it. If after the fourth chapter you don't like it, then don't read. But either way, it's your choice and thanks for viewing
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I laid there, slowly sinking to the bottom of the ravine(Not sure if i should say that the ravine is filled with water, since i said sinking) My limbs, now gone, cut so clean and singed with magic flames so intense that regeneration is impossible. Hell, i doubt even replacing them would be possible. Not that it mattered. With no body parts other than my genitals, an eye and my mouth-which had no teeth in it- i literally had nothing on me. (Lol) As i sat there, falling in the murky black water, my heart began to fill with rage. Mind you that i was already extremely angry, but now it was like comparing a cold pot to a boiling one. I unleashed all my mana, screaming with indignant rage at the ones who did this. I WILL KILL YOU ALL i screamed, even as the water rushed into my throat and lungs. I was starting to see stars in the corner of my eyes when i heard a voice.
"Do you want revenge, Oh betrayed hero?" the voice said.
"No Shit i do"i thought, even as my vision was getting completely black.
"I can help you, give you powers you never dreamed of" it whispered like a snake, slithering around my ears. I have no other options. Im seriously at the brink of my life. I maybe had a couple of seconds left. I thought to myself in my last moments, thinking back on my whole life--
I was born in a small village by the capital (Im not sure how to say this, or maybe im right?)of SvaBstra, called SichereLand.(Im trying to say the Capital of the Continent is Sichereland, not the village) My village had no name, not even a village chief. It was more of a if-we-had-a-problem-get-the-people-on-hand- to deal with it type of place. Trust me, it was really inefficient. My Mother was a Baker, and my father was a blacksmith. Not just any blacksmith, but one of the best. The works he made were legendary, and the money he made was enough to buy an Kingdom. When i asked him why we didn't like in the city like nobles he simply told me
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"If you became a noble, you'd be a stuck up ass who doesn't appreciate what hes already got!!" I didn't understand what he meant then, but now i do. When i was 7 years old i learned about faith and gods, and from that moment on i knew that i wanted to be a paladin. My parents supported me tremendously, saying that its a great profession to be. From my birthday on i trained as hard as i could, determined to do a job. Before i knew it i was in Knight school, and was the best in my class by leaps in bounds. My swordsmanship wasn't the best,maybe 4th or 5th in my class, but my magic potential was beyond anyone in the school. Even the grandmaster didn't have as much potential as me. When i was 17 i was the youngest recognized paladin of the century(Some Nobles "Bend the rules" and let their kids start early, therefore ending Training early, since they started early) 5 year training is a requirement, but i aced it in 2. A couple of years later and my fame just rose and rose. When i was 22 years old, the Demon king Started destroying land. He killed elves, beastmen, mermaids, dwarves, and a whole plethora of other races, mercilessly slaughtering them with his immense power. so then the representative's of each race got together and created a band of elite heroes to go and kill him. It took 6 years for us to penetrate the demon lords army and kill him. Millions of men and women died trying to stop his tyranny. But in the end it doesnt matter, Because im about to die.
-- I'll do it. Ill take your God damned Power. i Couldnt see it, But it felt as if i could feel the damned creature smiling. "Good, Now lets see what happens when you mix Light and Darkness" And then i screamed.