You pan down from over a city to a busy street into a ally were you see a girl and a 7 foot tall muscular man they are being mugged by a group of 12 men. The man starts to pummel the men into a pulp. Zoooooooom. I thought they said the killed Sullivan Iif I survive I will rip his head off. *sigh Might as well try to kill as many of them as I can. The man then turns into a spinning storm of pain he started punching and kicking the men but still staying in front of the girl. His punches were shattering bones and tearing flesh he ripped one mans arm off but not before he was stabbed in the chest piercing his lung. Using his arm as a club to pummel the second to last man shattering the stollen arm on the man and throwing it away. A piercing scream fills his ears turning quickly to see Sullivan, the man who had started this with a gun to Rachel's head "Oh boar you simple fool you think that you would get away for killing my son ha you took the only thing I loved and I will take the only thing you do!" I started running towards him but he was to far away time seemed to slow as the trigger was pulled instead of the bullet you would think would come out only a small burst came. The gun had misfired throwing the gun away Sullivan pulled a knife as the man was to close the line up a shot he stabbed as the man punched the man hit Sullivan in temple shattering his skull but not before the blade punctured the mans other lung. God damn it looks like this is the end. He felt his lung filling as the girl ran up to him yell at him but he could not hear all he could here was the words "love" and "you" he muttered in the girls ear "Asdo I Rachel as do I" his vision faded he could feel his soul floating away 

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Well I guess I should tell you what happens and who I am. Let's start with my name, my name is Ron Silver and as you saw there is a slight problem I'm dead... yay just gre- foooom a beast like hand grabbed Ron's soul and through a hole as a loud voice sounded "Hello young son I need your help