Yuiki : I know that my structure is poor , like sometimes my French side will cause me to put s at every end of the word and structuring into english is very hard because my japanese is affecting me.
I will ask around to see who could help me re-structure my novel.
I am sorry once again and I hope you enjoy
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Message from the Devil
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??-"A predator appeared north of the city!?"
Johen-"Yes master.. Lady Cyel told us her carriage have been attacked and I took my elite troops and head north.."
Master-"And then?..."
Johen-"The soldiers who protected the carriage all lost their lives ,then we searched through the forest and found Lady Cyel's little brother"
Master-"You let her go along with you..?!"
Johen-"Y..yes but I tried to stop her and she said she would sneak along if she had to , so I put her under my 4 personal guards and let her come along with us.. she was safe from harm!"
Master-"Mhmmm.. And Lady Cyel's little brother you said? I didn't know they had a younger brother...does he look like his father or mother?.."
Johen-"Ermm...He is very adorable , handsome.. and .. *cute*(blush)..but my daughter is cuter!"
The personal guards were whispering to each other.
Pguard2-"Why is the commander turning red?"
Pguard1-"Look away , or you will turn into a criminal"
Pguard2-"huh?"
Master-"W..what?.. Anyway.. with your help , Lady Cyel found her little brother correct?"
Johen-"Y..yes master"
Master-"Hahahaha good! Ray owe me one now!
You may go now Johen , I will dispatch a investigation squad and some scouts"
Johen-"Yes master"
Johen and his personal guards left the headquarters.
Johen-"*Rinnie , Daddy is coming home hehehe*(blush)"
Pguard2-"*Don't look.. don't look"
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Neo finally open his eyes , he was buried into the depth of something really soft..something that smells really good..
Neo finally manage to pull out his head from the deep depth of softness that suffocate him.
Sister Cyel...? I see.. I am still alive.. ughh I have to.. toilet..
Cyel whom was lying beside Neo had a smirk on her face and she would sometimes quietly giggle while holding Neo in her arms.
After some struggle , he broke free from the claws of Cyel.
He sat on the edge of the bed and he notice his legs.
W..why am I naked....and ..my legs are back..
As Neo tries to hug his own legs , he heard the sound of a door opening.
He look back at the door and notice Ria
Ria-"Neo...Neo *sniff* you are awake.. finally.."
Ria ran to Neo and held him onto her shoulder
Neo-"Sister Ria.. I am sorry.. I made you worry about me"
Ria-"Mhmm.. Is okay.. Sister Cyel told me what you did... I am proud that you are my little brother "
Ria pats Neo head while holding him onto her shoulder.
Neo-" Uhm...Sister Ria?"
Ria-"Yes little Neo?"
Neo-"My body is cold... and ...I.. I am.. cold... down there.. may I please put some clothes on.."
Ria gasp and pushed Neo into the bed and cover him with blanket
Ria-"Im sorry.. I forgot.. you were naked..I-(blush)"
Cyel-"Huhuhu I see my little sister is as bold as me"
Cyel giggles and sat on the bed
Neo-"Big sister Cyel!"
Cyel-"Hehehe little Neo is finally awake"
Cyel went under the blanket to cuddle with Neo.
Ria-"Sister Cyel! Stop that! I..its-"
Cyel-"Is my little sister jealous? hehehe"
Ria-" What! w..why would I be hmmp! I am going to borrow the inn's clothes"
Neo dressed up with the inn's clothes but it was abit too big for him.. with his long hair , golden eyes ,face and the long one piece clothes that look like a robe made him even more girly.
Cyel-"Ahhh little angel .. so cute.. come here , let's go back to sleep!"
Ria-"Stooooop! Sister Cyel go back to your room!"
Ria took her sister hands and pulled her out of bed
Cyel-"Noooooooooo.... little Neo help me!"
Neo stood by the window , start laughing and in the end Ria and Cyel end up sleeping with Neo.
But Neo left the room in the middle of the night , he sat down in the backyard and gaze the stars.
Neo-"I died.. again.."
Remembering the events after escaping the ravine he extended his right arm and lifted his hand toward his face.
With a single thought , Sphere , a big black ball appeared on his hand , It was bigger than usual , so big that it smacked Neo face and he rolled backward.
Wh.wha... my face.. It didn't hurt.. but I have to consider position it higher .. or extend my arms further..
Neo extended his right arm completely , Sphere , the black ball appeared infront of him , It was atleast 5 times bigger than his fist size ball, slightly bigger than his head.
My sphere got bigger.. so then my sword and needles.
Sword , a sword appeared on his hand , the tip of the blade was point up the sky , Neo had to turn his head completely up to see the end of his sword.
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Wh..what the.. this is too long but it doesn't weight anything...
The sword was atleast 320 cm , he tried to create 4 needle , they appeared aslong as his old sword.. 4 needle with the lenght of 80 cm!
That means...
suddenly the needles on his fingers disappeared and his whole body was covered with 32 needles that were 10 cm each.
Neo look at the tree infront of him
Tree-"*He wouldn't....*"
All 32 needles flew toward the tree and before touching the trunk , the needles all flew up , like a jet turning 90 degrees every seconds , his needles were really fast and responsive to his command.
Gr..great.. I can change direction.. but I can't turn them smoothly..Wait , when the sphere hit my face , it didn't hurt but it felt like something pushed me down..
Neo then head in the forest , he took off his one piece clothing.
Neo recalled the needles and made some of them land on each part of his body , his hands , arms , shoulders,legs , foot , stomach , forehead and his back.
Neo was skin was completely black , only his eyes were still golden and his hair were waving through the wind.
Neo dash , leaving a crater with ease he surpassed his limit speed of 15 m/s , he charge toward a boulder , he slammed the boulder and made a whole through it with his entire body.
Around the boulder , small shattered rocks of the boulder could be seen.
Hmm...
Neo stood beside the carved boulder and slightly touch it with his right fist
As I expected..
His black skin only use was to harden his skin , he couldn't use the deadly effect like the Sphere , Sword or Needle that passes through things easily.
Neo took a stance with his legs bended , he held his right fist and squeeze his arm muscle , he then release a explosive punch to the ground.
Before his fist touches the ground , a small broken sound barrier could be heard.
~BOOOOOOOOM~
He made a small hole that wasn't deep but , anything around that hole were gone , the result was the trees and grass blew away leaving only a hard looking dirt on the ground forming a big circle.
The whole inn woke up.
Ria-"What was that loud sound..."
While her eyes were barely open Cyel immediately stood beside the bed.
Cyel-"Ria! Little Neo.. Neo is missing!"
Ria-"What!"
Ria eyes were red and open wide
They both look out the way and notice a big smoke of dust coming from behind the inn
Ria-"Let's go sister Cyel.."
They both know where to start looking for Neo , because the last times they found him , he was laying somewhere outside.
As Cyel and Ria hurried to open the door , a little girl with long black hair in her white robe was standing on the other side.
Cyel-Ria-"Neo!!"
Cyel and Ria jump on Neo and held him tightly
Ria-"Neo..! Where did you go , I was worried "
Cyel-"WE were worried little Neo.. Where did you disappear to?"
Neo-" Uhmm.. I am sorry.. I had to use the toilet.."
Neo blushes and look shy
*Sacred art , blush ,look at the ground while looking shy will increase the effect*
Cyel-"Awwe little Neo is so cute.. now let's go back to bed okay?"
Ria-"Mhmm Neo is really cut..- I mean let's go sleep already "
The sun rise , Neo and the siblings woke up , Neo slept in quite alot because after that punch he was exhausted. So exhausted that the depth of softness at night didn't bother him.
Neo , Ria and Cyel went to wash their face and head down to the inn's hall to eat breakfast.
As they sat and prepared to eat , a middle age man came and went toward Cyel's table.
Cyel-" Oh my , Mr.Rad , could it be my father's letter?"
Rad-" Good morning to you Lady Cyel and yes , it is a letter from Mr.Ray"
Rad gave her a folded piece of paper and left the inn
Ria-"Sister Cyel , is it a reply letter from father?"
Cyel-"Hehehe yes , I didn't expect father to reply so fast"
As Cyel read the letter , she giggles and look at Neo
Cyel-"Little Neo , you are real little brother hehehehe"
Ria-"Wha...what! Sister Cyel told father already?"
Ria took the letter from Cyel's hand , after reading the letter , she look at Cyel with a suspicious glare
Cyel-" Isn't that great little Neo? you will be going to the Warriors Academy like you wanted and then when you graduate you can apply into the guild to be a full fledge member directly!"
Neo-"Really..!? I am happy *sniff*"
Sacred art , river tears.
From Neo golden eyes , tears kept flowing down and made Cyel want to hug him even more
Ria-"*Sister Cyel.. you probably black mailed father huh.. Like disowning yourself if he doesn't accept Neo.... I have a devil as a sister..*"
Ria sighs and look at Neo with her bright smile
She was also really happy that Neo will be staying around them for a really long times.
Neo-"*New family..I wonder how sister Cyel father will be like*"