(".." for dialogue '...' for thoughts)
[b][u]Chapter 1-My Situation[s][u]
Drakes POV
'That Soloman wasn't lying. I really have been reborn.'
"waaah""waaah""waaah"(babies crying)
'BUT WHY ARE THERE SO MANY BABIES!?!?!?!'
End of Drakes POV
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Mother's POV
'I'm very worried about Drake. His siblings are behaving like normal babies should, but he's-he's not doing anything that a normal baby does. All he does is lie there and stare at the things around him. What if he isn't healthy!?!?
"It's been 2 weeks. 2 WEEKS!!! Why hasn't Drake cried at all!? All of his siblings are crying, but why not him!?"
"I-I'm sorry your majesty, I-I don't know why he isn't crying, but I can assure you that nothing is wrong with him!(servant)
"Nyleene, don't worry, he'll be fine. More importantly, don't you think his eyes are beautiful?"(???)
"Yes, they are beautiful, but I want to some sort of reaction from him! All he does is stare at me when I'm close to him! Why aren't you worried!?!? This sort of thing is the usual stuff that should make any parent worry. Arland, you're his father, why don't you seem the least bit worried!??"
"The reason I'm not worried is because the priests from the temple all said that there is nothing wrong with him. Plus, there doesn't seem to be any harm in letting fate take it's course."(Arland)
'Yeah, he's right, he's definitely right. There has never been a case where the priests have given an untrue diagnosis. He'll be fine. Let's just wait for a while longer, and see what happens.'
"Thanks Arland. That really helped. Let's just keep a close eye on him from now on, ok?"
"Gyahahahahaha, that's the spirit! Everything'll be fi-"(Arland)
All of a sudden, the previously shut door flew open with a *BANG*
"Y-your majesties!!!!!!"(Servant girl)
The servant girl had a wide smile plastered on her face as she said-
"It's Master Drake, Master Drake is crawling!!!"
Me and my husband just stood there, dumbfounded with what she just said.
Then my husband spoke up-
"What did you just say?"(Arland)
"Master Drake, Master Drake is crawling!!! He's crawling!!!"
My thoughts on this matter were
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'Is this girl mentally ill? It's impossible for a child of 2 weeks to crawl!'
And the girl as she was turning around to leave said-
"Your Majesties, please come and see for your sel-"
At that time, me and my husband were staring in amazement at the sight of a baby who had just crawled in the room, who then stopped and stared at us.
End of Mother/Nyleene's POV
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Drakes POV
After my parents saw me crawl into the room, they were extremely delighted. My mother especially, and she wouldn't stop hugging me. After that, I began showing signs of my intelligence. When I was a month old, my mother started rambling on about our country and how great she expected me to be. Well, I could already tell she thought very highly of me seeing as how she was telling all of this to a baby. I've learned many things now that I have been in Eternia for 11 months, 11 long months of nothing.
This is some background knowledge of who I currently am:
-My name is Drake Helius Aresia
-My father and mother are king and queen of a human kingdom called Aresia
-I'm the 3rd of 4 children
-The children are quadruplets
-My siblings names are Ludvig(eldest brother), Jasher(2nd brother), and Tania(Little sister and the last of us born)
-Most royal family members have dark green eyes, but me and Tania don't
-I have heterochromic eyes. The left is turquoise and my right is gold(Tania also has turquoise eyes)
All of a sudden a small voice said-
"Bruddah"(???)
It was my little sister Tania. She liked to latch onto my leg for indefinite periods of time.
I mentally let out a sigh, wondering how long it would take for her to let go this time.
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Authors note: Hey guys, this is sdgao02. I just wanted to say I'll be keeping a pace of releasing a chapter every day or every other day or something like that until school rolls back around.
Also, a review on what I could improve on would be greatly appreciated.
Oh yeah, and I'll try to increase the length of the chapters sometime soon in the future