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Daniel quickly blinked his eyes trying to clear his vision. He looked left and right trying to make out where he was. From his quick look around he realized that he was in a room that was completely white; even the furniture was white. “Are you finished yet?” Asked a voice that originated out of nowhere.
“Have I finished what,” replied Daniel
“Thinking about what race you want to be and what you want achieve in this new world. If you don’t remember, you died.”
“What I died?”
“Yes you fool, you died but I Athena the Goddess of War and Wisdom have decided to make you my new champion in this world.” While Athena was explaining to Daniel the fundamental of the world he was busing remembering the last moments of his life on earth.
He’d been walking down a quiet country lane on a midsummer afternoon when he had spotted a Mountain lion and had foolishly tried to approach it trying to get closer so he could admire the full details of the lion. Unfortunately the Lion had noticed him and had pretended to be docile while his prey came closer and closer to him. Then suddenly he turned around. Pounced on Daniel and chewed on his body. Finished with his meal the Lion left Daniel for the dead on the ground; his inside on the outside and his blood trickling out of his body unto the floor.
“Daniel, Daniel what race are you going to choice?” inquired Athena.
Before Daniel could say he was interrupted by a blue popup window that appeared within his vision.
“Hey Athena what’s this blue window in front of me?” quizzed Daniel completely surprised by its sudden appearance.
“It’s a popup windows if you were listening to my explanation, you would know that this new world that you will live in has what you would considered as a RPG system as part of the world. Since I told you about it I think you should read the popup in front of you.” Replied Athena slightly irritated.
Choose your Race
Humans Humans are the most populace race throughout the whole continent and have settlement in the North, central and Eastern parts of the continent. While they have the least natural affinity for magic they have designed weapons that help make up for this fact. Capable of using a variety of skill.
Elf’s Characterized by their light bodies, quick movements and their love for nature the Elves live in a huge forest in the Southern part of the secluded from the other races. The have a huge affinity for magic especially nature magic due do being a joint creation of the God of Magic and God of Nature.
Dwarfs Stout and down to earth, the Dwarves are a race like the elf’s they rarely interact with other races but the exceptions to this rule is the humans. All dwarf are able to mine and become a blacksmith at an earlier age. Now one know where the Dwarfs live but it’s suspected that their capital is situated in the mountains behind the great elf Forest.
Demons Violent and Prideful the demons are the most hated race within the continent of Farfund. They have the most affinity with Chaos magic and an average affinity with other magic except Holy magic which is fatal to them.
Other The continent of Farfund is large and full of undiscovered races and races that live in seclusion.
Hybrid A combination of any number of races that you desire. However you appearance may become grotesque and you will be shunned from entering settlements.
Daniel thought carefully after reaching a decision he chose a hybrid race a mix between a human and a dragon. He’d have a range of options available to him, no one would shun him and he would be able to learn a range of skills. The reason he chose to be a dragon was their innate strength and affinity for magic would make up for the humans shortcomings. When he’d finally finished choosing he told Athena and took one last look at his body; he had long black matte hair that reached down to his shoulder, he eyes were a piercing green and his new height was 5 ft. 9.
Are you ready to be reborn
Yes
No
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Daniel confidently pressed the Yes and with a flash he appeared within the sky and found himself falling towards the ground. “Oh crap. What do I do.?” Thought Daniel “Wait. I’m half dragon shouldn’t I be able to fly?” Daniel racked his brain and tried to figure out a way to survive the fall but it was too late with a large “thud” he hit the ground. Unable to move due to the fact most the bones in his body where broken Daniel just lay there. Tring. A blue window appeared in front of Daniel.
Notification
Due to having most bones in your body broken you have been paralyzed.
• All skills take a 70% reduction in effectiveness
• Agility and Strength take a -5 penalty
Is that a notification? What kind of world am in? Oh Shit, I should have listened to Athena when she was explaining to me about the world. The only thing I remember her saying to me is if I am experiencing any difficulties, I should pray to her and the first thing I should do is stay “Status Window.”
Deciding to give it a try Daniel tried to pray to her but couldn’t think of a proper prayer just said “Oh great and powerful Goddess I sincerely request your help.” “Tring”. Another message appeared in front him.
Request
Your request for help from the Goddess Athena is undergoing moderation.
Expected time of Moderation: 5 minutes
After what seemed like an eternity to Daniel, Athena appeared in front of Daniel and told him she’d help him but it would feel absolutely unbearable.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARG” Daniels' screams echoed throughput the forest scaring all the animals that had been nesting with in the tress.
For experiencing extreme pain to your body you have learnt the skill
Iron Body
A skill that reduces the damage taken from any weapons.
15% less damage taken from fist
10% less damage taken from Weapons
New stats have been generated
Endurance
Investing in Endurance increases maximum stamina, vitality and bleed resistance.
Willpower
Increases the damage dealt and power of healing spells. It also increases the critical hit rate and resistance to mental attacks.
After reading all the notifications and popups Daniel looked up at Athena who was floating within the sky and asked her for guidance. Athena not bothered to tell him where the nearest city was, she gave him a map and sword and proclaimed
“ You shall go west, and face the king who has turned
You shall fid what was stolen, and see it returned
You shall be betrayed by the one you call a friend
And you shall fail to save what matters most, in the end ”
I have given you instructions to help you on your way. Goodbye.
“Wait. What do you mean?” Daniel asked Athena but it was futile; she had left all that was left in her place was a map and sword.
The sword had a black body which had words inscribed across the blade. The hilt was made out of wood and seemed to have been covered in Gold. The map was rolled up and when Daniel opened it up it was completely empty. Deciding it was useless he was about to throw it away when a map suddenly appeared on the map.
Taking a closer look Daniel worked out that he was in the Eastern part of the continent and the nearest human kingdom was in the central continent. The only possible path to it was if he navigated through the forest.
After wondering through the forest trying to find any food, animal or shelter Daniel stumbled upon his first animal. It was a horned rabbit. Hiding behind his prey he expertly crawled the thick dense grass and positioned himself behind the rabbit. With a slight movement of his hand he stabbed the rabbit in the heart.
Wiping the rabbit blood of his blade he stooped down and took a closer look at his hunting spoils. The rabbit was covered in black fur and had scars all over its face. Slinging its body over his back Daniel walked around the area until he found a clearing. Deciding to setup camp Daniel left his spoils from hunting on top of a tree branch to keep his food out of reach of other monster while he searched for wood to start a fire with.