Chapters 1-20 have been updated. Let me know what you think. Chapterr 1 is a bit different now. I got rid of a bunch of the "front loading", and disguised it as story telling.

Tomorrow I will be putting up the last half of the book.

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I know, not a whole lot of updates, my new job is killing me. Last week I did an 85 hour week (a lot of learning new systems - got IT), so yay? That's why I didn't manage to get this all updated until today, instead of on Sunday like I was aiming for.

Ohh, also book 2 is going to start being posted soon. I've been at work and I have also been working Wink [https://www.royalroadcdn.com/public/smilies/wink.png]