I had this idea in my head for a while now and since I was having writer's block with my other story I decided to finally start writing this story down. Dont know where I'm going with this probably wont even finish well maybe depends.
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Chapter 1: Brother
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Bryan and Edward were Identical twins. They were so identical that nobody could ever tell them apart, not even their own mother but there was one person who could always tell them apart, their older brother George Ramirez.
“How can you tell?” They’d ask
“I simply observe,” said their brother
“The way you talk and walk it’s all different you just have to look at the small details,”
“We don’t get it,” they said in unison
“For example Bryan you constantly shake your left leg when you’re sitting down and Edward you’re always spacing out looking at your surroundings it’s one of your guys’s habits,”
So the twins worked on hiding their habits but even then their brother could still tell them apart
“We've fixed our habits how can you still tell a difference?” they’d ask
“hahahahah The shapes of your heads,” George answered
So the twins grew their hair but even then George could still tell them apart
The twins knew their brother was smart even though the twins worked hard to get straight A’s their brother would get C’s
“Why don’t you try to work hard you’re smarter than us,”
“Funny thing about being smart, you can get through life without doing any work,”
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Although they were born of different dads it made no difference for the brothers. Where George was dark the twins were fair.
Their Mother was previously from Mexico but she had moved to The United States with the one year old George escaping from her abusive husband. Then she met James Ramirez a young Caucasian man who was a former marine
Their mother got pregnant they got married and James adopted George.
James was a serious man he never showed any display of affection to his family. He was a good father nonetheless. It was strange even though they weren't blood related George was quiet and serious like his stepfather.
Things were great, George was a lazy genius although he never did his homework or classwork he would always manage to score top marks on his tests.
So the fun times continued until George’s graduation. George had decided to become a U.S navy SEAL.
It all went well for three years as the twins were now attending college but then came the bad news. Their brother had been declared missing in action after an operation.
All they were told is that their brother had gone missing and he probably died a hero.
The brother’s knew their brother they were sure he probably would die a hero but something was fishy. Maybe you could call it intuition, gut feeling or blood calling blood but the twins weren't going to give up.
So they attended college and graduated with top marks. Bryan was recruited by the C.I.A and Edward joined the navy as a United states SEAL.
Five years had passed since the disappearance of their brother. Working as a newly appointed agent of the CIA Bryan saw the CIA’s most wanted and on that list was his brother George. He had grown his hair out and had different colored eyes but there was no mistaking that it was him.