" Uaaghhhhh so dark" a wisp of flame ignite in the pitch black mass, " Oh **** is it night time already ? **** I'm so dead as of now!"
" Wait where am I ? and why do i feel so weightless and why can't I - - move, or why Isn't my body responding" thinking to himself but couldn't reach a conclusion as to why he isn't able to move.
" OHHHH ! ! so you are finnaly awake"
".............................?"
Staring at the tunnel of light he was wondering " WTF ! ! is going on ?" sudenly a crack voice behind him said " Get your *** moving kiddo...." Shock by the sudden response he look back to find a wisp of flame glowing behind him, he ask it " Where am i and what is this place ? " the flame response again to his question and said " You are currently in the world of spirits and there are seven path of jugement and keep moving"
He then ask again " idk how to move and why is my body so weightless" then another voice beside the first flame respond to his question and said " you can move by imagining u have legs even though u are a spirit " looking at himself he was just like them a wisp of flame, and then again seeing the tunnel of light he realize, that was the famous [deathdoor] he was going to have to pass inorder to enter the spirits world. The first flame told the others who were new the same thing and that they better remember how they die before passing the gate,
Thinking of what might happen if he couldn't remmebered ......... he shouted at the two wisp of flame asking " So what happen if I can't recall my memory of how I die ? " the two flames both answer in unison " well ur **** m8 they will force u to recall all of it in 0.2 sec which in my vocabulary is u better get working on remmebering or else ur gonna wish u were dead here ! " why would i wish i was dead, isn't recalling memory a good thing i ask, they both said in unison again " think about it how much memeory u have over all ur life and see if u can stand it hitting u at the speed near light forcing u to remember all, personnally i rather die than feel that" now that i understand this, thinking about it the last place i was or what was my name but to no luck did i manage to tap it.......... Sigh -____-
" So I'm **** either way great i just wonder who **** me up this bad that i can't recall even a single memory if I ever find them i will make that person pay tenfold !!!! "
after he complain to himself, an old but ruggid voice speak outloud suddenly grasping the attention of the billions of other spirits. The voice announce that spirit number 2,086,348,896 to proceed toward the hall of registration. then suddenly all the spirits around me started chattering on about what did this person do, i try to concentrate and i manage to hear what they were saying " Well this guy is **** now, i wonder what he did to cause the 7 great beings to have to personnaly call him".
After looking around to try to identify who this person was, i nottice everyone eyes were on me and well now i know im ****. Schock and suprise i was again instructed by the old voice to go left then turn right, and i will be infront of the building where i will meet and old lady who will intruct me further on what to do. Later on after walking for some long *** time i finnaly made it, I saw and old lady and i greeted her she said likewise then told me " Young lad I don't know what you did wrong to anger the 7 Supreme beings of the spirit world but be warn, you will have to confront them and let them make jugments upon you, I advice that you are to be cautious of what you say and how you approach them and it is wise to not anger them ! !'
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Later after the expplanation, he finnaly notice he was the only one in this hall unlike the rest of the other hall that are scram with spirits. He was still wondering, what did you **** up this time to have to meet these horrifying Supreme beings ( author: GJ GZ u fuck up m8 ) ( MC: ;_____; u fucker). The old lady told me to follow Ego who will lead me to the jugment hall where I shall meet the 7 great beings myself. As i follow Ego i nottice these building were so beutifull , made out of Black marble with all kind of gem with gold scale and leaf design on all the wall giving it a majestic sense to the visitor. Finnaly arriving at there destination Ego stop infront of a giant majestic door made out fo the world most valluable materials, he signal me to stop and he started to Knock on the door three times and ask for permissions to speak after he finnish asking and talking he told me i had permission and could go in.
I followed Ego instruction and open the door carefully and hope they were in a good mood and wont smite me to [SMITEREAN], to my supprise i saw seven Supreme Beings with ominous pressure and they were all in a different colours of aura. As advise to show them respect i said my greeting and they said " Welcome young spirit to our world of the spirits and to the hall of registration and jugements" after their greeting I said my thanks . They asked me one question and it was " Do you have any of your memories of how you die or who you are ? " I decided that either tell them the truth that i don't remeber anything or else i might get kill for lying . For some reason they all burst out laughing at my answer and heck I was so confuse, so i thought i just made myself a fool so i ask them why were they laughing at me saying that as I truthfully didn't remmeber. Then a silence break out after the few laughter and i thought you **** up again but they resume laughing again looking at my expression " BUA-HA-HA-HA-HA that was priceless. HO-HO- HA-HA ok well let's not keep it at a stale m8 and tell u what you were here for.
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