First of all, I want to say that I haven't dropped the story. I've been having computer and internet problems over the past few days. I even lost what I had written up till now and I had been going crazy looking for my backup, which I finally found! However, it's one from a month ago so I have to write from scratch again. There will be 3 chapters next week(with a possible 4th as an apology, depends if I get enough time to write it)

On a side note, I would like to ask how you guys are liking the story so far? I know it's kinda been all over the place with the characters changing the way they act and stuff, so I know it can be frustrating or seem out of place(it might be? I'm only an amateur after all)

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Also, I've been thinking of changing the writing style to third person omniscient to get a faster pace at the events and what characters want/think without pov changes. It will also allow me to add things about the past and present that the characters don't know(the myth of the world and details one wouldn't know unless they had been there) instead of being limited by the current Pov's knowledge. Though currently, this is just an idea as I've never written in that point of view so it could be difficult for me.

Your feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks.