Hello all, thank you everyone who's been reading so far, it's been great receiving your comments and feedback. I'd just like to create a thread for people to give suggestions, or just comment on how the story's progressing. This is the first time I've ever really written at anywhere near this rate so I know there's much I might be doing wrong.

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Just comment with anything you want to add, or even any questions you might have. Again, thanks to everybody that's been reading, I hope you continue to do so while I strive to make this story the best I can. Also, chap 8 will be out by friday, but hopefully sooner!