“Holy shits, Erick,” Quilatalap said, grabbing Erick and picking him up, holding him close in a tight hug. “This is so much worse than I thought it would be.”
To say Erick was surprised by the sudden hug was an understatement of the emotions swirling inside of him.
He was mainly really fucking happy. Erick wrapped his arms around Quilatalap’s impressive everything, feeling a warmth in his heart and an airyness in his stomach. A few tears fell; out of joy, fear, and love.
“I thought you hated me.”
Quilatalap lowered to his knees, setting Erick down, and then he rose, and looked away, lost. Without turning back he said, “This is a time of change. Everyone is getting violated in ways they never should be violated. Me. You. The world. The gods and…” His voice trailed off. “I took a [Time Stop] and sat there in the emptiness for a few days after you left the room.”
Erick’s eyes went wide. “Okay? Uh—”
Quilatalap rolled over Erick’s attempt at words, saying, “I learned I missed you a lot. I think I might even love you. But I need a break from world events. I suppose you do, too, but you won’t walk away and I’m not asking you to. I know that whatever minor fight the fairy stopped back in that room would have caused major problems, if it had been allowed to happen, and I know that you stepped away because all of what truly happened was a conversation on how to save the Surface from societal collapse, and that needed to happen with as little war as possible.
“I still hate her utterly, but I am not naturally a hateful person, and I don’t want to be. I just don’t want to be around her at all, and since you will continue to be around her…” Quilatalap said, “I don’t know what I’m saying, Erick, except that I’m not moving into your house, and you’re not moving into mine. I would like it if everything else remained the same, except I won’t go out in the public eye anymore, and will be taking steps to ensure that no one can find me except you.”
Ah.
Not a break up?
Confusion swirled, and settled. Erick saw that Quilatalap’s words of ‘forgiveness’ for what Fairy Moon had done and what Erick had done in response were a shield for his own psyche, so that he could pretend that everything was okay. He still blamed Erick a lot, knew that it was wrong to blame him, did so anyway, while also knowing that the real problem was Fairy Moon, and she was never going to change.
Erick tried to get a grip on what he was seeing. All he could say, though, was, “So you’ll… hide in the library?”
“Or whatever dungeon Melemizargo saddles you with, if that is okay with you. I think he means to place the one downstairs in your care. I would take over that one.”
Erick saw a lot of Quilatalap in that moment. Too much, for all of Erick’s senses were working overtime, as his heart beat hard. He saw how he could talk Quilatalap out of this. He saw that Quilatalap both wanted to be talked out of this, and how he did not want to be talked out of this. The archlich was a mess, and yet he was as strong-willed as ever. He had come to his decision. It wasn’t a breakup, but the future wouldn’t be as easy as Erick wanted it to be.
There was only one thing Erick could do.
He asked, “Can I talk you out of this? Do you want to be talked out of this? Do you want to move in with me? Or me with you? Like we discussed? I know that you have made your decision, but… I would like to talk some.”
Quilatalap was silent for a moment. And then he said, “I’ll move into the dungeon. I’ll be your Caretaker, if you would have it. Melemizargo has already assured me that she can’t reach me there like she can out here. That was one of the main reasons I went into Ar’Kendrithyst in the first place, Erick. That safety.”
“… Okay. Then… I guess I’m getting that dungeon down there? And I’ll visit you, every night.”
Oh holy shit, did Erick actually want that?
… Sure.
He could try it, for now.
Quilatalap relaxed a fraction. “Thank you.”
Erick nodded, shoving his emotions in a box and leaving them there. He put on a small grin. “So I’m getting that dungeon? I feel we glossed over that?”
Quilatalap gave a sad little grin. “Yes. That’s your dungeon, now. I discovered that in the past few days but… It can take multiple dungeon masters, too. We can go in together later, if you want. That’s what I want, and I hope you do, too.”
“… Honestly, Quilatalap, this is too much for me right now. I’m not going into that dungeon right away. It’ll take me a while.”
Quilatalap didn’t mind that, saying, “That’s fine! I understand you don’t trust the Dark. Normally he’s not very trustworthy. But this is big and— Ah… Let’s just leave all that for another day, then.”
Erick forced a grin. “Yes. Let’s leave all that for another day.”
“So [Book Bolt]!” Quilatalap began, “You don’t have many Bolt spells at all, right?”
Erick looked up his magic, but he was already saying, “Yeah. Not many of those.”
Force Bolt X, instant, long range, 5 MP
A bolt of mana unerringly strikes a target 15 + ½ WIL
Pure Force Beam Bolt, instant, long range, 100 MP
A bolt of pure mana unerringly strikes a target for 250 + 3x WIL
Radiant Bolt, instant, long range, 8 mana
A bolt of Radiance unerringly strikes a target for 25 + WIL damage.
Blood Bolt, instant, long range, 10 mana + Variable
A bolt of your power unerringly strikes a target for Variable damage.
True Plasma Bolt, instant, long range, 50 mana + Variable
A bolt of plasma inexorably strikes a target, imparting 2x Variable heat energy.
High Variables may lead to odd effects.
Inevitable Bolt, instant, long range, 15 mana
A bolt of inexorable Force eventually strikes a target for WIL damage.
Inevitable Bolts, instant, long range, 250 MP
Bolts of inexorable Force each eventually strike a target for WIL damage. 15 bolts.
Ethereal Force Bolt, instant, long range, 10 mana
A bolt of ethereal mana unerringly strikes a target for WIL.
Ethereal Ooze Bolt, instant, long range, 10 mana
A bolt of ethereal ooze inexorably slaps a target for 15 + WIL, and coats them for one minute.
Tangled Bloody Ooze Bolt, instant, long range, 25 + Variable mana
A bolt of ethereal bloody ooze inexorably slaps a target for 3x Variable, then deals constricting damage each second for one minute.
Mercy Bolt, instant, long range, 10 mana.
A bolt of mercy inexorably strikes a target for 15 + WIL.
Air Bolt, instant, long range, 10 mana.
A bolt of air inexorably strikes a target for 15 + WIL. May cause suffocation.
Slowing Bolt, instant, long range, 15 mana + Variable
An ethereal bolt of mist inexorably strikes a target, inflicting Slow for a Variable length of time.
Very high Variable costs may inflict Stop.
Extreme Light Bolt, instant, long range, 50 mana
A bolt of extreme light inexorably strikes a target, causing 2x WIL points of damage to magical structures.
Benevolence Jolt, instant, long range, 7 mana
An ethereal bolt of benevolence inexorably strikes a target for <5x WIL effect>.
After looking over his options, Erick said, “Most mages at my level have Bolts of every flavor, right? I only have 15.”
“15?!” Quilatalap barked a laugh. “That’s about 50 fewer than I imagined you had.”
Erick studied Quilatalap in that moment, probably more than he should have if he wanted to remain secure in his own emotions, to let him do what he needed to do; to work. Quilatalap was both strong, and fragile, and the man hated that part about himself so, so much. Emotional vulnerability was one thing, and Quilatalap was wonderful in that way. But Fairy Moon made him physically vulnerable, and that made him jagged and dangerous.
The Archlich of Necromancy was trying very hard to be softer, right now.
His emotions were still all over the place.
Erick felt that Quilatalap would feel a lot better inside the dungeon, if it truly was as adjustable and protected as Fallopolis and Melemizargo and that black book suggested it would be…
Erick got his head in the game, asking, “So [Editing Bolt]? Mana Alter for Book, and [Force Bolt]? Anything special about the [Force Bolt]? Etherealness, inexorableness? Anything like that?”
Quilatalap nodded, saying, “You can do it either way. Include all of that, and have every [Editing Bolt] you throw have those inherent capabilities, no matter if your original Bolt spells do not. Or make your [Editing Bolt] basic, then mix and match Inexorable and Ethereal from your target combination spells, as needed. [Editing Bolt] is probably too complicated to go for the heightened descriptors, though. I would stick with the original descriptors.”
Erick thought. “There’re few scenarios I can think of where I would want something less powerful in my arsenal, but the basics are good to know, too.”
Quilatalap nodded.
Erick held up a hand and, since he had no Book spells, he channeled [Identify] through his palm. The sound of the most basic Book Magic spell was as complicated this time as the last time Erick had dipped his toes into this particular magic.
Eventually, Erick stopped and asked, “Got a Book spell I can listen to?”
Quilatalap held up his hand and produced a prominence of black magic that sounded like everything and nothing all at once. Like static, but also like a TV station playing in the other room. There were words but they were unintelligible.
“Different one?”
The flare of black magic switched.
Erick listened, then said, “You can put it away. Elemental Book sounds like a telepathic connection to a child— Oh. Is there Book Magic in [Telepathy]?”
“Yes. A minor amount. At its base effect, [Telepathy] is two minds connecting and sharing ideas and images, but there’s some Book Magic in there that allows for the reduction of all of that into words. This reduction vastly increases the mana-to-effect ratio of that magic.”
Erick had once channeled [Telepathy], so he knew what to expect a bit from this next experiment. It was still weird, though. Erick held up a hand, channeled [Telepathy], and listened to the emptiness of the throne room all around, along with a few of his own untempered thoughts, and the complete stillness of Quilatalap. The guy was very controlled right now, not allowing anything to slip out anywhere.
Weird.
[Telepathy] was weird.
Erick cut the spell and tried to use Ophiel to replicate the sounds he had heard, but the sounds were too complicated to copy. Ophiel ended up sounding like several record players playing at the same time, which was not the sound of Elemental Book at all.
He wasn’t getting anywhere with more tests, so Erick decided to just go for it. He took Mana Altering for Elemental Book, combined it with [Force Bolt], and injected the intent to be able to edit any and all of his other Bolt-based spells.
A flicker of power spat out of Erick’s hand and impacted the floor. A box appeared—
Editing Bolt, instant, long range, 10 mana + Variable
A bolt of
— but Erick was more focused on the spell that had just come out of his hand. Before the bolt had struck the ground, Erick saw that the Bolt was actually a swirl of white mana made up of the words ‘BOLT’, in multiple fonts and languages and sizes, from as small as hair, repeating a thousand times, and wrapped like a bundle of thread around itself, to a centimeter tall, and forming the main mana form of the Bolt. It was quite pretty, really.
Erick checked the recent past in the manasphere, to look at the spell more closely, and some of the words in the Bolt had transformed at various points in the spell’s lifespan. ‘Zoom’ was present in the tail section of the spell, while ‘Aim’ was in the front section. When the Bolt hit the ground, all the words had transformed into ‘bam’, along with a scattering of a few exclamation marks.
Erick came back to himself, saying, “It makes a Bolt of words?”
“Words of power, yes.” Quilatalap said, “To use Elemental Book is to view and categorize the world through its information. Remember when I said earlier that Elemental Book makes for crude transformations when used to cause an effect on an object? Well, since all magic is possibility given form, if you use Elemental Book in stationary, solid magics, like [Force Wall], you’ll actually strengthen the wall’s defensive properties, because to use Elemental Book is to solidly, surely, communicate your intent to the mana. Elemental Illusion and Mystical work very well with Book, for that specific reason… As long as you keep the resultant illusion simple and direct.”
More than 20 seconds had passed during Quilatalap’s speaking on Book, which meant another Script Second came around. For this next experiment Erick didn’t want to strike the floor of his throne room, though, so he had an Ophiel conjure a [Fairy Item]; a plain white boulder.
Erick mentally lined up two of his Bolt spells as he cast [Editing Bolt].
A shining star of brilliance rocketed out of Erick’s hand and slammed into the boulder. The boulder didn’t budge, and it didn’t break, either. The faintest scorch mark painted the white boulder, but that was it. There were no words in the Bolt Erick had just fired —he checked— like there had been with [Editing Bolt], and Erick didn’t get another blue box.
Erick hummed to himself, though, because the Bolts he chose to combine didn’t really prove the power of [Editing Bolt] at all.
Quilatalap asked, “What was that one?”
“A [Pure Force Beam Bolt] and a [Radiance Bolt].” Erick said, “Hard to tell the difference between an Edited version, and what would happen if I combined them normally, though. I think I might have to make some Bolt spells specifically for testing.”
It took him a minute, due to the time dilation of the Feast Barrier, but Erick eventually made a few different Bolts.
Fire Bolt, instant, long range, 7 mana
A bolt of fire unerringly strikes a target and splashes in a minor area, lingering on all surfaces for 5 seconds, causing 2x WIL damage per second.
Frozen Bolt, instant, long range, 7 mana
A bolt of frost unerringly strikes a target for 15 damage, inflicting a minor slow for 30 seconds.
Decay Bolt, instant, long range, 18 mana
A bolt of decay unerringly strikes a target and splashes in a minor area, lingering on all surfaces for 30 seconds, causing ½ WIL damage per second.
While he had done that, he and Quilatalap had spoken about basic spells, and how they all combined in weird ways under the influence of Book Magic, and how Book Magic was not ‘word magic’, though some people called it that. Erick asked about the tiny magics that he and Quilatalap never really spoke about, and Quilatalap happily spoke of Bolt and Wall and Bomb and Crash; all the various basic forms of Force Magic.
Erick shot out some weirdly-done [Editing Bolt]s at a target.
Soon, Erick was throwing truly strange combinations. Using his new spells, he managed to make a Bolt of white magic that impacted with the explosion of a tiny fire, spreading droplets of Decaying, freezing mist over a small area. In the very next use of [Editing Bolt], using the same input-Bolts, Erick made a spike of ice that partially turned to snow when it hit, and ignited into white fire.
Soon, Quilatalap said, “Looks like you’re getting the hang of it. Moving on to the Editing spell? If you don’t get it right, there’s the lesser version made with [Force Bomb], instead of [Force Wave]. That one is a lot more unwieldy, though. Some might even call it explosive!”
Erick laughed at the joke.
And Quilatalap smiled.
And then Erick rolled his shoulders, feeling the magic and listening to Elemental Book, sung by Ophiel as soon as Erick asked it to be sung. He listened, and heard nuanced noise. He lined up his full idea. [Force Wave], [Identify], Mana Altering for Elemental Book. All Force becomes Book, categorizing the world all around, but especially a Variable amount of targets, soaking into those items in particular, allowing Erick to move around attributes at will.
Erick had two Ophiel cast two different [Fairy Item] boulders onto the ground in front of him. Both were the same, except for their color. One was red on top, blue on bottom. The other was red on bottom, and blue on top. It would make for a good test.
Then Erick cast.
A pulse of power rolled out of him, suddenly and in every direction. That pulse washed over Ophiels and Quilatalap, and struck the boulders. In that soaking second, Erick saw and understood what he was looking at, and he also imposed his will on what he wanted to change.
The wave of power passed.
One boulder was full-red, the other full-blue.
Erick breathed out, tension passing, as he felt like he had passed a crucial worldly test. If he had needed to wait a day to try again then that would probably mean thousands dead, due to some Gates not going out—
A blue box appeared.
Editing, instant, medium range, 50 mana + Variable
Permanently edit the physical parameters of influenced items.
Erick showed the box to Quilatalap.
“Decent. More importantly, it’s workable. Aurify?”
Erick melded [Editing] with Mana Shaping’s Aurify, and the world turned strange. Everything was not made of words at all, and yet, if Erick focused on anything at all, his mind instantly dissected every little thing he knew about that. He looked at his own hand, and at first, he saw it made of the words ‘hand’, but then as a second passed, Erick saw ‘skin’ and ‘finger’. Another moment caused Erick to recognize his ‘thumb’, to differentiate that one from all the rest. As soon as Erick saw that ‘thumb’ difference, his other fingers changed, listing themselves as ‘index finger’ and all the rest, before Erick looked even closer and saw ‘fingernail’ and ‘cuticle’ and—
A big blue box appeared right in front of his sight.
He read the words, and saw it was the box for [Editing Aura]—
Editing Aura, instant, medium range, 50 mana + Variable per second
Sense reality in a different way, and then edit it, if you can.
— but he also saw, in that blue box, deeper words than he had ever known before. His fingers were labeled simply. But this blue box was bolded in some ineffable way, like someone had taken the very unreality of Erick’s Personal Reality and carved a small truth into the fabric of it all, and the words were all about the spell. [Editing Aura] was so much more than the words there on the box, but the box had done such a good job at describing what Erick was sensing, that he had no idea what he could possibly have done better.
On a whim, Erick opened up several other boxes.
They were all the same. They were all small truths, locked into blue backgrounds and white text, except, of course, the ones that were not blue and white. But even his special spells, like [Perfect Benevolence], with their white boxes, were the way they were due to what it would take to truly describe them.
Erick dismissed the blue boxes, promising himself that he would return to those later, and then he took in the two boulders sitting in front of him. Red on the left, blue on the right. Erick focused his [Editing Aura] focused on those boulders, and Erick understood them as stone and paint, though he knew they were not. They were [Fairy Item]. Erick learned another thing in that moment. [Fairy Item] was good enough to fool [Editing Aura], even when Erick knew what he was looking at.
Erick ignored that foible for the moment.
Erick saw the ‘red’ and the ‘blue’ parameters, like oil sitting atop the stone. With a flex of will, Erick popped that color to the surface. Words flowed through the air, from one rock to the other, like two schools of fish suddenly switching ponds. In a flashing second, the red rock was now blue, and the blue was red.
Erick flicked his power again, trying for something more complicated; for polka dots.
He smiled, as the red rock gained blue dots, and the blue rock gained red dots. The word ‘circle’ even demarcated those dots on both boulders now, like an extra descriptor added, pulled from the ether. He glanced at his mana, and knew that what he had done with the dots likely would have cost a thousand mana or more, but with his Intelligence, Erick barely noticed the 50 mana per second drain of the aura, or the cost of actually using the aura.
Erick blinked away the words of the world, ending his [Editing Aura]. It took a moment for him to come back to his proper mind, for words to stop appearing in his sight… But they weren’t really appearing in his ‘sight’ at all, were they?
“While active… It was like I was the center of a shifting part of the world. I think I defaulted to mana sense, instead of sight, but… hard to say.” Erick said to Quilatalap, “That was one of the trippiest situations I have ever experienced.”
Quilatalap smiled softly. “[Editing Aura] is a strange time, for sure. Did you see all the limitations, though?”
“What I saw was rather simple. Those boulders are [Fairy Item], but that wasn’t present at all. Is that what you mean?”
“Exactly. Book Magic is crude, but powerful in its crudeness. Moving around a [Gate] should be possible, though.”
“Just need to make a spell-eating spell that allows for control over the resultant spell, but not in a way that is a [Teleport Spell] sort of situation, because that’ll bloat the control schemes of the Gates about a hundred times over, considering what Tasar and Archmage’s Rest needed to do to make their t-stations work in the Dark.”
Quilatalap said, “At least you won’t have to worry about duration preservation when it comes to this theoretical spell. That would bloat the mechanisms of it all by a factor of Elemental Time.”
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Erick smiled. “Or I could use [Renew]. Or better yet, have my Renew Network connect to them all.”
Quilatalap stood a fraction straighter. “Ah.” He grinned. “I suppose you could.”
“What other sorts of factors should we account for?”
Quilatalap nodded, then said, “Well… This is something I have been thinking about for a little while now, and now, speaking of [Renew], this is a good time to bring it up.
“I’m not sure this is even possible, but: If you want to use the sort of [Control Gate] spell we devise today offensively, as a more generic [Control Spell] spell, then having a backwards-flowing [Renew] might be useful.
“[Renew] doesn’t allow you to take over ownership of a spell, as far as I know, but if you attack the spell from the other direction, and have your [Control Spell] flicker at the target spell, and have your [Control Spell] adopt the mana signature of the target spell, then you could take over any spell you see. I’m rather sure that you wouldn’t gain near as much actual control over any ongoing magic with as much precision as the caster of that magic, but you could gain some modicum of control. Enough to cancel any magic you wished, at the very least. It would be Tricking Magic but on a much more general scale. [Ultimate Dispel], if you want to give it a name. One spell, 100 mana, cancel any magic out there.”
Erick stood rooted to the spot as he considered all of that.
“… Ah. That’s a problem, then?”
“Just another way to do magic, really.” Quilatalap shrugged. “Might not even work, but theoretically, it sounds like it should. I doubt anyone but a truly great Book Mage would be able to make that magic, though. Or a Wizard. The actual impact on the world will be minimal, but that might change in a good decade or so, when [Renew] goes Open Script and a bunch of people start considering this backwards-[Renew].”
“You’ve been thinking of this for a while?”
Quilatalap shrugged. “This recent foray into Book Magic has me thinking of how [Renew] will interact with that. Particle Magic, too. I’ve tested my own [Editing Aura] a little bit before today and I don’t see the ‘particles’ that I know to be there. It is quite possible that Book Magic is simply too crude to make this sort of [All Canceler] or [All Controller] [Renew]-based spell.” Quilatalap said, “I do know that Book Magic can be used to switch around active spells that you control, even though that is rather difficult… But controlling the spells of others is something else entirely, because the spellwork of others is very much not under your influence, because of the ‘everyone’s mana is different’ problem, but then you have [Renew], which solves that problem. But [Renew] doesn’t allow control of spellwork, either. [Renew] changes one’s own mana to match the mana in the targeted spell… So you’re going to have to do some odd stuff to get that to work backwards. Still. Might be possible.”
Erick thought. “… I’ll consider [All Controller] later. For now, I need [Gate Control] to work on my own [Gate]s.” Erick popped a pair of [Gate]s into the air, each one leading to the other, about a meter apart. For a moment, Erick had wondered if he could [Gate] inside the Feast, but he could; no problem. “Okay then! Let’s see if [Editing Aura] works like it should?”
Quilatalap nodded.
And Erick transformed the world into words.
A minute later, Erick retracted his ‘word sense’ and pondered aloud, “I don’t see anything to grab onto, to switch around the locations of the [Gate]s. Size, shape, location, destination; none of that is visible. All I can really see is a ring of the word ‘Benevolence’ and ‘link’ and ‘gate’ repeated over and over in the lightning ring. I am able to confirm that both [Gate]s are actually separate entities, though, since the specific spiraling of the words is different in both locations. Theoretically, I should be able to move one or the other, but… I don’t see anything to grab onto; to shift.” Erick asked, “What do you see?”
“About the same. This means you need to add some links, through some other method. You were going to put your [Gate]s into proper Gates anyway, so perhaps we can test to see if a Gate can serve as a proper ‘destination’.” Quilatalap said, “And yet… With this step, I think we might have discovered a cliff, and not a simple step— Ah. I know. Let’s pull back a fraction and you can try Editing some [Force Wall]s around. Those are always anchored properly. Put out a few of them and try moving them around. If you can’t see the anchors in them, then your [Gate] issue is more fundamental.”
Easy enough.
Erick cast another spell that he hadn’t used in a long time, and a lot faster than the current limitations of the Script Second would allow, too. Within a single second, a good ten [Quick Wall]s went up into the air, each of them Shaped into different numbers, 0 through 9. 20 seconds later, Erick was finally able to use [Editing Aura] again.
This time, unlike with [Gate], Erick saw some threads he could pull.
Each [Force Wall] held Force, of course, but here and there were Shapings upon those workings, like matrices of written words woven into the spellwork. With a flicker of intent, Erick shifted around the Shapings he had imposed onto the Walls, transforming one number to another, shifting around the 3 and the 7, and then the 4 and the 5. With a greater pulse of power, he switched everything back to how it had been before, and then another flicker reversed the order.
Extrapolating from his mana, with his bonuses to cost reduction, it took about 5000 base mana to do all that switching. Only took him 250.
He noticed a problem, though. Here and there the Force structure of the Walls was fraying.
“I think I’ve damaged the spells?”
Quilatalap smiled. “Yes. You have. The result of improper Editing is usually a reduced duration, or the destruction of the spell itself. This is fixable through learning how to better use [Editing], but you can simply fix the damaged spellwork with [Renew]…” He lost his smile. “Probably? Try it and see.”
With his [Editing Aura] still active, Erick had an Ophiel pump some [Renew] into the fraying numbers, and they were repaired fully. The altered Shapings took full hold in their assigned Walls, and the Force solidified once again.
Erick nodded. “A confirmed theory, then. You were worried that a mal-Edited spell wouldn’t be able to come back with [Renew]?”
“Yes. But… I suppose I shouldn’t have been worried about that. Hmm. You probably realize this, but you can’t actually repair spellwork through Book Magic. It’s been tried and failed millions of times before. What you just did with [Renew] continues to amaze.”
Erick smiled. “When I went looking into [Renew] I briefly looked at Book Magic, saw that people had tried this before, and then failed.”
“That’s why I didn’t suggest Book Magic to you at all, back when you asked last year. The Tears of Aloeth worked out, though?”
“It was a good direction to start.”
Quilatalap nodded, thinking.
Erick continued, “Any other suggestions for better learning Book Magic?”
“Quite a lot!”
Quilatalap spoke of spellwork. Erick did tests.
And slowly, wonderfully, Erick felt he was learning more magic, which was great, but also, Quilatalap was healing. Most of that healing had been done out of sight, which Erick understood, but still hurt. Things were not perfect between them. The future looked rocky. But there would be a future, and that was important. Everything could be made better, as long as there was something to be made better, after all, and that included relationships.
Somewhere between tests of Rift spellwork and tests of multiple [Gate]s and roughly-carved Gates that served as little more than anchors, Erick paused.
He turned to Quilatalap. “You said earlier that you might even love me, and I think I love you too. Just thought I should make that clear.”
Quilatalap chuckled, then looked away. He turned back, nodded, and then— He stood straighter. “Oh! You might need to make a tier 2 [Gate] spell that is specifically Editable. Just add some hooks to the base spell. And! You might also need to actually get Gatemaster.”
Erick chuckled. “All good ideas. How to add hooks, though?”
Quilatalap grinned. “I’d love to hear you sing again.”
Erick felt his face heat. “Maybe once I understand how Elemental Book works then I’ll sing a song, but blind creation seems like a bad idea.”
Quilatalap nodded, and the conversation moved on.
- - - -
Erick eventually decided to break from the magic talk, and from Book experiments. He had something he needed to do.
While Quilatalap went back downstairs to rejoin the groups and figure out where he wanted to be in this new world order, besides as a dungeon master, Erick took a moment and put up a Privacy.
It was time to go through some menus with the goal of selecting Gatemaster as one of his new Abilities.
The only problem was that he had to get rid of something else, first, and he wasn’t sure what, except that he didn’t want to get rid of anything at all. He had Phagar on call with the one Ability that didn’t seem too useful anymore, so even if he didn’t ask about Particle Magic spells, that Ability was still useful. The Quest Board was the next option on the chopping block, but that one would still allow him to check out what people were Questing for all around… Which was something Erick hadn’t done in a while, but which he would get to, soon enough.
Anyway!
There, in that private space, inside his throne room, Erick decided he wanted another talk with Rozeta.
It was time to get his boon.
“Hey, Rozeta,” Erick said to the Privacy-filled air. “I’d like to discuss that boon, now.”
Rozeta stepped into the throne room as a white wrought woman in a pantsuit. “This isn’t a safe space to talk, Erick.”
Erick was briefly surprised that she chose to appear in person, but he moved on. “Which interloper is the one to worry about?”
“All of them. Mostly my father, but the fairy is also listening in. Quilatalap’s eyes are acceptable, but I am not happy that all the Shades are also watching.”
“I guess that gets right to the heart of the other matter I wished to discuss… If you don’t trust them, how could you go along with this so fast? What happened to waiting?”
“He offered the universe, and we took it before he could retract his offer. Even if he changes his mind later, he doesn’t actually control the magic that makes these dungeon cores possible. This isn’t a shadeling-situation. This is a Mind Mage situation.”
“The Mind Mages were originally made to kill the world.”
“This is correct. There are ways that this dungeon core business could still go bad. But the Mind Mages were not truly under my father’s control, and neither are the dungeon cores. We believe we can control this situation. Our own meeting with my father started as soon as Fallopolis and the others stepped out of that Dungeon Gate downstairs, and all the world knew what my father had made. Ten months of subjective time, we spent going over this magic. We know the ins and outs of dungeons. The hazards to expect. The good that is possible. We know what we’re doing.”
For a long moment, Erick just thought.
He had some arguments. He had some counterpoints. Mainly, the dungeons all made gate spaces inside the Darkness itself, which Melemizargo still controlled. But there was no point.
“It’s as simple as that, eh?”
“As simple as that.” Rozeta added, “Also, while I’m here: I haven’t gone through all of the changes necessary to implement what you wrote about electromagnetism and magnetospheres and solar winds, but I’ve tested them on smaller scales. And they do work. With that knowledge, I believe I can boost the efficiency of the entire Script by half over. This is a greatness that is almost on level with your creation of Benevolence.
“Almost no one will notice the magnetosphere, though. It will have absolutely no effect on the daily lives of the average person, except for, perhaps, a few very observant astronomers. There might also be some auroras at the poles which will be completely new. I expect them to be pretty, and will likely mess with some controls to ensure as such.
“People will eventually notice those.
“And if they go looking, or if you go telling, people will find out what you have done there, too. You’ve improved the lives of every single person, from here unto eternity, yet again; as you have done before; as I am sure you will do again. I feel I should be surprised that you did this latest miracle through the use of electricity, but really… Looking back at all the connections of your paradoxical life, the connection between [Call Lightning] and Benevolence, this newest change is both surprising, and not surprising at all.” Rozeta said, “You have earned a second Great Boon for this contribution. If I could give you more than that, I would, but a customizable boon is the largest I can do, and now you have two of those waiting for you. Would you like to discuss the first one?”
… Erick had had a plan before he called Rozeta, to ask about his boon. That plan had changed a little now that he could get two boons, but first, he needed to ask some questions.
“Could I get a boon to make me immune to Elemental Fae?”
“Yes. And you should not take it.”
Completely expected. “Why, though?”
“Because then you couldn’t make a [Fairy Banishing] spell. Make that spell and put it in a charm which will automatically cast when you’re targeted by Fae Magic. That’s almost what Quilatalap does, and it would work in most scenarios, but the fairy has quite a lot of sway on him for what he has done and tried to do to Ar’Cosmos back in the Rage Wars.” Rozeta said, “And, those types of spells don’t work as well as they should, because there’s only one Band of Intent for Fairy right now, and the fairy has preeminence over her Element; all lesser Fae Magic breaks in her presence. It still works most of the time, though. Enough to give a Wizard some leverage, if necessary.”
Erick froze. “… That’s possible?”
Rozeta said, “It won’t really work on the one you’re worried about. But when the Bands open up and the worlds further open, we’ll get entirely new fae on Veird. Mostly, they will stay in Ar’Cosmos, and in Fairy. Mostly, the one you’re worried about will lord over all the rest of them, and be way too busy to meddle with mortals. And mostly, a [Fairy Banishing] will be a lot easier once there are multiple Bands of Intent for that Element. I suspect it will become a necessary spell for people like you in the future.
“For they’ll come for you, as you are an ally of that one fairy.
“If you are immune to Fae Magic, you won’t see them coming, and they will find you disgusting and try to end your life. On the other avenue, as an ally of that fairy, and if you are not immune to Fae Magic, all the rest will be utterly polite, as long as you act properly in return.”
“… I will need to work on that magic, then.” Erick moved on. “I’d like a few more Class Ability Slots, if I can get them?”
“I can give you around 10 more, but that’s the limit of what I can do, for I am not actually increasing anything.” Rozeta said, “For others, what you ask would be impossible, for 10 is near the limit a normal soul can handle, and the Script takes a lot of effort to make that possible; 10 points per increased Ability Slot, sort of effort. This bolstering is done to the soul clarity and purpose of a person, in order to increase their capacity for Abilities. For you, as a Wizard with a Truth and your own Element, I am actually removing a limitation to let you have power that is yours by right of might. When you gain multiple cores and eventually ascend to Full Wizard, I imagine that this particular Boon will add yet another 10-ish Class Ability slots, for I’ll make it a variable boon. That increase will happen without us needing to have a conversation about it. If this is what you want, I will make it happen.”
“Uh… You’re a lot more talkative than usual.”
“Timetables are speeding up. Not too fast, I hope. But they are speeding right along, as my father shows that he might have actually regained his sanity. I still cannot believe that the Relevant Entities believe him so easily, and especially Koyabez, but… I cannot become an enemy to all the rest of the Relevant Entities. I must remain impartial.”
That was a lot to take in, and yet completely expected, in hindsight.
Erick said, “I will take the Ability boon.”
“Done. The boon will take 24 hours to fully manifest, so by this time tomorrow you will have 10 more Class Ability Slots.”
Erick felt a tiny pinprick of heartburn in his core as some ephemeral golden fire flickered outward from some hidden, internal space. And then the fire settled down, and began to simply glow. Erick breathed. “Well okay then.”
“For your second Great Boon?”
“Not sure. Wasn’t expecting a second one. Got any suggestions?”
“Automagic accretion, purification, and implantation. Your core will never need to be maintained ever again, and if broken, it will heal. If you accidentally take in unwanted mana, then that will be gradually cleaned away. It will also allow you to make as many extra cores as you wish, and implant those cores with copies of whatever spellwork you wish to put inside of them.” Rozeta said, “This boon won’t accrete for you, but it will make the process near-painless. As a side note, if you give one of these extra cores to a dungeon master copy of yourself, then that dungeon master copy will have access to some of your spellwork.”
“… You want to make copies of me.”
“Absolutely. Yes. This is one of the main reasons that we agreed to the Dungeon Core program. Extra saints are always a good thing. You were only part of the consideration, though. For the Relevant Entities, we gain copies of people who will improve the world, while for my father, he gains people who know true magic, and who can spread that knowledge around.”
Erick had no idea how he felt about that.
“It cannot be as simple as that.”
“Correct. Only those that the Relevant Entities and my father approve of will be allowed to empower a dungeon master slime with a core. Right now that list is two people long: you and Quilatalap.”
“… So that means all the rest of them will remain fake people? And he’s okay with making fake people? Fake ‘mes’? Fake… archliches? Assuming I make copies of myself and don’t give them a core… I’m still having trouble with the idea of making more of me.”
“Most dungeon master slimes will be on the level of young [Familiar]s; acting out lives without actually having any. Any dungeon master slimes that gain a core through living long enough and growing enough will have, by definition of ‘real’, become a real person. Any you grant a core to will become real, instantly. This is the same process by which we eventually expect the random person characters to become real, and to then leave their dungeon and seek their lives in the real world.”
Erick scrunched his face. “Is the lack of a core the reason why he felt that everyone was fake, for so long?”
“One of a thousand thousand different reasons, most of which were contradictory with one another.”
“… I’ll take the accretion improvements, then, and…” Erick looked to Rozeta. “I hope you know what you’re doing, because this seems very fast to me.”
“There will be problems, Erick. I hope to have your assistance in solving them.”
“You have it.”
Rozeta smiled a little, full of warmth. “Glad to have it. The accretion boon will take place over the next hour. When you feel secure, try manifesting a core behind your belly button. That’s the general area where second-cores are manifested. Also, your first of 10 more Ability Slots have opened. Got a preference for an Ability?”
“Gatemaster. Got a list of what it actually does, though?”
“Double the effective range of your gate space. Minor improvements to everything gate related.”
“Haaaa.”
“I can give you guesses, but they wouldn’t be any more correct than what you have already received, for that Class Ability truly is unique for everyone who gains it. The ability for [Gate] to withstand movement is a common one, while coming back after being disturbed is another. Allowing for the casting of [Gate] outside of the Script Second is a high possibility, almost guaranteed, while something specific to Benevolence is also assured, but I know not what. I apologize for being quick about this, but is that all, Erick?”
“Yes. Appreciated.”
Rozeta said, “Thank you, Erick, for everything you have done. We are all surely in your debt.”
Rozeta vanished in a flicker of gold fire.
And blue boxes appeared.
Rozeta’s Abilities
Gain extra class ability slots based on your soul’s capacity.
Rozeta’s Accretion
Your core now passively repairs itself. Gaining extra cores is easier. All Script-gained spellwork can now be copied between your cores at will, providing a backup or the perfect fuel for core-magics.
+40 points
A refund for the points you spent on the Class Ability Slot Increase Quest.
+50 points
For your continued contributions to Veird.
May we benefit from your benevolence for a long time to come.
Unexpected!
Erick smiled as he saw the little angle-bracket messages, the second of which was clearly meant for him. He chuckled as he saw the refunded points that he had spent on the Slot Increase Quest, which felt like so long ago. Everything was going so crazy. Weird. Different. Too fast by half, for sure. As Erick shoved 50 points in both Willpower and Focus, for more mana and more throughput, he spared a glance at his new Status, and at a few older parts that he hadn’t looked at in a while.
Erick Flatt
Protean, age 0
Level 65, Class: Particle Mage
Exp: 1.19e15/ 2.77e15
Class: 11/11
Points: 17
HP
14,400/14,400
51,840 per day
MP
29,178/35,160
51,840 per day
Strength
92
+48
[140]
Vitality
91
+48
[139]
Dexterity
92
+48
[140]
Constitution
91
+48
[139]
Perception
103
+48
[151]
Willpower
245
+48
[293]
Focus
245
+48
[293]
Intelligence
104
+48
[152]
Favored Spell Waiting!
Favored Ability waiting!
Favored Ability waiting!
Favored Ability waiting!
Favored Ability waiting!
Particle Mage
Spend 100 mana to discover if a Particle spell is possible, greatly reducing the risk of Errors.
If you witness a Particle spell and you understand it, you may unlock that spell for free.
Major Mana Shaping applies to all Spells. Altering ongoing Auras is considerably easier.
Lesser World Warden
Mana Shield
Your ability to create new Particle Spells is Greatly Increased.
Quest Board
Blood Mana
Light Dedication
Force Savant
Gatemaster
Rozeta’s Recovery
The sum of your Health and Mana Regeneration now applies to both Health and Mana Regeneration.
Immune to Health Fatigue and Mana Exhaustion.
Lesser World Warden
Double resources. Double damage done.
He had three different ‘Rozeta’ Boons now and he was a ‘World Warden’, wasn’t he?
He supposed he was...
Erick was a guardian against… Well. Not ‘the Dark’, but surely against something bad. Wrongheaded decisions made by other people? The slow march of myriad monsters who would consume the world and everyone in it, if they were allowed to proliferate? The insanity of others? Sure. All of that sounded rather correct.
So let’s go fix the problems caused by others.
Hmm.
This is how Kromolok feels most of the time, isn’t it?
It probably was.
- - - -
Shadow’s Feast did not end in a war, or a fight, or any violence at all.
It ended in the collaboration of shadow and light and everything in between. A reincarnated administrator penned a plan for rapid Gate Network expansion across the world in a mad dash to replace the ubiquitous [Teleport]. A priest of the Dark and a Book Mage of metal came up with magics that would ensure the Gate Network remained secure. An archlich spoke with the Culler of Shades and got his own black book of dungeon mastering; he would be venturing inside the portal to House Benevolence’s official dungeon after the Feast was over.
And the Wizard of Benevolence made another few spells, all of which would ensure that what came next would be solid. Secure. Perhaps even better than it was before? Maybe. He still wasn’t comfortable enough with Book Magic to sing any songs to the mana, but that step proved unnecessary. Along with the help of Lapis, Aisha, and Quilatalap, and even a little bit of his new Gatemaster Class Ability, Erick was able to create [Gate Control].
Gate Control, instant, super long range, 5,000 mana
Summon a controlling anima that swallows a gate, allowing for control of a few aspects of that specific gate. Permanent enchantment.
It wasn’t perfect. But it was workable. When cast on a [Gate], Erick could freely flicker around both sides of the [Gate] at will. Erick could make a better version of [Gate Control] later, when the crisis of the loss of [Teleport] wasn’t nearly so immediate. For now, this was good enough.
Aisha was absolutely sure that, with a talk with Stratagold, that they could create a proper Gate Hub runic device that would allow for true Gate security.
As the night came to a close it was time for the gift giving, which ended up being all Erick, and no one else, for no one else had expected the Feast to actually get to this point. Mostly all Erick, anyway.
Fairy Moon announced, “I have given you the gift of no war! A Feast of futures and a time of no-troubles! Invite me again if you wish to repeat this revelry next year, but next year I will have the beginnings of a kingdom of my own kind to contend with, so I will not be offended if I am not offered an invitation. I likely won’t be able to accept, anyway.”
Everyone was perfectly fine with that.
And Erick handed out All-Stat mana-light rings to everyone; not All-Stat personally-enchanted rings. These ones would not work in Ar’Cosmos, but they would work everywhere else. It was a simple thing for Erick to make a whole bunch of those, thanks to [Duplicate], and so he did; In every size, and a lot more than he needed to make, too. The Cooks and servants all got a pair of them, granting them in total +50 to All Stats, but there were still a hundred silver-covered diamond rings left over when the giving was done.
Erick decided that Enforcement would get the extras.
They’d need them in the coming days. In the chaos and tragedy to come, as the whole of Veird changed, as every society, organization, and person, lost the ability to [Teleport]. At least the monsters should be slowly rushing into the dungeons that were already spawning across the world, but that was surely going to be yet another clusterfuck.
And yet...
Erick didn’t want to hope too much, or say too much, but he was secretly happy that the overall power-level of the world was decreasing. Was that a hypocritical thing to say? Well… Yes, it definitely was.
Erick needed power to keep the world together, but no one else needed the power to blow up mountains, or flicker across the world and assassinate whoever they wished. People should be safe in their homes, and not have to worry about blitz-wars, or all of the other shit that [Teleport] supported.
As for the other problem: If the dungeon cores and their experimental-Scripts eventually showed a way for there to be a softer system with less war, less horror, and more hope for a better future, then the cores were good for Veird, too.
- - - -
Erick stood with Quilatalap on the glass-dome roof of the throne room of House Benevolence. Others stood nearby, while most opted to stand on the other domed roofs of the other towers of the House. Outside of the Feast Barrier, the sun was about to crest the horizon. For a few minutes more, though, the sky around the House was a view of deep void and stars, brightness glittering in the darkness, and a depth that was deeper than it had any right to be—
And then the sky shifted.
Erick held Quilatalap’s hand, squeezing gently, and the big guy solidified the embrace, holding tight, both of them breathing deep in preparation for what was to come.
The darkness above began to fracture. The sky broke like the subtle cracking of a mirror. One great line of light suddenly shattered up from the east, where the horizon met the sun, the crack spreading upward and outward. Illusionary nebulae and distant universes broke under the breaking of the night. Erick’s constellations of Nodes broke, too, the false stars vanishing in the light.
And then, like so much broken magic, the darkness broke between the House and the sun, and then shattered completely. The dome of the Feast Barrier was gone.
The sky was twilight and gold as the sun crested the horizon.
A cold northern wind blew into the Gate District, from where shadows still hung in the air. But even those shadows were in retreat. All across the world, the distant sky, the very Edge of the Script, was turning clear again, as Melemizargo pulled his magic away—
Quilatalap suddenly said, “I love you Erick. Come find me when you need a break from the sun.”
And then he bent down and kissed Erick on the lips. The big man tried to pull away, to leave without lingering, but Erick’s hand went to Quilatalap’s face, gently, loving. They lingered in the sun for a moment, and then Quilatalap had to leave. Erick didn’t want him to leave, but they had had this talk, and Quilatalap was going.
Erick whispered, “Love you too, Quilatalap.”
Quilatalap chuckled, a happy, sad sort of sound.
And then he departed, vanishing in a step of shadows.
Erick stood alone on the roof of his throne room.
They’d meet again later. Eventually.
Soon.
But for now, Erick surveyed his land. The House itself was a mess of plants and extra balconies that were not there before, and a bunch of statues of Melemizargo. That was going to be a problem. He looked out into the Gate District. There was a lot of infrastructure out there that would need to change, and additions that would need to happen.
[Telepathy] messages began rolling in, hard and heavy. Demanding. Questioning. Some were furious, but they didn’t get a chance to be too mad directly toward Erick, for another voice rapidly corralled all the rest.
Poi sent, ‘Welcome back, Erick. The gods spoke to everyone out here already. I understand we’ve got a lot of work to do.’
‘That we do.’