My apologies for making people wait. I’ve been dithering for the last week. I’ve run into several problems with pacing, plot tension, and a few other things. This is the first work of fiction I have ever written, and I’m learning as I go along.
I’ve decided to go back and rewrite the first 18 chapters and re-release them. I can’t continue writing from where I currently am in Chapter 11 without making a number of continuity breaks. That’s the bad news. I’m going to stop putting out new chapters for a couple of months while I rewrite. The good news is I am not abandoning the story.
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I plan to leave the current chapters up and then make a link to the new work when it is ready, hopefully in about two months. Once it is prepared, I will place the new chapters up very rapidly rather than the 1 per week schedule I have been following.
Once adjustments are made the first book should be 20 some chapters long.
Cheers, The author guy