I really like this story idea and think it would be a waste if I continued writing it with so little writing experience.

I had another idea a while ago and decided I would try writing that as my experimental story. I don't expect it to do that well, the goal here is to get more experience.

To be honest I sometimes get an itch for fantasy stuff and it makes it really hard to continue writing a strictly scifi story. So in conclusion I'll be writing both stories at the same time and using what I learn from the new story to improve and support this one.

This book's true home is on another platform. Check it out there for the real experience.

A new chapter is almost done for Apex and I even have the content of the next 5 to 10 ish completely planned.

I'd appreciate it if at least a couple of you could critique the new story and give me pointers on what to work on.

Thanks for reading!