I've been side tracked on both my fictions... I need help to figure out where this story goes as I finish my jam packed schedule of training for a new career. Writer is only a hobby...

Be aware, I do not plan to rewrite the chapters but I need a bit of direction. You may comment on any future characters or events that may help move this story foward. Also, please critique my writing style and let me know if you did find some plot holes or need more description or speech in future chapters or revisions.

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Please comment below for your overburderned troll, Dreslief.