I have rewritten up to Chapter 5, please do check them out. And please tell me how you like them compared to the original story. This time, I am spending more time on understanding characters and their interactions with the goal-oriented yet emotionless mc. I have removed the rushed romance, and am thinking of adding it a little later. Perhaps, there will be no romance, due to the emotionlessness of the mc... but we shall see. perhaps a little character development is in order in the future.
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Please rate my story as one person had rated it 0.5 resulting in the second person's review not being able to bring it higher than 3.5, which is still low, but acceptable to me. Still, I would like to know what you guys think about my novel. The next update will be put up after I have finished 7 chapters rewriting.