Just in time before Halloween! I want to thank all of you guys for your patience and understanding. The revisions for the current chapters of Alpha Agent are finally here. Here's what the changes entail:
- General fixes to typos and spelling errors throughout the story (mostly thanks to you guys). Please continue to point out any more in the comments!
- More hard stats on Michael Cynosa. We finally see Michael's full stats as an agent before the heist.
- An addition in the first few chapters of the series that overtly outlines the ranking system instead of readers having to infer info from character interactions and statements.
- Foreshadowing: Dan's berserk and glare ability are hinted at much earlier on in the series.
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- Alpha Corp's naming scheme for their cities or states are based on colors.
- The city where most of book 1's conflict takes place is now called Amethyst.
- Stat categories are better explained at the beginning of the series.
- A "reflex" stat has been added for Alpha agents.
- Made minor tweaks to hint at how insidious the recruitment process of agents are (mostly applies to Alpha Corp, who are the lesser of the three evils).
- Dan's training before joining Jane's team is finally expanded. Chapters 4-5 have been updated to reflect this.
- Cut some cringe dialogue lol
- Helmet designs finalized. From book 2 and onwards, Dan and his teammates actually wear helmets now!
The next chapters for AA3, the Combat Games arc, will be coming starting November 11th. I still need to sort out character stats and other hard numbers in the first half of the arc.