I wanted to add this to give some information. I said it before, I am not a professional by any means, and one of the reasons I started posting here was so I could get some creativity out, as well as work closer to my own goals, by improving my writing and story telling.

Some great people reached out and gave me some much needed criticism. Somethings I knew and somethings that slip past me. I went back to chapter one Changing it from basically sounding as if someone was taking down notes of a lecture. I believe that this new chapter Shows more, rather then the old one that just tells you. I also think it flows much better. Was it hard? Yeah, a lot harder then just typing what comes to my mind, picturing it myself and telling others about it.

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Is this new chapter perfect? Fuck no, and if try to make it that before posting again. no one will ever read it. So there will be flaws, missteps things readers, and editors will notice that I miss after writing from midnight to six am. But I love it.

I will be leaving this up as well as the old chapters 1-3, so I can look back and remind myself where I started. Maybe give a inspiring writer the confidence to pull the trigger on their own work know we all have to start somewhere.

I appreciate you taking the time to read this. The new chapter 1 will be out at noon cst. I hope you enjoy it and keep coming back to accompany me on this journey!