Authors note: I am back.
I believe I left my story on an actual cliff hanger. So I kinda got lazy and stopped posting. (I was doing final projects and exams at the time... And when I was about to start posting again ... Fallout 4 came out... And then I completely forgot what I was going to do, but just so you know I have got more inspiration after a bit of reading... Plus I keep forgetting the names of the personalities that exist in the MC. )
Further note on story; just to clear up some stuff on the story, the mc technically doesn't take personal action until much much later into the story itself... The black mass which is the "body" of the mc , was depicted as extremely heavy.... Yet it didn't sink below the planet's crust... Which was never explained by me as I tend not to explain things to you (reader) and I leave that empty gap as I don't have a wording to explain my thoughts at the time. Which in some way allows you to fill it in with why you may think or something... Oh god I can't do this {>~<} my brain box on logical communication just went into emergency sleep mode and I can't remember where I was going with this... < This is an example of what happens sometimes. Other time for some I do ok .... But I feel I could do better. Sigh... I had intended for the three presently in control of the mcb to be good, evil, and life... Which sounds weird since there actions may cause confusion which is normal. I'll explain later if I remember. I will b referring to these character's by their first initial for now, until the other's come into play. <*spoiler* example would b - L when talking out loud and (L) when they are talking within I might or probably will change it on days I'm feeling off ... But I will try to b more consistent with my um writing style... Hopefully...
(Note: I eat my own words with a teaspoon of salt and four tablespoons of sugar [ I would like a comment or two to know that people actually read my work >.< ])
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[Story note: this hole is 20 meters in diameter ... Is almost a perfect circle and the depth will be really really deep, k]
Free fall: duration (15 mins)
Falling speed: 1 foot per second (1:1 ratio)
(L).... *smiling full of joy?*
(E) Oh fuck you!!!! Stop enjoying this slow as fall and just drop like a rock...
*speed picks up quickly* { the light from above fades as they fall deeper into the hole, after a moment light starts to shine at the end of this deep hole. The light quickly became orange-ish red}
(E) and stop before you .... Plop!!!!!!!!!
*the body halts inches above molten lava* { the body begins to upright itself}
(E) Sigh... I swear it's like you do that on purpose Life.
(L).....
(E) anyways lets 'see' where we r now... Oh big empty cavern... And somewhere .... There .. Is... A.... Normal ... Entrannnnnnce . There!!!
(L) .... No, .... Life is over dere...
(E) No your not over there... You are right her... Oh ... Never mind... Let's see if there is any 'dead people' around.
(L) Life!!!!
(E) yeah yeah I get it ... You were doing so well for a while, I guess it's ok to just say your name for a bit... Bu....
(L) Life Life Life Life Life LifeLifeLifeLife... LifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLifeLife...
(E) ... Only 25 times per year...
(L).... Wahhhhhhh.... Grrrrrrr....
(E) joking , I was joking ok but keep it to a minimum of 50 times during this planets day cycle.... And for wen ur not doing your routinely repetitive "Life" speech it won't count towards the limit ... Ok?
(L) ........ Hmmmmmmmmm.... [five mins later] .... Fine..... [body floats over the edge of the lava rim, farthest from the 'Enteance' and descends onto solid ground]
(E) lets just get going... Who knows how long before one of them show up... And cause us some extra work...
*Click* *Brrrrrrrrrrrr*
(E) sigh.... Damit.... Fuckin... Turn around slowly and face the possibly angry locals... We don't Wana cause trouble to our new friends ... Right????
-L- Sigh *slowly turns around*
[standing tall is an X-F (Xenophage-Female), wielding a spear like weapon with a tip of blades spinning in two directions in the shape of a drill bit. Then without hesitation attacked just as her target began to turn around]
[inner dialogue/instantaneous decision making]
(E) Is not like I care whats gonna happen next since this isn't gonna damage or hurt us in any form... But for her sake... Let me take over for a bit...
(L)....
(E) you lack restraint... So let me do this... I promise not to kill her ok? Then while I stall her try to get a hold of Good, and see if he's done with that language. And tell him I know it takes a while reading the minds of all life on this rock world but he should b done by now.... And I can't seem to get a hold of him.... It's like he's blocking me or something.... Please Life?
(L) ..........
(E) ugh.... If you give me control you can say Life a 100 times during this planets day cycle....
(L) ... Double.....that
(E) Sigh... Fine, 200:1 (words/per day)
(L) deal... Now is your turn....
(E) remember to get Good before you start having fun ok...
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(L) .... Alright
(E) I guess it's time to be Mr. Miss me for a bit, gotta get serious, then I can have some fun for once...
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[In an instant before the weapon attempted to pierce the target's head, the target just vanished.]
She reacted quickly by pulling back her thrust in mid swing did. A quick retreat.... Which stopped upon bumping into something. Which caused a spine tingling fright, causing her to whip herself around and her weapon in a small but dangerously fast attack. And swoosh* .... Nothing but air. Then that horrible tingling sensation against her back again, and once more she swung as if her very life was on the line... Just air again. The tingling feeling intensified as it traveled down from her spine, starting from her shoulder blades lvl and heading to her hips. But before the feeling reached her mid back she jumped forward, and sprinted as quickly as she could. For what seemed like a moment the sensational tingling stopped but when she slowed down a bit to go around the edge of the lava pit, the tingling came back in force. Not the brutal force but the more touchy tingly feeling, causing her to trip.
Just as she was about to dive head first into lava her tail was yanked... Hard. And as she was being pulled back she dropped her weapon which fell into the lava. The tingling came back even fiercer and more creepily than before... She just stopped... And for a moment her body stopped resisting and began to behave in away she has never experienced. She was almost certain that whatever this unseen enemy was doing wasn't harmful just unsettling and down right harassment, just as she was about to moan, the sensational tingling faded away and a very tired and old sounding voice said, "My lady it was fun while it lasted but I must be going now. Also I apologize for the loss of your tool it was an interesting sight to behold but it isn't quiet enough to catch me of guard... And since I had my way with you I'll leave you a parting gift. But here's a warning for you, my gift is very... Clingy and... Doesn't like to be shared... So decide while you still can..."
And with those ominous last words the presence faded into obscurity, just as it faded away her consciousness sparked forward and the fuzzy pleasant lingering feeling vaporized and then as she quickly got up a wet sensation covered her face. This wetness quickly started tingling like before and was quickly spreading all over her.
And thus once more the maddening sensation clung tightly to her form. And just as she was about to give in it disappeared, leaving her unsatisfied and angry. When she stood up and looked around for the 'gift', there was nothing in her vicinity . After a brief moment of thinking about hear weapon that she lost, the tingling sensation started on the palm of here claws, she looked down to see a greenish brown substance bubble up into the shape of her old spear. But when she attempts to turn on the device the bladed drill bit turns on more quietly so quietly she almost didn't notice it was on, when suddenly the tingling feeling intensified, causing increased feelings of euphoria and satisfaction.
After spending a few moments in this new state, she suddenly remembered her duty and then released the thing in her hand and retreated from it. After distancing herself about 25 to 30 paces, the staff weapon stopped functioning and dissolved into the goopy form it started at, for a while nothing happened. When suddenly the goop started to swirl around faster and faster, until it launched itself at her... She dodges to the right and avoids it, but it stops in mid air right next to her. The goop quickly forms a swirly vortex and continues to give chase as she flees...
The more she tries to flee the faster this thing gets, almost like it had a will of its own. For a while she was successfully avoiding it when suddenly the goop stops for a moment, it then starts to bubble and swirl intensely and then it exploded...
The explosion vaporized the goop into a greenish brown gas... That covered everything in a 150 pace radius instantly, the gas successfully manages to make contact with her. The sensation was there but weak enough not to seriously affect her. But when she tried to flee again the gas held on in the shape a hand. (not human hands)
This hand anchored concentrated the rest of its existence back to its 'master'. The more the gas concentrated the more powerful the tingling got until it consumed her. And that's when a voice from the entrance started chanting a powerful power... The gas feeling the potential threat did what it was meant to do, protect the 'Master' (loved one). It's form covered its master and began to solidify quickly into armor...
As the chanting finished a powerful vortex of energy threatened to throw the AX-F into the lava. But when all seemed lost, the armor glowed an ominous greenish black light causing multiple spike like protrusions to extend from key points. At the tip of each spike a current of energy matching the lights color formed then, just as it was about to do something a secondary chant from beyond the threatening entity finished and then the pool of lava exploded as many molten snake chains swarmed her and grabbed hold. For a moment it seemed like that was the end but one final word was said and the chains pulled the AX-F into the lava pool.