under the rubble of the thin floor that once covered the pit, lay a half dead bandit bleeding and in pain, both his legs where unusable, since the bones in his legs had been crushed by rocks not to mention the injuries to his pelvis. he lay in a pool of his own blood.

Bandit 2 " ugggh faaark so this is how I die huh, I knew I should of gone to a fucking brothel before we left for this trip."

Bandit 2 " huh whats looks like a entrance to something carved out of stone, hahaahah maybe there is gold there then i die a rich bastard."

The bandit pulled out a dagger from a sheath with his left arm, his right arm had become non existent. He bit his lip hard enough that it started bleed and started slice through the flesh that was one apart of his legs, cutting around the shattered bones.

Bandit 2: Ha finally free

The bandit slowly dragged himself over the hard ground towards the opening in the wall carved out of stone. As the bandit crawled in pain as his body got weaker, he was followed by a trail of thick crimson blood that slowly seeped of his missing legs. The had arrived at the opening of the what seemed to be a room covered with strange red marking, in the centre stood a massive white crystal pillar.

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Bandit 2 “mine, mine mine MINE!”

The bandit with his dying breath touched the white crystal leaving a hand print made out of blood, and shortly after his hand fell limp and the life in his eyes had vanished. The white crystal that stood in the middle slowly turned into a light red and started glowing. The room shook and in an instant the crystal has shattered into thousands of pieces piercing everything within the room. Next to the body of a human which had its body pierced with hundreds of little crystal shards lay a limp unconscious elf with salmon hair and russet skin, there lay a blood elf.

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ah ill work on making the chapters longer probably.

Uh does anyone else think my pace is to slow? probs cuz chapters are short it feels slow :/ dont have much time to write heaps.

Would u like slow releases with more or should i keep current pace