After a comment about the end of chapter 16 spoiling chapter 17, I have begun to wonder if I should swop the order of those two chapters. I can see advantages to both orders so I have set up this pole to see what other people think. If people like the idea of switching the order, I will swap the contents and titles of 16 and 17 before I release chapter 18, which will hopefully be coming out late tomorrow.

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As I am making this extra post anyway, it seems like a good time for a recruitment call. I would be in hearing from anyone who is willing to proofread these chapters before I release them. If anyone is interested they would get to read new chapters before anyone else, get credit at the start of each chapter I post, and have the satisfaction of knowing that they were helping to make this story better. If this sounds interesting to you and you are good at spotting errors, send me a PM. If this post is still up and Chapter 18 is out, it means the position is still open.

While I have given you 2 votes, please only use one of them on the first two choices.