Synopsis
After the destruction of their planet by the brutal Freeman race, the Soynite species must get their revenge and revive their home world.
(UNDERGOING HEAVY EDITING. DON'T POST NEW REVIEWS. I SUGGEST NOT READING 33 UNTIL THE EDITING IS FINISHED. To any old readers of 33, a reread will be necessary when the rewrite is finished. I have an outline for the future chapters, and all of the major plot points of 33 are planned out. Including character deaths, battles, etc. I already know the ending. The outline doesn't include everything that will happen in each chapter, though. Now I just have to actually finish this rewrite and then the novel itself. I make an update on the rewrite once a week. Check below for the current one. Planned word count for 33: five million words.
OCTOBER 16, 2024 UPDATE: I'm currently editing chapter 48. There are 26 more chapters that need to be edited, and then this rewrite is finally finished. I mentioned before that I don't edit past chapters as much as I used to, but yesterday, I made an edit to one of the really early ones. There was a sentence I liked in it, but that I felt was clunky. So, I deleted it. I hope that this rewrite will be worth it. Earlier, I was angry at myself for making 33 be such a bad story in the first place. Sure, I'm improving it, and it's definitely much better than the initial version, but I'm bummed out that 33 is so unknown and unpopular. The little attention it got before I started this rewrite was undeserved. I truly feel that way. The new 33 is so much greater. I made some changes that should be improvements, and some of the changes I made add some realism. Like, some of the characters are more realistic now. I'm making character development not be so sudden. That's one thing I'm having fun writing. And I'm not far from chapter 50. That's when 33 starts getting really good, I think. I'm fond of the 60s and the 70s as well. They're full of bad writing, of course. But the scenes were great as ideas, but the execution was awful. Things like prose need to be improved in those chapters. That's what I plan to do, too. So much work needs to be done. I'm being careful as I write this thing. I don't try to rush it. I remember when I was working on one chapter, and I started to type faster, so I could finish this rewrite quicker. Well, I ended up not being able to focus very well. So I stopped typing faster, did it slower instead. I wrote at my usual pace. I think that's fine, though. I want 33 to be done ASAP, but I'm not in a desperate rush to finish it. I won't mind it if I'm still working on this rewrite in January 2025. Honestly, it's been almost two years anyway. The real disaster will be if this rewrite still isn't finished by 2026. And I tend to forget that I actually have more chapters to write beyond chapter 74. I've been rewriting this story for so long that it feels like there's not even supposed to be a chapter 75 someday. And yet that's the plan. 33 will have hundreds of chapters. And every day I think of the future scenes, the ones I haven't written yet. I can't write them, though. Because I'm stuck editing these crappy, badly written chapters. I have to improve them, make sure they're as great as they can be. It's frustrating work. But it's work I intend to get done. Chapter 75 will come, and then so will the chapters after that, until the final one. Eventually. Have a great day, dear reader.
Table of Contents
- 1Chapter 1: Genesis2024-11-13
- 2Chapter 2: Casualties Happen2024-11-13
- 3Chapter 3: The Future Freeman Leader2024-11-13
- 4Chapter 4: The Uncanny Exchangers2024-11-13
- 5Chapter 5: The Break in the Hall2024-11-13
- 6Chapter 6: Flashforward: The New Great Leader2024-11-13
- 7Chapter 7: Never Grow Up2024-11-13
- 8Chapter 8: Sabrina Sam2024-11-13
- 9Chapter 9: Zoey All2024-11-13
- 10Chapter 10: The Good, the Bad, and the Whisper2024-11-13
- 11Chapter 11: Lena Fly, the Best High2024-11-13
- 12Chapter 12: Saving Zoey2024-11-13
- 13Chapter 13: This Better Be Urgent2024-11-13
- 14Chapter 14: One Down2024-11-13
- 15Chapter 15: Summer Locket2024-11-13
- 16Chapter 16: The Baby Kidnapper2024-11-13
- 17Chapter 17: Sinister2024-11-13
- 18Chapter 18: With Former Highs Like These, Who Needs Enemies?2024-11-13
- 19Chapter 19: Jill Key2024-11-13
- 20Chapter 20: The Safe Man2024-11-13
- 21Chapter 21: Prelude to the Truth2024-11-13
- 22Chapter 22: The Truth2024-11-13
- 23Chapter 23: Have Fun with Motherhood2024-11-13
- 24Chapter 24: Five Words2024-11-13
- 25Chapter 25: Lena and Hailey Bond2024-11-13
- 26Chapter 26: Broken Toys2024-11-13
- 27Chapter 27: Mother Misty2024-11-13
- 28Chapter 28: Blessed Are the Meek2024-11-13
- 29Chapter 29: Boone Windsore2024-11-13
- 30Chapter 30: Boone's New Family2024-11-13
- 31Chapter 31: The Big Man2024-11-13
- 32Chapter 32: Misty Said, Crammer Said2024-11-13
- 33Chapter 33: Zodiac Angel2024-11-13
- 34Chapter 34: Modern Zoey2024-11-13
- 35Chapter 35: A New Day2024-11-13
- 36Chapter 36: They Seem Like Good People2024-11-13
- 37Chapter 37: Kneel For Your High2024-11-13
- 38Chapter 38: Finding Jill2024-11-13
- 39Chapter 39: Where Were You?2024-11-13
- 40Chapter 40: Earthly Tent2024-11-13
- 41Chapter 41: You're Great2024-11-13
- 42Chapter 42: The Angel of Death2024-11-13
- 43Chapter 43: The Discussion About Ben2024-11-13
- 44Chapter 44: Identity2024-11-13
- 45Chapter 45: A Reunion of Spouses2024-11-13
- 46Chapter 46: The Killing Intent Also Rises2024-11-13
- 47Chapter 47: The Slingshot and the Fallen Father2024-11-13
- 48Chapter 48: Who Are Weary and Burdened2024-11-13
- 49Chapter 49: The Windsore Effect2024-11-13
- 50Chapter 50: The Lena Killer2024-11-13
- 51Chapter 51: The Fifth Child2024-11-13
- 52Chapter 52: Sinister Sacrifice2024-11-13
- 53Chapter 53: Her Hero2024-11-13
- 54Chapter 54: A New Session of Debate2024-11-13
- 55Chapter 55: The Good Uncle2024-11-13
- 56Chapter 56: No Good Nick2024-11-13
- 57Chapter 57: Awesome Moment of Crowning2024-11-13
- 58Chapter 58: Let Not Your Heart Be Troubled2024-11-13
- 59Chapter 59: The Seventh2024-11-13
- 60Chapter 60: Back to the Throne Room2024-11-13
- 61Chapter 61: Hero or Tyrant?2024-11-13
- 62Chapter 62: The Throne Sitter2024-11-13
- 63Chapter 63: Lena and Hailey Bond Again2024-11-13
- 64Chapter 64: Dining and Discussing2024-11-13
- 65Chapter 65: We Need to Warn Her2024-11-13
- 66Chapter 66: Her Bloodhound2024-11-13
- 67Chapter 67: A Fine Night of Farewells2024-11-13
- 68Chapter 68: The Play and the Christine Cross2024-11-13
- 69Chapter 69: Zoey and Zodiac Meet Again2024-11-13
- 70Chapter 70: Misty's Visitor2024-11-13
- 71Chapter 71: Mother of Highs2024-11-13
- 72Chapter 72: The Cowardly Exchanger2024-11-13
- 73Chapter 73: The Broken Majestic2024-11-13
- 74Chapter 74: Anne Will Be Your Killer2024-11-13