im back !
so a few people liked it .
good enough for me
i will write a another chapter. please help me if you can and want it. that would be great !
this can be done by help me with the grammar any many more because i do suck at writing but not so much at thinking .( i think) (by the way i will change somethings, some for the better i hope)
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------[table]you get the blessing from GOD Hekayou get the blessing from GOD Lughyou get the blessing from GOD Chronosyou get the blessing from GOD AresDavid [ huh? whats this ?]
GOD ??? hello David this must freak you out.
but don't worry this normal in this world.
a few friends blessed you, you lucky dog!
be sure to do funny stuff
you get the blessing from THE ONE GOD ???
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David [ what the actual f*ck is this?]
David [ and where am i ?]
David [ i feel tired , i think i'm gonna sleep]
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nine months later.
David [ WHAT IS THIS IS SO TIGHT, I SEE SOME LIGHT .
David [ IT FEELS SO WRONG!!! I WILL REMEMBER THIS FOR EVER . F*CK MY LIFE ALREADY]
David [QUES THAT MY NEW DAD , DO THAT ALREADY FUUUUUUU
- the midwive gave David to a man -
???: it's a girl !
David [ NO NOT A GIRLS BODY IM GONNA KILL THAT GOD ]
David : cry noise .
- the men give the new born girl to his wife-
??? : Jerul it's a boy !! It is just tiny, look again.
Jerul : he you are right!
David [ few so not a girl ? yes thank you god!
- the cry noise stops-
Jerul : look Mimmon he is a stong child
- trows the NEW BORN CHILD IN THE AIR- < joostieh dad is sure crazy>
David [ WAAAA DAD IS CRAZY]
Mimmon : Jerul give him to me!
Mimmon : GET OUT!! YOU DON'T TROW A CHILD IN THE AIR !!
Jerul : but honny i just wanted to know if he is strong!
- Mimmon looks at Jerul with a look that the most strongest man to get scared-
Jerul : im going.
Mimmon : hi sweety, i am your new mommy.