In the far future, humanity, among other races, Including various species have colonized countless planets throughout the galaxy. Among these planets is Avealon. A beautiful and idyllic world that Is home to a diverse and thriving population. But all is not well on Avealon. A group of rebels, known as The Eclipses, seeks to overthrow the government and take control of the planet. The Eclipses are made up of former government officials and powerful business leaders who believe they know what's best for Avalon and its people. As the conflict between The Eclipses and the government escalates, the people of Avealon are caught in the middle. Cities are bombed, homes are destroyed, and families are torn apart as the two sides fight for control of the planet. The Eclipses, once seen by the minorities as the heroes fighting for change, are now feared for their ruthless tactics and disregard for civilian casualties. The government, once seen as the protector of Avalon, Is now viewed as corrupt and self-serving. The conflict seems to have no end in sight, as both sides are willing to do whatever it takes to win. Meanwhile, a naive young man named Jack Roger Is fighting on the side of the government. He is a member of an elite Military unit called The Sentinels, tasked with defending Avealon and its people from The Eclipses' attacks. But as the war drags on, Jack begins to see the futility of their efforts and the cost of the conflict on the people of Avealon. With the future of Avealon at stake, Jack embarks on a dangerous mission to travel back in time and prevent The Eclipses from ever coming to power. But as he navigates treacherous alliances and the perils of time travel, Jack realizes that the past may be just as dangerous as the present. In the midst of this, Jack must also confront his own inner demons and the secrets of his past. It's not my first time writing, but I can say with confidence, that I'm a newbie. Thus, even with the major help that I have been given, I also want you guys to tell me If there are any grammar errors, or something In this story that hasn't been explained yet, or any of the sort. Thank you In advance.