The mind may crumble,the spirit may break, the body may rot and turn to ash. BUT THE SOUL IS IMMORTAL UNBREAKABLE AND POWERFUL.  DESTROY THE CHAINS THAT BOUND YOUR SOUL UNSEAL THE HIDDEN POWER SLEEPING WITH IN! WRECK HAVOC UNDER HELL DESTROY THE EARTH BETWEEN AND PIERCE THE HEAVENS ABOVE!             A man betrayed by the people who he once protect and is one of the few people in his world capable of harnessing the power resting inside his own soul, dies after helping freeing the enslave race's. He though that that was the end, not knowing that it was just the beginning!          Hi! Guys. This is my first story that I've ever written.              So I hope that you could help me improve by giving me advice and by criticizing my work.  Also could you kindly or brutally point out my wrongs like wrong spellings or grammar if you have the time or energy to do so! Thanks!