A short story my friend and I are making, first time making a story, suggestions are welcome. (English not my first language) In the edge of Peridot Fields… Thump Thump Thump. Footsteps dominated the array of noises displayed in the area. In the land of Shard, anything can happen. A frog can grow to sizes half the height of humans. Tortoise are faster than a full grown man. The humans can barely survive at this province of Shard. With no leaders to organize people, you can betrayal is an everyday occurrence, so trust was not in abundance. Even though survival seems unlikely, hope still lives among us, and we can not give up. With a population of under 10,000 , a fate that will lead us humans to victory will be widely accepted, no matter how ridiculous it seemed. They are desperate for a solution.