Synopsis
Daniel awakes in a fantasy world with the Servant System. Having negotiated his rebirth with an unknown, glowing figure in the Void Between, Daniel is dismayed by his agonising start in this world. He must level up to survive his crippling starting conditions.
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Book 1 will mostly deal with awakening, getting acquainted to the protagonist, Daniel Gallagher, and the female deuteragonist, Amaryll Traberg, and learning to live in this second life. Daniel must come to terms with his own origins, new norms and customs, and the existence of magic.
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I think my knowledge of English is pretty good vocab- and grammar-wise (not infallible) but I am unsure of my ability to write engaging novels. Also I tend to forget writing words from time to time. As such, any feedback, especially edit suggestions, is appreciated.
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I would like to add that while AI has not written single thing in this story, I do use ChatGPT to make minor fact checks now and again. Naturally, only if I even think of it and I do mostly rely on what it says since it's not really that important. As such, there may be some factual errors. I would be really glad if you point those out to me if you happen to find any.
[Participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]